Liliya Volkov ◇ Gospel: The dead have no unified voice to call their own, they are composed of many people from many different walks of life. This tends to become a rather annoying hurdle for priests or priestesses when attempting to commune with the long dead and ease their souls to rest. To Liliya she doesn't listen to the words spirits speak, she instead resonates with the spirits and listens to how they speak to understand the often garbled words. This resonance comes from the period of time in her life where she was long dead inside. Crawling as an empty in a spirit enriched environment of her monastery. When a spirit speaks to her she can understand them clear as day even if all they had managed to speak was a couple of broken grunts. For some strange reason the flickering flame that is her soul allows for the spirits to understand her as well. This transcendence of language extends even into the physical world to creatures filled to the brim with spiritual essence; however physical beings are unable to understand her if they don't speak the tongue she does. ◇ Spirit Healer: For an admittedly short period of time Liliya was the Head Priestess of her monastery, a position she achieved at a remarkably young age through her natural affinity for healing the damaged souls of the living and the dead. This ritual healing expertise allows for her to create [2] custom healing techniques that must relate to the healing of the souls, a souls energy such as chakra, or the psyche. A rather cruel joke played on her by the heavens as while she has such an extreme aptitude for healing the souls of others she is unable to heal the damage done to her own.
Nina Hojo ◇ Blood Waltz: She has always been the solitary sort choosing to be alone or only with the target of her affections. This way of going about life extended into her tendencies as a predator. She spends her nights of hunger going out of her way just to provide a one on one encounter with her prey. This is due to her obsessive tendencies wanting her prey and its love all to herself. During a one on one combat encounter all of Nina's physical based techniques, such as bukijutsu, will be treated as a [⅛] rank stronger. This effect immediately wears off the moment a third person enters the encounter whether ally or foe matters not and will remain ineffective until it returns to a one on one. ◇ Cuttlefish : Nina has many Hojo aspects that allow for her to blend in with her foster clan. The True Ancestor aspect of her heritage however gave her one key difference that allowed her to blend in anywhere... as long as it has water. Perhaps it was her predatorial blood giving her a way of picking off the masters of water without anyone being the wiser. While completely submerged in a body of water, artificial or natural, allows for the faux squid to activate a type of optical camouflage that turns her entire being invisible. This is only a visual change, she will still make sound and anyone with a fantastic sniffer could track her down. It has no resistance to being tracked via ninjutsu.
PA's from bloodline disciplines going away and being replaced with a PA pertaining to the bloodline.
Takira Hekireki ◇ Oppression: Takira had spent a lifetime dominating the lower reaches of Lightning with her power over iron. This iron clad defense and offense was far from the full extent of control she held over metal instead it was just the type of metal she felt a stronger connection with. She was instead born with the ability to control two different metal composites with her magnetic field. Something she rarely relieved unless she found herself well in over her head. A final trump card if you will. She gains access to the Paramagnetic tree of her bloodline in addition to her base of Ferromagnetic.
Liliya Volkov ◇ Shepard: Liliya is a kind soul who would rather talk down an escalation of a conflict rather then resorting to trivial violence. As a result of this she finds it easier then others to utilize her bloodline for the act of defense. When using Shōton in a defensive manner the crystals produced will be [1] rank sturdier then its base, as if the mother Gaia was blessing them.
Nina Hojo ◇ Lover's Embrace: Nina has a rather unique connection to the essence all True Ancestor's feed on. To her scrambled mess of a mind she perceives the act of Feeding on humans as a more intimate experience. Rather then draining people as sustenance she feeds as a way of greedily taking the self of a person. She is an emotion druggy in more then one sense of the word. This warped feeding mentality corrupts Kyūji [Feeding] and empowers it. When using C-S rank feeding not only does the target get weakened but the missing strength will find itself flowing through the Nina's body. The stat boost gained is equal to the stat ranks lost by the victim and will last for [10] posts. This has a slight side effect of causing the faux Hojo to take on personality quirks of the victim as well whether this is because of feeding or because of the girls mind is unknown.
Posted: Wed Jan 09, 2019 9:50 am
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Kirra Yamata
Just a quick note, though: You still have [1] PA, [1] Skill Point, and [2] Proficiency Points unused. Make sure to assign them before D-rank. Otherwise, your'e good!
Greater Pa's Baranara Nanabara: ♣ Anthem of Assertion: In direct opposition of auras that would otherwise induce fear and terror Baranara's presence is one that has developed a method of leading through allegiance that seems to rock an individuals core inspiring feelings of faith and hope even in hopeless situations. So long as Baranara himself remains standing and isn't in a position of weakness, he exerts a commanding presence bolstering allies increasing the strength of their techniques by [1/2]-rank and inspiring confidence whilst subduing their fears temporarily.
♣ Pariah of Potassium: Baranara's potassium levels are always high thus his internal sodium-potassium pump always keeps his nerve action high and his reflexes sharp. His blood inadvertently like the rest of him tastes like bananas, and it's with these high levels of potassium he has become immune to natural cramping. As to what it does mechanically when it comes to reaction times, it increases the speed of physical techniques by [1]-rank but only those used offensively and defensively excluding evasively. Touch-based Genjutsu and Techniques that affect the nervous system directly are additionally treated as one rank higher against him. Bloop/Clio ♠ Predatory Evolution: Bloop can rearrange her form to envelop a typically dead target. {Living targets are difficult if not impossible due to resistance resulting in severe pain.} The target's body is then 'consumed' and bloop gains a minor understanding of the creatures life and habits. If the body was a previous RPC bloop gains [5] of their techniques as 'Nise' replications assuming she has appropriate slots to do so. Some techniques may not fall under replication based on the typical restrictions of [I Who Learns]. When 'consuming' creatures and various other beings Bloop gains [1] ability determined by moderation that pertained to that particular creature as an emulatable technique that doesn't need a slot. In some instances, where there is no notable applicable ability it may grant a passive [1/2] or more attribute increase decided by moderation or even nothing in some cases.
