⇨ Profile Guide and Application

[Fiitra]

_________________||Tell Me Some Basics…||
tab Who Are You?| Thundra Senju
tab How Old Are You?|12
tab What Sex Are You?| Male
tab What Do You Look Like| *Refer to picture to the right*
tab Who Are Your People?| Dragonborn
tab Do You Have a Lineage?| Senju/Mokuton
tab Where Are You From?| Konohagakure
tab How Tall Are You?| 5'1"
tab How Much Do You Weight?|120lbs
tab What Best Describes Your Frame?| Medium
tab What Were You?| A young man who was lazy, and oft obnoxious at times, who was determined and hardworking nonetheless. A powerful, young shinobi who was an aspect of the future that eventually came to ruin.
tab How Experienced Were You At It?| A B-Ranked Chunin that often completed training at the villages' academy and completed few missions during his time as a shinobi.

_________________||Now, Some Details…||
tab What Are You Like?| Thundra is quiet and loves to laugh. With this, he loves to make others happy and laugh. He is never seen (or at least tries to be) upset or depressed in front of anyone. He has hope for everyone and he would like to change the hearts of those who are evil.
tab What Do You Believe In?|
"There is a door of hope in every moment of life that has not ended."
"If you lack character, if you lack passion, if you lack ambition, if you lack soul, if you lack love.. then what is your purpose?"
"With these tears in my eyes, I'll extinguish the fire in my heart."
"A person is protected from their death by their fate."
tab What Do You Fear?|

• Being weak
• Arrogance in oneself
• Boasting

tab What Strengths Define You?|

• Determination
• Ambidextrous & ambipedal
• Ninjutsu

tab What Weaknesses Define You?|

• Over-analytical
• Sometimes acts irrationally
• Prone to nude women

tab What Era(s) Are You From?| ______Era of Division: -150 to -125 BET
tab What Have You Experienced?| Thundra, as a younger child, loved reading about tales of previous shinobi and how they conquered all evils and prevailed by doing what was righteous. He tried training alone until one day caught by his father and his father taught him how to manipulate chakra and the whole nine yards. His mother taught him how to wash his clothes by hand with water, sand, soap and everything else possible. To cook, clean, make up his bed.. he learned more valuable things from his mother than his father. He loved both of his parents equally, but respected his mother more than his old man. With this, he realized how it was much more complicated and wanted to give up on becoming like the heroes in the tales he read. One day, he saw a cat being chased by a few wolves looking to rip it apart and came to its aid and eventually saved the cat. The felines being one of his favorite animals, he noticed how grateful it was and it became part of his family. He took this as fate to become a shinobi; a symbolic example through his Creator.

With this, Thundra had decided to train for a bit and set off into the shinobi world of ruins from his parents disclosed location in somewhere between two mountains surrounded by forests, he had learned many things about nature and use everything his parents taught him to the maximum while out in the wild. He stopped by small settlements and would continue his nomad adventure until he found a place to settle, as he was a young shinobi (12 years of age) at the time of travelling. He would look for other people to build an actual village and system as he had heard of in the tales, and hope that his valiant nature wouldn't go to waste.

_________________||What Can You Do…||
tab How Do You Experience Life?| {No one has these yet, as they are unlocked at D - rank.}

• {First Class}
• {Second Class}
• {Third Class // First Prestige Class}
• {Third Class // Second Prestige Class}

tab How Do You View It?|

• {Disciplines. No one has these yet, as they are unlocked at D - rank.}
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tab What Makes You Unique? |

• Chakra increase: Chakra +20
• Easy Technique Freebies: +10 Ninjutsu slots
• Stat Bonuses: +1 to Chakra stat

tab What Are Your Limitations?|

• Chakra Pool → 135
tab • Chakra Color → Silver
tab • Chakra Materialization → A silver outline around Thundra's body that appears as a burst of power.
tab • Chakra Elements:

tab • Earth
tab • Water

• Stamina Pool → 100
• Archetype → Sage
• Statistics:

