Overall, I like this avi. I'm not too keen on the yellow skin or the smile with the whiskers(it kind of reminds me of Naruto....) I can add now if you want, though a minor change would be stronger, your choice.
It's still too simple for my taste, or maybe it's just not the style I'm looking for.
RK! Ok, critique time. =3
2 and 3 or the >10 aren't really my favs, but 1, 4, and 5 are awesome.(especially 4) The face tattoo on 1 is a bit weird, but it's growing on me. The horseshoe on 5 is a bit big, though i'm not sure what to recommend to change it to. =/ Maybe fiddle with it? idk It still is awesome in my book and that version will be posted.
As of the general entry, i'm not too much of a fan of the prince of thieves, and possibly remove the nightmare crown, as you can barely see it(and then mostly the tassels). I will say though, that I am digging the red skin, i haven't used that yet, though it flushes the face out. I might recommend some black make up, like case of pietro, gothique harlequin, or la commedia(just to name some options off the top of my head).((btw, it's not as clutterfck as you think it looks. =3))
I love this avi! The layering is gorgeous. The only thing I'm not a huge fan of is the tiara piece, it seems to distract from the cohesion. I'd recommend some sort of golden necklace or chest piece rather than the head, as it has gold entwined, or both, as you can change it and have 1 more item. ^_^
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