♠ AmalgaMake: In the same method she uses for Predatory evolution after enveloping something it can be stored inside her body. When something else is introduced like a blender up to two things inside can be 'fused' and 'spat' back out as a combination. Ice + A Sword as an example would make a cold sword made of ice, but seeing as its now made of ice it's not really quite functional as a sword anymore as it would start melting. A sword+axe would make a sword axe. A bottle + a liquid = a bottle filled with said liquid or a bottle-shaped liquid that would likely disperse not being solid. Frankensteinian creations combine two attributes of already existing things and make them one thing. They're no stronger than their original counterparts nor do anything their original counterparts couldn't have done on their own separately. AmalgaMake items can't be blended again.
____Minor From Researcher ♠ Thirst for Knowledge: By placing an extremity or part of herself atop something that was written in ink. Bloop can 'consume' the words that were written on it, essentially in a much more rapid form of reading. Since the text is 'consumed' it can be seen as incredibly destructive. But the text can be restored unto the pages again assuming one can convince her to do so which may vary in difficulty. While it simply collects the vocabulary and processes it as reading would it doesn't inherently grant the innate ability to learn from the texts unless its capable of being understood.
Posted: Sat Jan 12, 2019 7:04 am
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Black Fire Lord
Sorry for the wait. Lan is actually going to message you when we have the time; It's been busy the last few days. You can post as your character in the meanwhile, just will be unable to use the arm's abilities for a bit. So keep an eye out for a message from him.
magcookie
Per Lan, you're good~.
NecroPlant
Just a couple limitations I want you to put on Rimuru's Bloop's abilities.
Predatory Evolution: This is fine under the limitation that the target does have to be dead. No living targets. And keep in mind that a lot of consumed creatures will probably give you nothing. Also, what did you mean by 'Nise'? AmalgaMake: So the limit we'd like to be put on this is that items have to digest for at least [1] post before they can be used to make something. Likewise, I'd like to see a cap put on how many materials Bloop can store. Does [20] sound like a fair number?
Dead is good it wasn't really intended to use on anything aside dead. [20] is also good. As for Nise. Nise means fake which is part of the 'I Who Learns' Pa. Bloop has no chakra elements nor can gain one so techniques she learns are fake using ink as the base. So bloop can train fireball jutsu after seeing it but the result is just a fireball made of ink that actually can't burn because it isn't made of fire.
Posted: Sun Jan 13, 2019 10:50 am
As of Lan posting the updated PA's and Pa's that were already fine.
• Curse of the Kaguya: Fenrir placed upon Lilah's arm a curse borne of corruption that twists its shape and manifests into the arm of a Fade. Black and red, made of twisting energies, it is entirely made of Physical Corruption that, when applied to another being whose life has ceased, allows her to consume their energies in her place. You read that right. You see, this curse, while bestowing a benefit, is still a curse of horrible design. When summoning the twisting shape of the Arm it begins to immediately feed upon her physical form, in this case utilizing Stamina instead of Chakra as it absorbs her physical self. This feasts at a rate of ten [10] Stamina per post that it is in existence. When the flesh of a defeated opponent is gripped tight by the hand its body begins to burn with the corruption in the arm, decaying the victim at a rate of ten cubic feet [10] per post. Every victim so digested grants a surge of renewed energy to Lilah, bestowing five [5] points of Chakra and Stamina points, applying to the overall maximum of Lilah's pools. These extra points, which max out at a total of fifty [50], are themselves only temporary, decaying at a rate of five [5] per ten [10] posts that she goes without consuming anything. Additionally, every twenty-five [25] points will bestow an additional temporary point of Power or Agility, decided at the time of obtainment. This comes at a cost, however. If ever the post requirement goes the opposite direction, below zero, she will be given one [1] point of Physical Corruption per five [5] posts that something is not eaten.(edited)
• Kaguya of the Moon: When Lilah has no more energy to pull on other than her own the curse she bears turns instead on her to feast upon. This leaves Physical Corruption in its wake, each time causing the curse to spread and grow, to change and evolve as her suffering does. Due to the length of time, she's had this curse Lilah always has a permanent thirty [30] Physical Corruption which cannot be overcome by Skald Harmonics or any other power. This represents the curse within her, borne for so long that it has become a part of her very being. This leaves her in a predicament as the Corruption begins to grow, with every fifteen [15] points causing a physical change to her being. At a total of forty-five [45] the muscles within her body begin to grow, causing her to become bulkier, more toned and defined. At sixty [60] her irises elongate, granting her the feral gaze of a predator. This grants her a sharper vision that can track motion better, allowing her to pay one [1] rank less in dodging attacks, but not taking them. At seventy-five [75] a tail grows from her posterior, similar in design to a canine beast that allows for balance and rapid change in direction. At the same time, her ears change, growing elongated and pointed to allow for greater depth and range for hearing. Upon reaching a total of ninety [90] Physical corruption a final, full transformation takes place, increasing her agility by four [4] as she drops to four legs and mutates into the beast she was meant to be. Canine in design, though larger than a draft horse, she becomes nothing less than an apex predator ruled by instinct more than thought. While in this form bones may sprout from her flesh to become both offense and defense, but the bones, weak from corruption, all bear a durability of one [1]. For every rank of corruption she, too, gains one [1] point of Power.(edited) tabtab ► It is important to note the drawbacks here. Firstly, corruption isn't earned back by consuming dead beings. As such she will need to find another way to reduce her current Corruption count or she, too, will die upon reaching one hundred [100]. Secondly, every step increases the hunger and desire for the flesh of the dead, and the hesitation to make the living into such sustenance quickly loses traction with her. She will do whatever it takes to consume the further down this road she goes. Secondly, maintaining activity in this form isn't easy, and every post in which she actively engages in combat stresses her body the higher above thirty [30] corruption Lilah is. This is represented by a five [5] Chakra or Stamina cost, whichever is desired, per post per fifteen [15] points gained. If at any time she runs out of chakra or stamina a point of Corruption is instead gained if she continues attempting to move for every post of activity. Otherwise, she will collapse. Note this only happens in combat. In day to day life there is no exertion, and as such, there is no negative. Too, the beast form only limits comprehensive thought while in combat, and as such Lilah is very much herself as a beast if not within combat.
