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 Posted: Wed Jun 14, 2006 6:31 pm
i think i will
*takes dramatic poet pose* (i have no ide what that is supposed to look like use your imagination!)
The sun is bright
Its not around at night
when its out im sad
when its not im glad
i hate thy sun with all my self
you keep me in sickness and bad health
this poem sucks you know its true
so why am i wasting my time on you?
*gets up and grabs karosen and lighter burns paper*
yay fire
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Posted: Wed Jun 14, 2006 6:34 pm
::falls up through the floor and sits on the cieling fan::
Hi. o.o
::gets dizzy::
::puts the fan on low::
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Posted: Wed Jun 14, 2006 6:34 pm
stare try something else about it.
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Posted: Wed Jun 14, 2006 6:35 pm
your odd eek gasp im a critic *punches self in the face*
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Posted: Wed Jun 14, 2006 6:36 pm
Yamin0 stare try something else about it. I CANT WRITE HAPPY POETRY crying
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Posted: Wed Jun 14, 2006 6:40 pm
yes you can...Like this:
As the sun beats down across the forest
Time itself seems to stand still,
As the moon then reaches the night sky,
Time itself seems to stand still,
While the river runs it waters-the silent melody of the forest
And as a gentle hum of a moth's wings drift by,
Time itseld seems to stand still
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Posted: Wed Jun 14, 2006 6:43 pm
Then from the sky bombs fall
to distroy us all
i cant write in happy verse
i dont know which is worse
the trees burn, the rivers bouble
till the noises seam to double
the moon explodes
the rock erodes
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Posted: Wed Jun 14, 2006 6:48 pm
::falls over:: stare
and all is forever silenced.....
::cries::
gonk you blew up my poem.
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Posted: Wed Jun 14, 2006 6:50 pm
mwah ha ha ha
*evil laugher breaks down in too giddy little giggles* he he fire
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Posted: Wed Jun 14, 2006 6:51 pm
Tinosku ::falls up through the floor and sits on the cieling fan:: Hi. o.o ::gets dizzy:: ::puts the fan on low::
It's been a little while since I have seen you!
Everyone else here is writing in rhyme,
So I figure why not? I've got the time.
So from now I'll write in verse not prose,
And to my friend Twack, that's an interesting pose!
The dramatic pose eh? I'm using my head...
But nothing comes to it 'cept the thought of my bed xD
I'm a smidge tired, that I'll admit.
And my poem is long! So I shall now quit!
((Although it may look like my meter is bad,
Read it aloud. It makes it that much more rad.))
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Posted: Wed Jun 14, 2006 6:52 pm
::pokes him::
...you're as bad as my little sister.
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Posted: Wed Jun 14, 2006 6:53 pm
.Sodomy.On.A.Stick. Tinosku ::falls up through the floor and sits on the cieling fan:: Hi. o.o ::gets dizzy:: ::puts the fan on low::
It's been a little while since I have seen you!
Everyone else here is writing in rhyme,
So I figure why not? I've got the time.
So from now I'll write in verse not prose,
And to my friend Twack, that's an interesting pose!
The dramatic pose eh? I'm using my head...
But nothing comes to it 'cept the thought of my bed xD
I'm a smidge tired, that I'll admit.
And my poem is long! So I shall now quit!
((Although it may look like my meter is bad,
Read it aloud. It makes it that much more rad.))i hate you *crys* making me look badok im just kidding oh waid i for got *screams* your gay!!!! ahhhhh...sorry im just kidding i really thought you wer a girl, but dont mind me im tired too
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Posted: Wed Jun 14, 2006 6:54 pm
.Sodomy.On.A.Stick. Tinosku ::falls up through the floor and sits on the cieling fan:: Hi. o.o ::gets dizzy:: ::puts the fan on low::
It's been a little while since I have seen you!
Everyone else here is writing in rhyme,
So I figure why not? I've got the time.
So from now I'll write in verse not prose,
And to my friend Twack, that's an interesting pose!
The dramatic pose eh? I'm using my head...
But nothing comes to it 'cept the thought of my bed xD
I'm a smidge tired, that I'll admit.
And my poem is long! So I shall now quit!
((Although it may look like my meter is bad,
Read it aloud. It makes it that much more rad.))Hi. ::waves:: ::turns into a neko:: ::jumps on to your head:: ::lays down:: n.n
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Posted: Wed Jun 14, 2006 6:56 pm
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Posted: Wed Jun 14, 2006 6:57 pm
Mrowl. ::tilts head curiosly:: o.o
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