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Posted: Fri Jan 20, 2012 8:15 pm
Shestval Day 19 - Scoundrel (the rest of what I wrote today is here) I hope the theme is clear! Jake is pretty foul-mouthed, sorry... sweatdrop Oh Jake~~ I just fell a little deeper in love with your character! I shall read the rest when I get the chance.
Break's over and back to cleaning ;<
My favorite out the snip was: " “Wrong,” Jake snapped. “Your authority comes from your men. You got authority because we give it to you. That--” He waved his hand at the door, indicating the mutiny that had just occurred. “--proves it. At sea, we're far away from the crown, from Naval Command. We don't give a ******** 'bout the line of succession. You only have as much authority as you have loyalty and the men aren't loyal to you. They are loyal to me. Your authority comes from your men, through me.” "
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Posted: Fri Jan 20, 2012 8:17 pm
Ethereal Phantasmagoria For that long really? *checks* That was day 4 lol So about 2 weeks? Oh that one biggrin I liked it too~~ That was when he got made and started on his journey to do everything in his power to piss me off XDD I try to catch a glimpse of him whenever it was possible.
I believe he appeared one other time before today?? Or was it twice? Twice total? *Memory rushed*
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Posted: Fri Jan 20, 2012 8:20 pm
Nikkic87 I quite enjoyed your written piece. I was compelled to write out a critique, but I wasn't sure if you wanted one. If you want, PM me. Keeping in mind that this is 300 pages in and unedited. XD
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Posted: Fri Jan 20, 2012 8:23 pm
Yay~~ I'm actually not sure how many times he's been submitted >.> I mean, he's all over my notebooks but I've only submitted a lesser number of his sketches >.> I have some of his original concept sketches lying around but they just don't fit the theme. lol I'll need to check how many times he's been submitted.
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Posted: Fri Jan 20, 2012 8:32 pm
II Little China DoLL II Oh Jake~~ I just a little deeper in love with your character! I shall read the rest when I get the chance.
Break's over and back to cleaning ;<
My favorite out the snip was: " “Wrong,” Jake snapped. “Your authority comes from your men. You got authority because we give it to you. That--” He waved his hand at the door, indicating the mutiny that had just occurred. “--proves it. At sea, we're far away from the crown, from Naval Command. We don't give a ******** 'bout the line of succession. You only have as much authority as you have loyalty and the men aren't loyal to you. They are loyal to me. Your authority comes from your men, through me.” " I'm actually afraid that out of context Jake looks like a huge Gary Stu. rofl I'm glad you liked it!
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Posted: Fri Jan 20, 2012 8:53 pm
Shestval I'm actually afraid that out of context Jake looks like a huge Gary Stu. rofl I'm glad you liked it! Lol, it may be that he fits into a very broad personality in my mind... or it can be seen as me not fully wrapped in his character yet.
Either way, I imagine him to be someone who IS the center of attention (in a sense) and knows how to use it~ o 3o;;
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Posted: Fri Jan 20, 2012 9:28 pm
Hey, this is DearestDoormat. I got my account back so I'm in pretty high spirits I guess and was considering restarting this and trying to catch up. But, have my previous submissions been removed?
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Posted: Fri Jan 20, 2012 10:36 pm
-ProcrastinatingSpazz- Hey, this is DearestDoormat. I got my account back so I'm in pretty high spirits I guess and was considering restarting this and trying to catch up. But, have my previous submissions been removed? Congrats on the account return~ There was a little error within the front page. Limited character, so a few things were erased.
Please contact Kai_Chi via PM to work something out. 3nodding
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Posted: Fri Jan 20, 2012 10:43 pm
Ah, okay. Thanks for the info.
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Posted: Sat Jan 21, 2012 12:22 am
Back to cell phone pictures for the weekend razz away from a computer till Sunday.
http://i222.photobucket.com/albums/dd148/siafoam/2012-01-21_00-09-52_725-1.jpg
I chose the villian Poison Ivy
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Posted: Sat Jan 21, 2012 1:53 am
My OC, Illusion, getting ready to fight. Theme: Fight  [url=http://tinypic.com/r/10xrlok/5]http://tinypic.com/r/10xrlok/5[/url]
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Posted: Sat Jan 21, 2012 3:02 am
theme: the man in the moon haha more like ON the moon for me, but he's still sitting on the inside. idk. this is the first idea that popped into my head http://i302.photobucket.com/albums/nn94/Lord_Hebi-chan/SCAN0202.jpg
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Posted: Sat Jan 21, 2012 5:24 am
Ethereal Phantasmagoria :0 Oh my! I didn't expect anyone to actually do it! Thank you so much! I love it! <333 Why wouldn't anyone do it? I think your avi is very interesting. :3 And no problem. ^u^
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Posted: Sat Jan 21, 2012 10:17 am
Theme: Villain Trying out a new style! biggrin  http://i76.photobucket.com/albums/j27/jupiterblossem/villian.png
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Posted: Sat Jan 21, 2012 10:41 am
i googled 'villan' and all the results told me that villan = villain so i'm guessing you meant to put villain? >__> just wondering in case i decide to do that theme today.
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