• Kaguya's Blood: Lilah's Kaguya blood runs strong in her, stronger than most other members. As such her freely manipulated bone is harder than normal and has a durability of [3]. Furthermore, the durability of bones manipulated with an ability increased by [1] totaling [6].
• Kaguya's Body: Thanks to Fenrir's constant beatings and her blood, Lilah's body has developed a scaling D-rank durability of [3]. Furthermore, Lilah is able to ignore and resist pain and continue to fight on. No matter the pain she may keep going however this is only for pain. Physical injuries can and will still hold her up, if she breaks her leg she won't be able to use it just like anyone else etc.
• An Unholy Alliance: Lilah seems to be quite in touch with her God Jashin and not only is she heard and sometimes answered more often she is able to access the first faith teir reward instantly, without any followers as she has enough faith on her own for it.
_________Profile || ________Who Are You Name: Ophelia Lea Magnus Age: Fifteen Sex: Female Height: 5'0 Weight: 105 pds Frame: Skinny, curvy Appearance: Same as pic Fears: Death Heights Friends shutting her out Tornados Nasty bugs uggh Personality: Ophelia is a sweet, energetic female who is also indecisive and very kind to her peers. She is a happy-go-lucky type, very bubbly, and lost in her own mind at times due to spacing out. She is not the smartest, and may take some time to think or completely miss a joke; as she's not the quickest thinker. But she's very caring, to the point she will go far to help her friends with any issues they may be facing. But she can also be loud, and crazy hyper at times, playing around even when there's work to do, or while super busy. She loves to make games out of work, to make it a bit more enjoyable for her. Ophelia sort of gets distracted easily, and wanders a bit, just because her curiosity seems to peak a lot. The girl is prone to falling on her face quite a bit, but that comes mostly from her clumsy side, she can be very ditzy. She knows she's not the greatest ninja, but she just wants to be anything other than useless, if she can be of something at all, she's happy. Plus, she's fairly competitive, so she hates to lose.
Ophelia is also a carefree individual who takes care of her friends and enjoys playing around, wishing to see others happy in turn. She does however love to fight, which one might not expect from first glance as she can appear fairly girly. She has a tomboyish side buried deep down, where not too many others have seen. Ophelia has a love for nature and animals, and would risk her life just to save an animal from certain doom, the same could be said about any person falling to as such. She hates to argue, and will usually walk away or even run in order to avoid the conversation further. Because of her empathetic, gentle heart, she never hesitates to help those in need of it despite their personality, problems, race, tribe, or appearance, treating all with warmth and respect. Ophelia tends to joke around a lot, even during the worst of times. It's kind of a bad habit. She's sarcastic as hell, and doesn't take much insults to heart. Ophelia wants to become a protector of some kind to some thing.
________What Are You Rank: E - rank Bloodline: Ukyo Personal Attributes: tab • Because of family heritage and picking up on it while younger, Ophelia can draw faster and learns one bloodline jutsu per post. tab • Through the use of great manipulation towards chakra, the user is allowed +2 custom slots. tab • The Ukyo's blood only works for oil based ink and its immune to water but is vice versa weak to earth.
Chakra Pool: 100 Chakra Materialization: (Optional) Chakra Elements: tab • Wind tab • Earth Stamina Pool: 100 Skills: tab • Drawing [7] Description → Like Sculpting, this skill is for the creation of, and encrypting // decrypting of, charcoal, ink and graphite based artistic projects. Drawings would include runes and fuinjutsu placements, but does not grant the ability to understand the intended purpose of the fuinjutsu. tab • Painting [7] Description → Like Sculpting, this skill is for the creation of, and encrypting // decrypting of, paint based artistic projects. Paintings would include runes and fuinjutsu placements, but does not grant the ability to understand the intended purpose of the fuinjutsu. tab • Proficiencies: tab • Unarmed tab • Offensive or Defensive Unarmed tab • Single Handed Light Weapons tab • Tanto
________What Do You Possess Inventory: tab • Single Handed Light Weapons [Ukyo Mizu] tab • Backpack tab • Pen // Pencil tab •One Person Tent tab • Hairbrush tab •Blue and white kimono tab •Flower Clip tab •Frilly wristband tab •Sparkly necklace tab •White flower flipflops tab •Kunai's tab •Shuriken
________What Do You Know Limitations: [Remove any not needed] Ninjutsu 0/0 // 0/6 Genjutsu 0/0 // 0/2 Bukijutsu Stages 0/0 // 0/2 Taijutsu Stages 0/0 // 0/0 Talents 0/0 Recipes 0/0 Skill Points 0/0 Proficiency Points 0/0
Living Reminder: Takeda has a single cluster of [6] tendrils left within his body from his centuries as a Jiongu. After taking months to adapt to his body, they've resurfaced and melded into his DNA once more. The composition changes depending on the bloodline element he last manipulated. Blood = Thicker, more tentacle-like tendrils. Flexible, with a strong suction-like grip that causes victims to pay an additional [10] stamina to escape when grabbed. Large amounts of blood within Takeda's body causes them to restore in [2] posts when destroyed in any way. Black Steel = Thinner, more spike-like appendages that are more useful for stabbing or pinning targets than anything else. Closer examination would yield that there's a hollow tube within that acts as a travel-route for blood, making these more syringes than spears. These take five posts to recover after being destroyed.
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_________Profile || ________Who Are You Name: Lupus Wood Age: 16 Sex: Male Height: 8'7" Weight: 450lbs Frame: Large, buff/almost like a miniature titan or think humanoid large Qunari. Fears: Losing his comrades, dying alone. excessively high heights (picture Shinjuu tree, not insanely godtier high but pretty friggin high.) Personality: Lupus is a man of comradery, leadership, control and overall intimidation. As a young Stragari warrior, he was a revolutionist; he hated to see the scattered anomalies and destruction of the world around him. As he rose in power from his initial ranking, his focus and influence grew matching his power. He generally doesn't harm his subordinates but he has been known to teach them discipline through a good beating at times if needed. Lupus is very passionate about his subordinates and more importantly his home as a whole. His want to preserve and evolve them which had been continually attacked and broken into upheavals by the small clans around them, many wars and conflicts is something that cannot be matched when it comes to his sheer will. His passion is referred to as "A devoted King, encouraging a downtrodden kingdom." He looks after his allies with great care. He's also known to lead by example, showing his squad how they should act with the utmost amounts of success. Later on there would be little doubt that he would teach them a lesson in a more personal way. He is also, surprisingly, a rather kind man. He is humble, soft spoken and honest when he is actually spoken to personally; however with his appearance, power, prestige and unnaturally deep voice, many people don't have the courage to speak to him very casually.
