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[Royal Taorito]

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After close review, the following profiles are [Approved]! It is suggested that you post your profile, if you have not already, within the approved Profile Vault for easier bookkeeping. See below for any notes.

HeadlessKoko

You know you're approved; I'm just actually posting it. We're field testing it.

Azeiel The Risen

You know you're approved; I'm just actually posting it.

izeromus

Pending?

 

[Ysil Erve]

_________________||Tell Me Some Basics…||
tab Who Are You?| Ysil
tab How Old Are You?| 16
tab What Sex Are You?| Male
tab What Do You Look Like| He stands quite tall, often donning simple black garb. Skin pale, maybe a tone darker than ivory along with an unique appearance trait - golden eyes with black sclera. His hair grows a bit below the half oh his back, which he often wears loose or combed back, falling from under his black beanie, which he wears most of the time. In formal occasions that forbid wearing of a headdress, he was often seen having a thick braid. He's a man of fit posture, neither too lanky nor too athletic, aiming more into an average shinobi build in terms of appearance. Often seen with hands donning plated, fingerless gloves with bandages peering from beneath them, sinking in jacket sleeves. Similar to forearms, he covers his shins with bandages that bind his trousers at the bottom, sealing them and preventing from anything to "flap around" as he states. When out in the field, he often wears a desert scarf, covering his face and nose. Sometimes when seen during a leisurely moment - he wears either a black turtleneck. He does not posses any additional, outstanding quirks and revealing features.
tab Who Are Your People?| Human, unknown origin
tab Do You Have a Lineage?| Kinmukugan/Jiton (full techniques variant)
tab Where Are You From?| Yougangakure
tab How Tall Are You?| 182 cm
tab How Much Do You Weight?| 80 kg
tab What Best Describes Your Frame?| Medium
tab What Were You?| Shinobi
tab How Experienced Were You At It?| E-rank

_________________||Now, Some Details…||
tab What Are You Like?| To fully grasp the complexity of his nature, one would have to devote a big hunk of own life to analyse this man and give a clear answer about what is truly driving him in life. Although he won't show off much of what dwells inside him, one could at least try to describe the role he tries to fit in. One could easily say he's a collected and composed man, who tries to stay as an arbiter and overseer of events - as often as possible. Some say he doesn't really want to get involved in important matters, while others describe this trait as some sort of profound wisdom. Those who worked together with him during missions and various tasks often describe him as a silent tactician, reserved in action and a person who prefers subtlety and stealth instead of a full-scale assault. He'd rather lure an enemy into a devious, well prepared trap and watch him suffer greatly before capture or dealing a swift and efficient death. It is said that he's one of those ominous sort. Not much of a conversationist, at least not with those whom he doesn't trust enough. He's a loyal subject to his superiors, always trying to accomplish given task without further hesitation or asking needless questions. Some would say he is somewhat withdrawn from the social activities, since he's rarely seen during any sort of public events that doesn't include him doing his job. Prefers to stay and relax at home, where he claims to have everything he needs. As stated by himself - a resourceful man of simple needs.

tab What Do You Believe In?| Unnecessary bloodshed weakens the world, so the most honorable way to end a battle is rapidly. If this means that he will poison the enemy's supplies, hire someone to assassinate the opposing general, or pay the enemy's mercenaries to double-cross them, then that is acceptable. It was a wise man who said that, "On the battlefield, all actions are honorable." He also believes in absolute loyalty and devotion to those, who are considered friends or family. Not hesitating to do the more ruthless job, he truly understood that by dirtying his hands, he ensured that no others need to do so.
tab What Do You Fear?|

• Betrayal at a hand of trusted one
• Unreturned feelings and advances
• Become a failure in eyes of others

tab • Calm and composed personality
tab • Strong will
tab • Charismatic
tab • Analytical Mind

tab What Are My Weaknesses...:

tab • Prone to fall into depression in wake of failure
tab • Very distrustful, paranoic even
tab • Difficult bonding and expressing deep emotions
tab • Arrogance



