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 Posted: Tue Apr 06, 2010 9:21 pm
Also i type/write a totally diffrent way when i write and last time i checked this is a WEBSITE. A completly diffrent thing than a book. Here i just type down my thoughts......
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Posted: Tue Apr 06, 2010 9:28 pm
What are you talking about? I can name about 10 other people that type just as worst(no offense). What about what you said huh? You type the same as i do so, Why dont you throw in a period or so once in a while and maybe YOU can earn some respect....
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Posted: Tue Apr 06, 2010 9:31 pm
I'm a moron for critiquing you the way a professional editor would?
Fine, continue to type this way on 'just a website' and see how your skills stay sluggish. Don't ever attempt to get anything published though, your slacking will show.
A real writer and someone who was serious about getting anything published would take any opportunity to practice their typing / writing skills. .:IN THE SHADOWS:.
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Posted: Tue Apr 06, 2010 9:33 pm
st96ss What are you talking about? I can name about 10 other people that type as worst (no offense). What about what you said, huh? You type the same as I do, so, why don't you throw in a period or so once in a while and maybe YOU can earn some respect....
I edited this.
I understand if you're still 14, but try to practice proper grammar even on Gaia- people won't get onto your case about not being able to type right... sad And it will only strengthen your abilities to write- so when you DO want to write an amazing story- you will have the skills. 
Bleh. I have work in the morning. Night all~ <3
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Posted: Tue Apr 06, 2010 9:41 pm
Herod Hey I know it isn't really my place to say anything, but shouldn't this conversation be had over private message?
Quite possibly. I'm sorry, Herod. Forgive me? ;w;
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Posted: Tue Apr 06, 2010 9:43 pm
Ciyana I'm a moron for critiquing you the way a professional editor would?
Fine, continue to type this way on 'just a website' and see how your skills stay sluggish. Don't ever attempt to get anything published though, your slacking will show.
A real writer and someone who was serious about getting anything published would take any opportunity to practice their typing / writing skills. .:IN THE SHADOWS:. Your right,(bet you got a kick out of that) im wrong, happy? so please stop talking nonsense and bother me for something i already know.......And isn't there other ways to put what you said into a nicer way?
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Posted: Tue Apr 06, 2010 9:44 pm
[Gidget] Herod Hey I know it isn't really my place to say anything, but shouldn't this conversation be had over private message?
Quite possibly. I'm sorry, Herod. Forgive me? C:
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Posted: Tue Apr 06, 2010 9:47 pm
Herod [Gidget] Herod Hey I know it isn't really my place to say anything, but shouldn't this conversation be had over private message?
Quite possibly. I'm sorry, Herod. Forgive me? C:
Oh no- I never blamed you for anything. You have every right to speak your mind, and in reality- I believe you spoke the truth. Again.
Gidgie is sorreh. D:
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Posted: Tue Apr 06, 2010 9:47 pm
st96ss Ciyana I'm a moron for critiquing you the way a professional editor would?
Fine, continue to type this way on 'just a website' and see how your skills stay sluggish. Don't ever attempt to get anything published though, your slacking will show.
A real writer and someone who was serious about getting anything published would take any opportunity to practice their typing / writing skills. .:IN THE SHADOWS:. Your right,(bet you got a kick out of that) im wrong, happy? so please stop talking nonsense and bother me for something i already know.......And isn't there other ways to put what you said into a nicer way? No sorry I don't give you a pair of rose tinted glasses before I critique. Especially when you could have asked me to elaborate on my first post rather then to tell me to STFU.
Then again I'm 21 and work in the real world, where teachers no longer spoon feed you.
Now if you'll excuse me I have my fulltime job to get to in the morning so an attempt at sleep is now required. .:HEARTLESS SHAPESHIFTER:.
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Posted: Tue Apr 06, 2010 9:59 pm
[Gidget] Herod [Gidget] Herod Hey I know it isn't really my place to say anything, but shouldn't this conversation be had over private message?
Quite possibly. I'm sorry, Herod. Forgive me? C:
Oh no- I never blamed you for anything. You have every right to speak your mind, and in reality- I believe you spoke the truth. Again.
Gidgie is sorreh. D:
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Posted: Tue Apr 06, 2010 10:05 pm
Herod [Gidget] Herod [Gidget] Herod Hey I know it isn't really my place to say anything, but shouldn't this conversation be had over private message?
Quite possibly. I'm sorry, Herod. Forgive me? C:
Oh no- I never blamed you for anything. You have every right to speak your mind, and in reality- I believe you spoke the truth. Again.
Gidgie is sorreh. D:
Totally. C:
Friends! Yay!
-Sings some strange song about friendship and making the world go round with rainbows and unicorns-
-And shortly after she's sniped for such a retarded song.-
I must retreat now. xD Night, Herod~
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Posted: Tue Apr 06, 2010 10:13 pm
I am very sorry for what i said. If you all could forgive me then thanks!
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Posted: Wed Apr 07, 2010 7:08 am
She is a vice captain for a reason, I made it her job to keep up with peoples spelling and grammar. I don’t care for excuses the basics are commonsense you don’t need to use spell check to use basic grammar your just being lazy. If you had made any sort of effort you wouldn’t be getting lectured, it doesn’t take spell check to capitalize the beginning of a sentence. At this point just saying your sorry isn’t going to cut it, edit that post.
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Posted: Wed Apr 07, 2010 10:31 am
should I worry about this?
- Asks in a whisper -
I mean, I have absolutely clear that I dont have a legendary perfect english grammar lol
- Apparently terrified by Ciyana, thinking eight times before deciding to rolplay on lit forums -
The good part is that in Spanish, I'm the one that gives constructive criticism when I can lol.
- changing the Topic -
Byyyyyyyyy the way, guess what!!
Im writing a book and Im looking for publication!!!
Is not about anime or manga whee , I'm excited because this is a promising story
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Kirie BlackDiamond Vice Captain
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