Lupus when not around his own soldiers acts in an apathetic matter, he always seems serene and indifferent towards other people, even while actually disliking or even hating someone. He is also notably calm, even in battle. He generally acts indifferent to most situations that he is faced with as shown from how easily he is able to come up with plans of action during combat. Due to his life as a Stragari and just being around other people that were barbaric and violent, Lupus is often ruthless in his dealings with people, willing to cut down anyone without a thought if it meant stopping future problems for himself or those he trusts and cares for. Not only this but during battle when enraged he becomes much like an insane barbarian, low growls and angry roars similar to an enraged demon.
Lupus is a calculating, cunning, and incredibly intelligent man. He is able to carefully look past his feelings towards a person or situation and see the real issues at hand. In battle, while his preference is to concoct strategies based on how his opponents move and act, his natural battle instincts are also highly tuned; a direct result of how many battles he'd been through, constantly sparring and fighting to the death with his comrades. He is capable of slashing another person's head off in just an instant, relying only on the instincts gained from his life. However, his care for his friends and the love he holds towards his deceased family drive him to become even stronger; heading towards his goal to be the strongest being alive. In the face of adversity, Lupus has the strange ability to shun all emotions and take on a blank mind, thinking seven or eight steps ahead of his enemy in order to allow him ample time to react accordingly. Coupled with his overwhelming intelligence and skill, his ability to remove all emotion from his mind and persona is one of his greatest assets, allowing him to calmly deal with any enemy or situation. Like his physical appearance shows, Lupus has very high durability, shown in his ability to shrug off harmful things like burns and cuts with ease.
Lupus won’t interrupt arguments or fights unless he feels the need to get personally involved in it; having been raised to always let a person deal with a situation on their own, using their own strength. One of the only things that will make him lose his composure is when a man refuses to use his own strength to settle a situation, relying on others who are weaker than them to deal with it. This always upsets the navy blue-haired man, who believed strength ruled everything, including others. Though he holds this opinion, he would prefer to rarely subjugate other beings to serve him; instead wanting to help guide them, feeling it would be of little use to have servants considering he is able to take care of himself just fine. Alongside this he believes that strength should decide things, he also believed that those who wish to take no part in combat or situations have to make that decision themselves.
Lupus uses a vast Intellectual approach to battle. something that coupled with his physical strength made him quite a foe on the battlefield. Lupus has been molded into a master strategist, tactician, and analyst by his many years of war and combat, having believed that despite being physically strong, one should also be mentally strong during combat. He is frequently the first person to point out or find a weakness in his opponent's abilities or fighting style and exploit them to his advantage. The weakness of this is that in his attempt to understand and come up with a way to defeat his opponent, he tends to find his opponents below him, simply because they showed a lack of intelligence in comparison to himself.
________What Are You Rank: D - rank Bloodline: Oni-clan - Stragari/Ünathias (Lore culture/raceish) Class: Oathkeeper - Samurai/Discipline Personal Attributes: tab • The Power of All in One: Due to his intensive physical training and dislike of most Ninjutsu, he focuses heavily on his stamina and physical prowess, as such his use of chakra and actual pool of chakra suffered. He loses one [1] point in Chakra but gains two [2] points in Power. tab • Voice of the King → Born a natural leader, what many have assumed to be a reborn king from ancient times, Lupus carries about him an aura of stateliness that makes those of lesser personalities believe and trust him easier, in some cases against what reality might tell them. This aura gives his words more credibility, his emotions more force, such that he may shout a command to a raging beast and give it pause. In effect, the Voice of the King grants a natural adjustment to the first impressions any living being he encounters takes. While this never is a forceful effect it might well give others pause, a chance where there may have been none before. tab • First Among Equals → The first to charge, the first to act, the first to fall, Lupus believes that none shall be expected to do that which he himself isn't willing to. This inspiration leaves those who follow him a boost in morale such that others may choose to follow his example. Never a compelling force, Lupus leads by example, and if an NPC or RPC were to follow him into action they will find one of two effects taking place, depending on whichever benefits them more: all skills towards the completion of their current task counting as two [2] points higher, or find that any negative Hazards or Afflictions are reduced in effect by one [1] step. This effect maintains for one [1] post per two [2] experience ranks, to a maximum of three [3] posts at S - rank. tab • Emotional Compromise → A being who believes that emotion has no play in the world of war, Lupus has the mental tenacity to shut down his emotions to keep a cool, level head. This isn't a perfect art, but borne of one emptying one's emotions into a void deep within one's core. In effect, by spending a single activation's worth of time, Lupus may put himself within a frame of mind that helps him keep emotions at a distance. In effect, this grants him a one [1] rank decrease to Enchantment Genjutsu that focuses on effecting emotions specifically, and allow him to completely ignore all pain. While it isn't perfect, it does allow him an easier time to pinpoint those emotions as foreign. tab • Blood of the Royal → A king among his people, Lupus carries through his veins the Blood of the Royal lineage, through this his body underwent a transformation unlike others of the Oni clan. His defenses were higher, his status higher and his will surpassing all. Because of this his natural Oni defenses are increased by half a point, going to [1] damage reduction to Taijutsu and fire Jutsu, however his defense is not all-powerful, after four hits the power of his defense will be reduced to half, or in this case equal to normal Oni. This is reset upon sleeping.
