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PostPosted: Sat Jul 25, 2009 10:40 pm
100 pages and nothings changed. Taes avatar is STILL un-critiqueable.  
PostPosted: Sun Jul 26, 2009 11:20 am
hmmm, I would add a familiar to complete your avatar...

(you can critique my avatar on anything because I'm basically plain simple XD)  

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PostPosted: Sun Jul 26, 2009 12:57 pm
Welcome to the guild, and I like how the shirt interacts with the Leviathan chestplate. I think that given a little time you can get some pants that match that look better. ^_^  
PostPosted: Sun Jul 26, 2009 6:08 pm
Aw~

*I* can see several things wrong with my own avatar, at least. xd But then, I'm unreasonably picky sometimes, with myself anyway.

I really like this, Kusa. It's lovely. You look like quite the demon. I really can't think of a thing I would change. 3nodding  

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PostPosted: Sun Jul 26, 2009 7:53 pm
^Add a gwee and it will be perfect!!!!  
PostPosted: Sun Jul 26, 2009 8:36 pm
I would get rid of the dandii. Maybe add more reds and gold (to balance out the tiara and the dragon), and take off the circlet.  

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PostPosted: Mon Jul 27, 2009 12:41 am
I agree with the suggestion for adding a Gwee, he would add a bit more life while sticking with the color theme. On the other side of suggestions, you could add the Skittles Facepaint and see how well that works.  
PostPosted: Mon Jul 27, 2009 1:00 pm
I can't really find a way to work Gwee into the outfit without disrupting the general flow of the avatar. sweatdrop Makes the top half look too busy.

The only suggestions I can think of for yours are super-ridiculously nit-picky. sweatdrop

The yellow tassle around your shoulder (I think it's from some sort of earring from the Guard?) stands out. It's not quite the same shade as the fire on the whip. But I can't really think of anything to change, because the orange around your ear is nice.  

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PostPosted: Mon Jul 27, 2009 1:06 pm
Holy crap! I completely forgot about Gwee... I had two of those little guys back in the day, but... I sold them for a dark halo that was lost when...

Anyway, Tae, no complaints from me. I didn't even know there were so many complementary green and pink items on Gaia. That's usually the case with you, Kusa, and waku. You guys dig up the wildest stuff. Very nicely done.  
PostPosted: Mon Jul 27, 2009 1:10 pm
I likes it~

I'd add in some more white to balance out the hammer a little more, though. And maybe add some gold shoes. Like the genie slippers or something.
 

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PostPosted: Mon Jul 27, 2009 2:02 pm
It's so bright and happy... It reminds me of light bending through a crystal... or something to that effect. Blend of brighter hues.

Also, I'm having trouble with the whole silver addition to my avi... any ideas? sweatdrop  
PostPosted: Mon Jul 27, 2009 2:51 pm
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It's so bright and happy... It reminds me of light bending through a crystal... or something to that effect. Blend of brighter hues.

Also, I'm having trouble with the whole silver addition to my avi... any ideas? sweatdrop


I quite like what you've got so far. o__o The eyes especially, I love them. I can't think of anything to add or take away.

I'm partial to shiny avatars, though. x3 Avenging deity, ftw.  

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PostPosted: Mon Jul 27, 2009 4:49 pm
It's so watermelon happy~ 4laugh

Only suggestion would be to add a little more brown like what's on the skirt/apron.
 
PostPosted: Mon Jul 27, 2009 5:00 pm
>W< Matching Tae and Waku! Epic!

Why didn't I think of this before? That looks awesome. 3nodding  

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PostPosted: Mon Jul 27, 2009 5:04 pm
Ooh, I heart it. Drastically different from your merman. x3

If the nightmare anklets (or any black/red anklets) layer over the boots, I'd do that, so that they don't look quite so stark. (And whoa, I match Waku!)

Mine's nauseating, actually. Like...diabeetus-inducingly pastel and cutesy. D= Not sure how long I can stomach it.  
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