tab What Era(s) Are You From?| Era of Regret
tab What Have You Experienced?|
It all began, when it was about to end... His birth was more of an attempt to try and cheat the fate, rather than a fruit of love and nurture. In the age when people just try to scrape the bottom of the barrel, for the last pint of hope – he was more of an expandable, potential solution. Born in Youngangakure, his life was a myriad of toil and hard work, with scarce resources around, and a very hostile environment.
Dedicated to both hard work and sacrifice for his family, he strived for years. Coming of from a shinobi bloodline, he had to work both as a guardian of the village, as well as a laborer. Early days passed deep in the toxic mines, often without any sort of rebreather, with only a wet cloth damping some of the fumes out. Digging out rich mineral resources was crucial in development of the village, along with trying to bolster their position. He would sometimes spend days underground, not knowing about the common occurences outside. As his days went by, he would slowly develop into a higher layer of society. Knowing his ways with metal and processing ore, seeing his wit and craftiness – he was picked to learn and assist in the machine shop as a blacksmith apprentice.
But those times were merely just a prelude for further cataclysm. Every day misery took better of them, claiming another victim from the living. He contracted the blight as well, knowing that he was merely living on a borrowed time. As he was shuffling through the streets, a peculiar sight could be seen. Before his eyes stood one of the crystallised people, tall in structure and thick in composure, revealing a female trapped inside. Flakes of falling ash would dance around the supernatural sculpture, as he would himself feel the disease progress. As he fell deeper into the descent of crystallisation madness, he'd slowly gather his thoughts, feeling that those may be just the last things he'd experience. He wanted to remember this beauty... The first and only touching and beautiful thing he had ever witnessed. Then... Everything went dark. The cold and sticky darkness enveloping would shut him out. Only, to release him one day, in a world long forgotten and devoid of old values.
Now, scarred with defeat and alone... He's about to rediscover the world anew.

_________________||What Can You Do…||
tab How Do You Experience Life?|

• {First Class}
• {Second Class}
• {Third Class // First Prestige Class}
• {Third Class // Second Prestige Class}

tab How Do You View It?|

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tab What Makes You Unique? |

• GPA: Doton Release
• GPA: One handed seals
• GPA: Intelligence + 1

tab What Are Your Limitations?|

• Chakra Pool → 100
tab • Chakra Color → Graphite Gray
tab • Chakra Materialization → Armored Body Parts
tab • Chakra Elements: Wind/Earth/Lightning

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• Stamina Pool → 100
• Archetype → Strategist
• Statistics:

Power| ☆☆☆☆ 4
Agility| ☆☆ 2
Intelligence| ☆☆☆☆☆ 5
Chakra| ☆☆ 2

tab What Skills Do You Posses?|

• {Name of Skills} ► {Current Skill Level}
• Mining 2
• Farming 1
• Foraging 2
• Item Identification 2
• Shop Maintenance 2
• Tool Making 2

tab What Are You Proficient With?|

• {Proficiency Tree or Weapon} ► {Current Training Level}
• Medium Ranged Weapon – E rank
• Heavy Polearm: Halberd – E rank

tab What Are Your Limitations?|

Ninjutsu → 00 // 00
Genjutsu → 00 // 04
Stages of Learning [Bukijutsu] → 00 // 02
Stages of Learning [Taijutsu] → 00 // 00
Skill Points → 11 // 11
Proficiency Points → 03 // 03

_________________||What Do you Possess…||
tab How Much Experience Do I Possess?|
tab How Much Ryo Do I Own?|
tab What Do I Carry?|

• Halberd
• Repeating Crossbow
• Backpack
• Flint and Steel
• 2x medium satchel
• Skinning knife
• Compact Shovel
• Rope, 20 m
• Whetstone
• Oiled Waterskin
• Blanket
• Journal
• Bedroll
• Fishing Hook
• Pencil
• Weather Clothing

tab What Techniques Do You Possess?|

[{First Jutsu Type}] Kinmukugan

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[{Second Jutsu Type}] Jiton (Iron)

• Jiba Soujuu [Magnetic Manipulation]
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tab What Secrets Have You Discovered?|

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tab What Secrets Have You Laid Claim To?|

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[Royal Taorito]

________________Formal Judgment ||

After close review, the following profiles are [Approved]! It is suggested that you post your profile, if you have not already, within the approved Profile Vault for easier bookkeeping. See below for any notes.

Ysil Erve

Ignore this; I'm just posting the official approval.

________________Formal Judgment ||
After close review, the following profile is [Denied]. Please see your name below for any notes.

Rexnov

Reza
PA Oppression: This is denied. In order to gain an activation in a post, it has to be situational. Not to mention a C-rank limit is basically the entirety of E and D rank in character. For example, you could set it to after being struck by a certain type of enemy, or you could do maybe the first post of combat (I'd have to check on that one).

Rexnov

Taiki
Personality: You don't have one. This is required. Even if your character is a blank slate, that still needs to be mentioned.

Classes and Disciplines: I'm assuming you put these there for future use, but I would recommend striking them out for now, so we know you understand you don't have these abilities yet. Also, there is no way to get [4] classes right off the bat; it requires taking a Prestige at S rank and going back through from E to S rank a second time before you can get [4] classes. Otherwise the limit is [3], one at D, C, and A rank.