Chakra Pool: 200 Chakra Materialization: Armored 3 headed, 6 armed Asura death god warrior, though only a faint outline starting from a single head for now. Having ranked up to D-rank, his Asura now materializes parts of the chest and ribcage, however no parts of the arm or hands. Chakra Elements: tab • Suiton tab • Doton Stamina Pool: 330 Skills: tab • Mining → 7 tab • Brewing → 10 tab • Drawing → 2 Proficiencies: tab • Single Weapon Combat → Heavy tab • Two Handed Large Weapons → Basic tab • Intensive Weaponry → Two-Handed Weapon w/ One Hand tab • Two Handed Large Weapons → Gunbai → Advanced Training tab • Unarmed Combat → Basic tab • Unarmed Combat → Grappling → Advanced Training tab • Unarmed Combat → Offensive → Advanced Training tab • Unarmed Combat → Defensive → Advanced Training
________What Do You Possess Inventory: tab • Plate Armor tab • One Person Tent tab • Normal Clothing tab • Simple spear - Two-handed large weapons tab • Bedroll tab • Backpack tab • Blanket tab • [3] Peppermint Candy Canes - Doubles Chakra and Stamina recovery speed for [5] posts when eaten. tab • [3] Christmas Cookies - Increases your chakra or stamina pool by [50] for [5] posts when eaten. tab • Makeshift Axe - Tier 0, it's made of sticks and stones roped together, Durability 5 tab • 28 Samehada Scales - Tier 4 material, Disperses chakra tab • 15lbs of iron ore tab • 3 good quality wolf pelts tab • [1] Oiled Waterskin [gift form zuhra] tab • A C-Clamp [Gift from Zuhra] Usugi of the Wind and Waves → An ancient Gunbai of nightmarish origin, Usugi is believed to have been forged in the depths of a temple where the mad priest led hundreds to their deaths in order to provide raw materials for its creation. Whether or not this is true is difficult to say at best, given none were meant to have survived, but the pale white leather that covers the faces of the weapon definitely do look and feel like stretched human flesh. With the steel handle twisted and cast in such a way that it looks like human faces are screaming out from the shaft and the bladded edge of the Gunbai seeming to reflect light in odd, twisted ways it is clear that whatever its origins it was clearly designed for fear. Yet the truly horrific parts come when Usugi is awoken, caused by fifty [50] Chakra or Stamina points being spent as a sacrifice to the thing that guards within. tab → The Howling Shards ► Water and wind, fire, earth and lightning powers controlled by the wielder find their techniques altered thematically when used alongside this weapon. Wind howls with the screams of the dead and damned, with fire morphing into the expressions of those who died in fire. Water is blacker than sin and carries with it the reek of fetid blood while electricity snarles into demonic forms. The earth, tormented by its power, is black and rotted with decay, carrying with it the sweet stench of death. In effect techniques being used inspire a negative effect, a chilling, dark energy that borders the unholy power of corruption. C - ranked Shadow damage is constantly applied alongside the damage of the attacks, something that bypasses Defense and does half again [50% More] more Durability damage than before. This effect lasts for three [3] posts, with an upkeep of 30 Chakra or Stamina per post after. tab → The Crawling Chaos ► Use of this weapon comes at a cost as the mind begins to rot with each post sustaining the evil power of Usagi. For every three [3] posts being used apply one [1] point of Spiritual corruption upon the body. At every ten [10] points of Corruption the body gains an Echo Intrusion affliction. These Intrusions alter the physical body and emotional state of the figure in some way, while providing a bonus in its place. These may be submitted as "custom techniques", though in all cases there is a negative as equal in strength as the positive, and will include physical alterations.
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KateIyn
I'm really sorry for the wait! If I ever forget something like that for more than a couple days please contact me. Sometimes I lose track of my notifications.
Anyway, we still need to fix a couple of things. 1. Archetype: Since you put your points into Power and Agility, it looks like you're taking the Athlete archetype. You can check here for any bonuses you get from that archetype. (Note, the 100 chakra/stamina is your starting pools, not additional)
2. Bloodline Bonus: You also get +2 to your Drawing and Painting skills from being part of the Ukyo clan.
3. Proficiencies: A couple of things here. Firstly, more than one point is never put into a single part of a proficiency. In your case, you have listed Unarmed Combat. Unlocking that category would only take [1] of your [4] proficiency points (you start with 2, and get 2 more from your archetype). That unlocks the ability to use Unarmed attacked at E-rank. You can then put a Proficiency Point into a specific 'weapon', allowing you to spend time in character training it past E-rank. In the case of Unarmed, the 'weapons' are Offensive, Defensive, and Grappling that you can choose from to train further.
Now, with you being an Ukyo, you do start with a tanto as a weapon, but you do not by default get proficiency in this weapon. In order to use the weapon at all with ranked attacks, you would need to invest in Single Handed Light Weapons ([1] PP), and Tanto ([1] PP). So if you want to keep your unarmed training, I'd recommend: 1. Unarmed 2. Offensive or Defensive Unarmed 3. Single Handed Light Weapons 4. Tanto
4. Slots: Where are you getting jutsu slots from? At E-rank, you only start with slots you get from your Archetype and your stats. In the case of Athlete, you get [1] stage of learning for having [4] points in Power, and [1] for [4] points in Agility, then the archetype gives you an additional [2] Stages. You can find more info on the bonuses and how stats work in the link I provided before.
5. Starting Technique: All characters start with a single technique between E and C rank, or up to D rank if you want to start with a custom technique (must be approved). You can start with any technique up to C rank, except techniques you don't have the elements for, and bloodline techniques that don't belong to your bloodline. If you want to start with a bloodline technique, you can only start with your clan's manipulation technique. In the case of Ukyo, that would be Sumi Soujuu (Ink Manipulation).
6. Inventory: Keep in mind this will be all your character has on them, regardless of where you start off in the world, so if you decide you want to start in the wilds instead of a hub, this will be all of your resources without salvaging from the world.
