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((I called you Light because I will call you what I want to call you.

And, here's a few tips to longer posts.

1. Ask questions the reader might be asking: Point out that what a character did or did not do had some reason behind it.

2. Character's actions: Even if it is just something as simple as sneezing, or walking form place to place. If it fits the situation and makes your post longer, type it.

3. Make your characters think more: They aren't just mindless puppets. Say what are they thinking at certain moments. The reader wants to know the character's thoughts and mindset.

I have seen you do number three sometimes, but... you could make your characters think a bit more...))

((Just remember those tips and you should be able to make, at least, half-way decnt posts.

And, it's just a name. Do I get upset when people call me Ninja? No. I don't prefer that name, but I don't get upset over it.

Either way, it's your turn to post.))

((Perfect.
And, it didn't take that much effort, now did it?

The only thing I have to ask, is that you italicize your character's thoughts.))

White nodded. "Don't worry, he'll be fine." He said reassuringly. "He just needs some more rest, and he should be perfectly fine." He explained, then thought for a moment. "Although, having been in bed for so long, he's going to have to get used to wielding a sword again." White then looked at Zelda. "So, don't worry about trying to heal him yourself. It will probably be better if his body heals on its own." He said. "He even told her not to heal him, yet she gets the idea to do that anyway..." White thought and shook his head slightly.

White ignored the look Zelda gave him. It didn't bother him as much as she might have thought it did. "As much as I praise your loyalty to him, don't heal him." He said, looking at Zelda. "If he is going to make a full recovery, why waste your energy to heal him? Just, trust me, it will be better for both him and you. Do not heal him." White explained bluntly. There really was no point to putting one's self in danger to heal another, if that person was already going to be perfectly fine, sooner or later, anyway.

White shook his head and sighed. "Foolish girl..." He thought, but just shook his head some more and looked up at Zelda. "I already told you that he isn't going to die. You have no trust in what people say, do you?" He asked. It seemed like Zelda didn't really care about what people said. "For a princess, she doesn't have many manners..." White thought.

White just continued to look at Zelda. "Love and foolishness..." He murmured under his breath. "Anyway, I don't think Link is going to wake up anytime soon. Even, though you did heal him." He explained, glancing over at Link. He was still sleeping like a log. White sat down in a chair and looked back at Zelda. "So, for now, we just have to wait. And, don't worry about your people. I guarantee, not all of them are dead." He said reassuringly. "Ganondorf knows that he can't rule anything without people that will serve him. I hate to say it, but he isn't stupid" He explained calmly.

White nodded. "Good, you should be able to feel it, and it should upset you. But as a strong ruler, you can't let that get you down." He said as he started lecturing again. "Keep your thoughts on your goal. Do not let your feelings sway you too much. Once we kill Ganondorf, your castle and kingdom can be rebuilt. The people do not want your sympathy, they want you to guide them through these dark times." White explained in his usual lecturing way.