PA Chakra Master and Stats: There's a typo somewhere in here. I'm assuming your PA Chakra Master was supposed to give you an additional point in Chakra, not Intelligence. Likewise, you cannot gain a point in a stat every rank. PAs are limited to giving [1] stat point, and that's all.

Chakra Pool: [5] points in Chakra gives you an additional [15] chakra. [5] Chakra also gives you a [.5] increase to either the speed or strength of Ninjutsu (you have to chose one permanently).

Proficiencies: Putting [3] points into Medium Single Handed Weapons still only lets you use those weapons at E rank. Putting more than [1] point into anything involving Proficiencies does not raise their rank; they have to be trained. In order to get a weapon past E rank, you have to put a point into it (such as Katana in your case) to unlock the weapon, and then you can train it up from E rank in character or using free training posts. So my recommendation is putting [1] point in Medium Single Handed Weapons, [1] point in Katana, and [1] point somewhere else. If you plan on dual-wielding those katana, I'd recommend [1] point in Two Weapon Fighting - Medium & Medium.

Limitations: You get an additional [1] Ninjutsu or Genjutsu slot for each point in Chakra, starting at [4] points. So you get [2] more slots to distribute.

Starting Equipment: You've only used [108] ryo. If there's anything else you want for your character, you still have [17] ryo to use. You don't have to use them, but remember that they disappear once the character is approved.

 

[Royal Taorito]

________________Formal Judgment ||

After close review, the following profiles are [Approved]! It is suggested that you post your profile, if you have not already, within the approved Profile Vault for easier bookkeeping. See below for any notes.

Rexnov

 

[Fiitra]

_________Profile ||

Quote:

________Who Are You
Name: Kogarashi Hyūga
Age:12
Sex: Male
Height: 5'3
Weight: 130lbs
Frame: Light
Appearance:

(Teen)

Fears: Large aquatic creatures, smiling, loving.
Personality: Kogarashi is very quiet and may often be seen mumbling to himself alone. He does not talk much unless necessary and is very intelligent. He tends to read books when he expects people to approach, but he mostly spends time training. He has no friends. However, that has not been a problem for him as he was raised by his parents alone in the mountains, training with the animals and his siblings. He tries extremely hard to be serious and trusts no one. He was shunned by his family members when he was only 4 years old because he was unable to awaken his Byakugan. He only shows his warmth towards animals. He promised to himself that he would never never smile in front of a human as long as he lived.

Teen/Adult: Opposed to his younger self, Kogarashi is more outgoing and friendly towards others. He becomes hilarious, sarcastic, and very warm to others. He becomes stubborn and lazy at times, but he works hard behind closed doors. During his growing years, he become extremely powerful. He knows what others miss out if they are alone, so he tries his best to be there for everyone who has nobody in their lives, because in his famous words: "You don't know who is suffering. Their silence tends to speak more than their lips. Well, that's obvious, but you get my point!" Although he has changed, he was never seen smiling.

________What Are You
Rank: E - rank
Bloodline: Hyūga
Personal Attributes:
tab • Easy Technique Freebies: +10 Ninjutsu Slots
tab • Stat Bonuses: +1 ☆ to Chakra Stat
tab • Chakra/Stamina increase: +20 to Stamina

Archetype: Strategist
Stats:
tab Power: ☆☆☆☆ (4)
tab Agility: ☆☆☆ (3)
tab Intelligence: ☆☆☆☆ (4)
tab Chakra: ☆☆☆☆ (4)

Chakra Pool: 100
Chakra Materialization:
Chakra Elements:
tab • Water
tab • Wind
Stamina Pool: 120
Skills:
tab • Field Triage (+5 Skill Points added)
tab • Foraging (+5 Skill Points added)
tab • Item Identification (+1 Skill Point added)
Proficiencies:
tab • Unarmed Combat
tab • Single Handed Light Weapons (+1 Proficiency Point added)

________What Do You Possess
Inventory:
tab • Mesh netting [D - Ranked, Scale 5] ► 15 Ryo
tab • Weather Clothing ► 35 Ryo (Blue two-button coat with black fur edge)
tab • One Person Tent ► 20 Ryo
tab • Tantō [Durability 30] ► 20 Ryo
tab • Bedroll ► 6 Ryo
tab • Flint and Steel (x2) ►1 Ryo
tab • Backpack ► 2 Ryo
tab • Pot, Cooking ► 10 Ryo
tab • Pen // Pencil (1 each) ► 1 Ryo
tab • Journal // Sketchbook (1 each) ► 10 Ryo
tab • Rope, 20 Meters ►5 Ryo


________What Do You Know
Limitations:
Ninjutsu 0/11
Genjutsu 0/3
Bukijutsu Stages 0/1
Taijutsu Stages 0/1
Skill Points 11/11
Proficiency Points 3/3

Starting Technique:
tab • Shunshin no Jutsu [Body Flicker Technique]

Water:
tab •
tab •

Wind:
tab •
tab •

Lanfaer

Royal Taorito

 

[Royal Taorito]

________________Formal Judgment ||
After close review, the following profile is [Denied]. Please see your name below for any notes.