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Tenshuyami
Posted: Mon Feb 25, 2019 8:40 pm
_________Profile || ________Who Are You Name: Ophelia Lea Magnus Age: Fifteen Sex: Female Height: 5'0 Weight: 105 pds Frame: Skinny, curvy Appearance: Same as pic Fears: Death Heights Friends shutting her out Tornados Nasty bugs uggh Personality: Ophelia is a sweet, energetic female who is also indecisive and very kind to her peers. She is a happy-go-lucky type, very bubbly, and lost in her own mind at times due to spacing out. She is not the smartest, and may take some time to think or completely miss a joke; as she's not the quickest thinker. But she's very caring, to the point she will go far to help her friends with any issues they may be facing. But she can also be loud, and crazy hyper at times, playing around even when there's work to do, or while super busy. She loves to make games out of work, to make it a bit more enjoyable for her. Ophelia sort of gets distracted easily, and wanders a bit, just because her curiosity seems to peak a lot. The girl is prone to falling on her face quite a bit, but that comes mostly from her clumsy side, she can be very ditzy. She knows she's not the greatest ninja, but she just wants to be anything other than useless, if she can be of something at all, she's happy. Plus, she's fairly competitive, so she hates to lose.
Ophelia is also a carefree individual who takes care of her friends and enjoys playing around, wishing to see others happy in turn. She does however love to fight, which one might not expect from first glance as she can appear fairly girly. She has a tomboyish side buried deep down, where not too many others have seen. Ophelia has a love for nature and animals, and would risk her life just to save an animal from certain doom, the same could be said about any person falling to as such. She hates to argue, and will usually walk away or even run in order to avoid the conversation further. Because of her empathetic, gentle heart, she never hesitates to help those in need of it despite their personality, problems, race, tribe, or appearance, treating all with warmth and respect. Ophelia tends to joke around a lot, even during the worst of times. It's kind of a bad habit. She's sarcastic as hell, and doesn't take much insults to heart. Ophelia wants to become a protector of some kind to some thing.
________What Are You Rank: E - rank Bloodline: Ukyo Personal Attributes: tab • Because of family heritage and picking up on it while younger, Ophelia can draw faster and learns one bloodline jutsu per post. tab • Through the use of great manipulation towards chakra, the user is allowed +2 custom slots. tab • The Ukyo's blood only works for oil based ink and its immune to water but is vice versa weak to earth.
Chakra Pool: 100 Chakra Materialization: (Optional) Chakra Elements: tab • Wind tab • Earth Stamina Pool: 100 Skills: tab • Drawing [7] Description → Like Sculpting, this skill is for the creation of, and encrypting // decrypting of, charcoal, ink and graphite based artistic projects. Drawings would include runes and fuinjutsu placements, but does not grant the ability to understand the intended purpose of the fuinjutsu. tab • Painting [7] Description → Like Sculpting, this skill is for the creation of, and encrypting // decrypting of, paint based artistic projects. Paintings would include runes and fuinjutsu placements, but does not grant the ability to understand the intended purpose of the fuinjutsu. tab • Proficiencies: tab • Unarmed tab • Offensive or Defensive Unarmed tab • Single Handed Light Weapons tab • Tanto
________What Do You Possess Inventory: tab • Single Handed Light Weapons [Ukyo Mizu] tab • Backpack tab • Pen // Pencil tab •One Person Tent tab • Hairbrush tab •Blue and white kimono tab •Flower Clip tab •Frilly wristband tab •Sparkly necklace tab •White flower flipflops tab •Kunai's tab •Shuriken
________What Do You Know Limitations: [Remove any not needed] Ninjutsu 0/0 // 0/6 Genjutsu 0/0 // 0/2 Bukijutsu Stages 0/0 // 0/2 Taijutsu Stages 0/0 // 0/0 Talents 0/0 Recipes 0/0 Skill Points 0/0 Proficiency Points 0/0
Sorry that my bad too, x3 I tried to fix them, does it look any better? I have no idea about the slots so i apologize. D : But I tried to make edits. I added two on the inventory too, I just didn't know what to add.
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Ningishzida
KateIyn
Just fix a couple more things: Chakra Stat vs Chakra Pool: Sorry for the confusion here. The +100 Chakra listed on the Archetype bonuses refers to your chakra pool, not the chakra stat. The stat would remain a 2, and the pool remains 100. I just put it in the archetype to remind people that they start with 100.
Stat: Again, I apologize for the confusion. Your stats were correct before, and Power and Agility should be [4], not [5]. The stat build you had was equivalent to the Athlete archetype which is why I brought it up.
Slots: You get [2] more stages to put in either Bukijutsu or in Taijutsu thanks to your stats. Likewise, you won't have any Ninjutsu or Genjutsu slots until you get your first class at D-rank.
Proficiencies: You'll have to choose either [Offensive Unarmed] or [Defensive Unarmed] until you get another proficiency point.
Once you decide where you want to start, let me or Lanfaer know and we can post your intro post.
Admixture I - The Jiongu is able to replicate an elemental bloodline that requires two [2] elements by getting one [1] heart for each of the required elements. Under normal circumstances, any bloodline that only requires one [1] element cannot be replicated, and this only grants techniques, not any Passive Traits. Devotion - By spending almost every waking minute perfecting his craft, Jean generates 5 free posts for every week his rper posts with a character. The posts can be used exclusively for crafting tasks. Admixture II - The Jiongu is able to replicate an elemental bloodline [undecided] that requires two [2] elements by getting one [1] heart for each of the required elements. Under normal circumstances, any bloodline that only requires one [1] element cannot be replicated, and this only grants techniques, not any Passive Traits. Admixture III - The Jiongu is able to replicate an elemental bloodline [undecided] that requires two [2] elements by getting one [1] heart for each of the required elements. Under normal circumstances, any bloodline that only requires one [1] element cannot be replicated, and this only grants techniques, not any Passive Traits. Master of all Trades I - Jean raises the maximum limit of a crafting tree to the highest Crafting Tier he can craft. Master of all Trades II - Jean raises the maximum limit of a crafting tree to the highest Crafting Tier he can craft. Master of all Trades III - Jean raises the maximum limit of a crafting tree to the highest Crafting Tier he can craft. Master of all Trades IV - Jean raises the maximum limit of a crafting tree to the highest Crafting Tier he can craft.
Granny2 Greater | 1 Moderate | 1 rewrite and 1 Lesser →• Curse of the Nine Tails: Granny is a benevolent old lady, but foxes aren't known to be vengeful for no reason. It is, quite honestly, a consequence that's quite out of her control, and she really does the best to warn would-be conquerors. If her lands are wrongfully taken out of her hands, a curse falls upon the stolen territory whether or not Granny wants it to. The land begins to attract natural disasters, one after the other, and the result is that half of the crops for the next 10 yields or until Granny reclaims the land, whichever comes first, are at least half rotted. →• A Wonderful Life: By working diligently every day, Granny generates 5 free posts for every week her rper posts. The posts can be used exclusively for gathering tasks. →• Happy Poem: Be it a happy poem or a magical melody, a story becomes more interesting when there are more parts to it. Farms (and their related settlements) claimed by Granny are dedicated to two types of gathering (as opposed to the usual one). NPC production is split between the now two types of gathering and an extra locked material (the third for Granny's farms) of the second type is unlocked/discovered (presumably, the first locked material is of the first type and the second locked material is either or). →• Island of Happiness: There are very few things happier than a very tasty cookie (or any other home cooking). Granny's home cooking is particularly effective in improving the disposition of npcs (also rpcs, but it's not quite fair to have a PA that effects that). →• Tree of Serenity: Granny has a particularly peaceful sense of style. She prefers her abodes to be the soothing, natural sort, with winding, scenic pathways where running and rushing appear out of place. The lands she claims all carry this particular flavor, and consequently, they are great places to recover peace of mind in. Mental corruption is reduced by five [5] points for every two [2] weeks the character remains in a thread claimed by Granny.
Xion 1 Bloodline | 1 Artificer | 2 Greater | 2 Moderate | 1 Lesser →• Devotion I [Bloodline]: -5 chakra to use and upkeep bloodline techniques. →• Mabuki [Reduce Cost I] [Greater]: -5 chakra to use and upkeep Henge • Kongounyoi [Transform • Diamond-Like Hardness] and related techniques. →• Mabuki [Reduce Cost II] [Greater]: -5 chakra to use and upkeep Henge • Kongounyoi [Transform • Diamond-Like Hardness] and related techniques. →• Extra Artifact I [Artificer]: Xion can have and use an additional artifact (Total: 2 artifacts). →• Items User [Basics Middle-Stage] [Moderate]: Xion can refine an already refined item by one extra step, increasing or decreasing one value in the item's description by one [1]. This value cannot be a value that has already been modified. There is no post requirement for refining but it does take several hours in-character and no more than one item can be refined per in-character day. →• Items User [Basics Late-Stage] [Moderate]: Xion can refine two items together, treating one as the base and one as the supplement. One [1] special property of the supplement, mundane (such as perhaps a particularly strong material) or magical (such as the ability to spontaneously combust), are added on to the base, which retains its form for the most part. In short, the base item gains one [1] special property of the supplement item. →• Items User [Basics Peak] [Lesser]: Xion can apply all "Basics" level refining effects to an item in one refining session, taking only several hours of one day as opposed to several hours over several days.
Kagerou 2 Greater | 2 Moderate | 1 Minor →• Kiritani Composure [Greater]: Bearing an almost unnatural ability to remain calm in the face of any situation, Kagerou's composure gives her the ability to regenerate chakra even in the midst of action. Kagerou's chakra regeneration increases by one step. This includes allowing her to regenerate chakra even while using techniques. If she exceeds the maximum listed chakra regeneration, her chakra regeneration increases by 10. →• Kiritani Composure [Greater]: Bearing an almost unnatural ability to remain calm in the face of any situation, Kagerou's composure gives her the ability to regenerate chakra even in the midst of action. Kagerou's chakra regeneration increseases by one step. If she exceeds the maximum listed chakra regeneration, her chakra regeneration increases by 10. →• Trust Me, I'm a Doctor [Moderate]: With a lifetime of medical (and shinobi) education behind her, Kagerou exceeds and surpasses the limitations of many of her peers when it comes to Physician skills. She is unrestricted in the number of different types of Physician skills she can practice, so long as she has the skill points to learn the skill, and can apply all Physician skills she knows for both positive and negative effects, ignoring the labeling required by the Medical Shinobi D-rank disciplines. →• Mind and Body I [Minor]: A sound soul resides in a sound mind and a sound body. To ensure the health of all three, Kagerou must master every aspect of medicine. Kagerou gains +4 Physician skill points. →•Mind and Body II [Minor]: A sound soul resides in a sound mind and a sound body. To ensure the health of all three, Kagerou must master every aspect of medicine. Kagerou gains +4 Physician skill points.
_____________[│║║█║▌][ώ ђ ΦtabȺ я ӘtabӋ Φ ʋ...] tabWho Am I…| Kuchiro "Fang" Mistalune tabHow Old Am I…| 16 tabWhat Sex Am I...| Male tabWhat Do I Look Like...| Long and wild jet black hair, with brown eyes. He has a youthful appearance and the physical kind of build that is earned from training the minimum amount necessary. He tends to wear dark angst heavy attire often with a red or gray pattern in the form of skulls. On his right arm there is the Iwagakure symbol followed by lines that trickle off of it as a tattoo. Each line represents the blood of his closest comrades that he lost. tabWhat Are My People...| Of Irish and Pacific-Islander descent tabWas I Part of a Lineage...| Shakuton - Scorch Release [x] {Application} [✓] tabWhere Am I From...| Iwagakure tabHow Tall Am I...| 5'8'' tabAnd How Heavy...| 144lb tabWhat Frame Am I...| Medium tabWhat Was I to My Home...} Shinobi, Jōnin Commander, Special Operations tabHow Experienced Was I...| Formerly A-Rank | Now E-Rank tabWhat Am I Like...: A cruel and calculating monster of a man, Kuchiro had lived his life forged by the drum of war. A methodical tactical genius, he was able to inspire courage to his soldiers with ease and fear in the hearts of his enemies that would route even the most steadfast heart. His personality can be defined akin to a Machiavellian mind, one that is constantly seeking ways to manipulate those around him in one large political game of chess where the pawns are their hearts. tabWhat Did I Believe In...: "They destroyed the will of stone. So I will pick up the broken pieces and paint them in the blood that remains." tabWhat Do I Fear...:
tab• Defeat tab• Drowning tab• Attachment
tabWhat Are My Strengths...:
tab• Tactics tab• Ninjutsu tab• Sage Jutsu
tabWhat Are My Weaknesses...:
tab• Pride tab• Teamwork tab• Close-Range
_____________[│║║█║▌][ώ ђ Ⱥ ț tabђ Ⱥ ѷ ӘtabӋ Φ ʋtabđ Φ ɳ Ә…] tabWhat Era Am I From...: Era of Madness [x] tabWhen Was I Born...| December 25th tabWhat Have I Experienced...: In the beginning, Fang was a child, but he grew up in a world where his innocence was ripped from him. Having lived in poverty in Iwagakure, his father would often steal from food stands and farming fields in order to secure meals for Fang and his mother. However, one day the Iwa guards caught him and forced him into the military for community service. They enlisted Fang in as a stone soldier as well, since the boy was old enough to fight at 10. The training was extremely difficult; the weight of the will of stone a constant challenge. However, Fang showed promise and quickly rose through the ranks, although it was never too difficult to do so since his superiors died constantly and positions were always available. In his childhood, he developed a friendship with a man named Matsumoto Jin, one whom become his squad-mate and someone whom would be by his side for a lifetime.