Taosuy

This is mostly clarification, but you're almost there! Also sorry for the wait.

Non-bloodline Bonuses vs. Personal Attributes: So it looks like the personal attributes you have listed are the items you chose from the non-bloodline bonus list. These are actually two different things. [+50] Chakra or Stamina (our fault if that wasn't clarified) and [2] Skill Points are specifically non-bloodline bonuses, and I suggest you list them next to bloodline.

Personal Attributes are the features that make your character unique. They can be simple, like bonus chakra or stamina (up to +20), or extra skill points (up to +4), or you can try to take a more extreme option, such as trying to give your character a unique ability in exchange for something. These you get [3] of.

Besides that, you get an additional [+15] chakra due to [5] points in the Chakra stat, as well as [2] extra slots to put in either ninjutsu or genjutsu.

Anything incomplete on the profile, such as your elements or personal attributes, must be done before you can get your class at D-rank, so if you're unsure now, just make sure you resubmit your profile before then.

Fiitra

Just some quick clarification.

Skill Points and Proficiency Points: Each character starts with [10] Skill Points and [2] Proficiency Points to distribute. Your Archetype gives you an extra [1] Skill Point and [1] Proficiency Point, putting you at [11] and [3]. You've assigned [1] Skill Point and [2] Proficiency Points, so I suggest you assign the rest, or those points will be lost, and you won't be able to use either the foraging or item identification skills without points in them.

 

[Royal Taorito]

________________Formal Judgment ||
After close review, the following profile is [Denied]. Please see your name below for any notes.

Holy Rinaku

1. Classes and Disciplines: So I think you were trying to strike out your classes, but the coding didn't work. Regardless, you start at E-rank and therefore have no classes. The first class is unlocked at D-rank, and the second at C. Likewise, the disciplines associated with those classes are not available until the class is obtained. Furthermore, Genjutsu is a shinobi class, and Tracker is a non-shinobi class. As it stands, you cannot take a shinobi and a non-shinobi class together. You can take 2 of shinobi, non-shinobi, or civilian classes, 1 shinobi and 1 civilian class, or 1 non-shinobi and 1 civilian class.

Because of this, your chakra and stamina are also off. Without additional modifiers, at E-rank you start with 100 chakra and 100 stamina.

2. Stats: So you're halfway there with this one. Strategist gives you 1 Power and 1 Intelligence, but in exchange those points have to come out of somewhere else. You must take up to 2 points from anywhere in your stats.

3. Skills: As long as you decide where you want to put your skills by the time you take your first class, you can leave this blank for now. Keep in mind not having skills means you may be limited in things your character is capable of doing. Also, if you take your first class and have not assigned your skill points they will be lost.

4. Proficiencies: To clarify how proficiencies work, the first point (Light Single Handed Weapons in your case) allows you to use all weapons in that category at E rank, representing you have basic knowledge in how to wield those weapons, making it required in order to use any weapons that fall into that category. You can then invest a second point into a specific weapon (in your case Knives), which allows you to train that weapon beyond E rank, up to the max rank of your experience (C at E rank, B at D rank, etc). Improvised Weaponry is an exception in that it requires [2] points to unlock. Since you have [3] points, you would either have to sacrifice Knives for now (you'd still be able to use them at E rank as long as you have a point in Light Single Handed Weapons), or wait until you gain another proficiency point to learn Improvised Weapons.

Also as clarification on Assassin (if you decide to choose the Tracker class later), it doesn't give you a proficiency point, you choose a weapon you have a proficiency in for it to affect.

Ryo and Starting Inventory: Upon character creation the ryo gained by your archetype is lost. You can use the starter shop to select items (up to 125 ryo worth) for your character to start with. Keep in mind we require all items on the character to be listed; in other words if no clothes are listed, then your character has no clothes. Same with weapons and general items. Items of personal value, so long as they don't give the character an unfair advantage, don't cost anything, but limit them to 1 or 2.