As a Chūnin, alongside Matsumoto, Fang engaged a tailed beast. His memory was hazy that night but he believed it possess powers that were beyond anything he could imagine. It took almost all of his chakra and very well-aimed Doton jutsu to keep it from completely destroying the gate and walls of Iwa. It was in this battle, that Fang had lost his sensei, Souchiro Mistalune, the man whom gave him his last name and the meaning of family. In his dying breath, Souchiro cried, "Dare not forget the will of stone is eternal, this death is not the end for me. My legend will be in the ground you walk upon." Matsumoto and Fang could not grieve for his loss for the village would be attacked for days by the Leafies whom used their Katon jutsu to set the sky ablaze and catching onto the fields.
As a Jōnin he lead many shinobi into battle and trained Iwa's brightest. Often war between Iwa and Konohagakure occurred. It was at this same time he had finally wedded himself to Hizana, the most beautiful woman in all of Iwa, with the voice that could put any angry heart to slumber; it especially put Fang to ease. How Fang hated the "Leafies" as they were nicknamed, a bunch of honor-less cowards whom hid behind trees and never engaged in a battle of stone will. While away from Iwa, it was a combined attack force that laid waste to a section of the village that Fang's wife Hizana and his two daughters Shizune and Izana were living at. In anger, he took off his headband and with close friends crossed the border to exact vengeance on Konoha. They exchanged combat with several guards, but were seen by some villagers whom lived in the countryside. To his greater shame, they had to be killed, lest they send for reinforcements. This was the reality of war.
Having lost his family as many in Iwa did, Fang quickly rose to a strong position of power and was given the rank of Jōnin Commander. His will of stone was so cold and steeled, that the Tsuchikage would often turn to Fang to make most of the village's major decisions, even ignoring the wills of the Daimyō. It was in this time that he had built many connections with Jōnin often trying to secure time for them to be with their families. He did not want them to see them lost so young and so soon as he had lost his family. That was when the largest war to reach Iwagakure had occurred. Their numbers seemed endless and the destruction was akin to a raging tsunami. Konoha's Leafies had brought friends this time: Kirigakure and Kumogakure. Fang's best friend Matsumoto Jin had told Fang to take what forces remained to go into the mountains and that he would give his life to save the future of the village, and ensure Fang continued to live being among the oldest and wisest.
As Fang watched the last day of Iwa, its great chambers and stone monuments crumbling, he took out his katana and prepared himself to run in and die with his nation. Like a captain to his ship, he could not abandon the life he had spent years protecting. He would sink with the ruins of Iwa. As he engaged blades with Kumo shinobi, he knew they would best him, but he utilized his kekkai genkai Shakuton to obliterate as many of the bastards as he could. Exhausted from chakra loss, he stood in the smoke waiting for the next wave, awaiting his glorious release and ascent into the next world. That was when he found himself surrounded by shinobi that possessed the same Iwa symbol as his own by in a dark black. "Reinforcements? Get out of here you fools! They've overr-" Before he had a chance to defend himself, one of them had caught him with a blade coated in a paralysis of some kind. Unable to form handseals, all he could see as he began to feel dizzy was the formation of a jutsu: "Iwagakure Hiden Jutsu: Eternal Mountain Burial." The world blackened as was first felt like sticky mud began to harden as everything suddenly became darkened. Death, freedom, at last. Or so he thought.
_____________[│║║█║▌][ώ ђ Ⱥ ț tabȺ я ӘtabӋ Φ ʋtabҪ ɐ ϸ ɐ ϐ ζ έtabѺ Ӻ...] tabHow Do I Experience Life...|
tab• Ninjutsu [x] tab• {Second Class} tab• {Third Class // First Prestige} tab• {Third Class // Second Prestige}
tabHow Do I View It...|
tab• {List Disciplines Here} tab• tab•
tabWhat Makes Me Unique Among My Peers...|
tab• Will of Stone: Having lived in the time Iwa existed and living a lifetime there, he naturally learned to utilize the Doton elemental affinity as well as anyone who was born with such an affinity. [+Doton Element] tab• Inherit the Earth: Having such a grounded reality in Iwa and his time trapped in the mountainous earth, his has a larger capacity to absorb technique information for future usage. [+10 Ninjutsu Slots] tab• Vast Chakra: A prodigy among those whom carried the kekkai genkai Shakuton, his chakra reserves were quite large and he possessed the ability to manipulate chakra far better than many of those around him at that time. [+1 Chakra]
tabWhat Are My Limitations...|
tabChakra Pool → 115
tab• Chakra Color ►Orange tab• Chakra Materialization ► Glowing Fangs
_____________[│║║█║▌][ώ ђ Ⱥ țtabđ ΦtabӋ Φ ʋtabђ Ⱥ ѷ Ә…] tabHow Much Ryo Do I Have...| 0 Ryo tabHow Much Experience Do I Have...| 0 Exp tabWhat Do I Carry...|
tab• {No one starts out with these. These are an in-game mechanic that will be utilized throughout the world, and will encompass items or secret locations discovered.}
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