Power| ☆☆ (2)
Agility| ☆☆ (2)
Intelligence| ☆☆☆ (3)
Chakra| ☆☆☆☆☆☆ (6)

tab What Skills Do You Posses?|

• Survival Skills ►
• Field Triage - 6
• Foraging - 6

tab What Are You Proficient With?|

• ______________Basic Weapon Proficiencies ►
• Single Handed Light Weapons [1 Proficiency Point]
• Two Handed Medium Weapons [1 Proficiency Point]

tab What Are Your Limitations?|

Ninjutsu → 00 // 14
Genjutsu → 00 // 03
Stages of Learning [Bukijutsu] → 00 // 00
Stages of Learning [Taijutsu] → 00 // 00
Skill Points → 12 // 12
Proficiency Points → 02 // 02

_________________||What Do you Possess…||
tab How Much Experience Do I Possess?| Thundra was taught by his pessimistic father, Jiaomen, to prepare for everything. He always taught Thundra how to cook, clean, identify good animals and plants from bad and the whole nine yards. He is very keen and observant, though has a lot to learn apart from what he already does.
tab How Much Ryo Do I Own?| 0
tab What Do I Carry?|

• Katana [Durability 30] ► 20 Ryo
• Backpack ► 2 Ryo
• Blanket ► 2 ryo
• Soap ► 1 Ryo
• Two Person Tent ► 30 Ryo
• Normal Clothing ► 25 Ryo (Robe split at the bottom with a white undershirt underneath and shorts that go below the knee just about, along with a scarf around the neck)
• Bo Staff [Durability 30] ► 20 Ryo

tab What Techniques Do You Possess?|

[Doton]

• Doryuuha [Earth Flow Wave] [i(]Starter jutsu, takes up no slot)
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tab What Secrets Have You Discovered?|

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tab What Secrets Have You Laid Claim To?|

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[Royal Taorito]

________________Formal Judgment ||

After close review, the following profile is [Denied]. Please see your name below for any notes.

Fiitra

1. What Have You Experienced? This is your history, what made you the character you are now. What was your childhood like, what decisions led to becoming a shinobi? What happened when you were crystallized? Things like that. We do require [2] paragraphs, 4-5 sentences each, for this history.

2. Chakra Pool: You gain an additional [15] Chakra for having [5] points in the Chakra stat, putting you at [135] Chakra total.

3. Stats: You've got this partially right. All stats start with [3] points in them. From there, an Archetype is chosen [Sage, in your case] that increases certain stats. Sage increases Chakra by [2], putting you at [5], and then your PA gives you an additional [1], making [6]. That part, you have correct. However, in exchange for the [2] points gained from the Archetype, [2] points are sacrificed elsewhere. For example, you can take [2] points from Power, putting that stat at [1], or [1] from Power, [1] from Intelligence, putting both at [2].

4. Skill Points: Again, you have this partially correct. You have [10] points to distribute, plus [2] from the Sage Archetype. Currently you have all of you skill points assigned to a category instead of an actual skill. If Field Triage and Foraging are the only skills you're interested in, you want to distribute your [12] points between those, not put them into 'Survival Skills' because that's not a skill.

5. Proficiency Points: The biggest beast in this guild to understand. We're still working on simplifying it. How this works is that you start with [2] Proficiency Points to put into either weapon categories, or actual weapons. First, you use [1] point to unlock a weapon category [say, Single Handed Light Weapons]. You can then use any weapon in that category at [E] rank. From there, you can either put [1] point in a different weapon category if you want, or choose a weapon from Single Handed Light Weapons to focus on so you can train it past [E] rank. However, you will only be able to train that one weapon until you get more Proficiency Points.

6. Technique Slots: Firstly, your starting technique does not consume a slot, so you can remove that. Secondly, you get [5] slots from the Sage archetype, [1] slot for each point in Intelligence and Chakra, starting at [4] stat points in either of those [so you get 2], plus the [10] from your PA, putting you at [17] slots total. [7] of those, you can choose to put into either Ninjutsu or Genjutsu.

7. Inventory: You didn't give yourself any equipment! As a Sage Archetype, you get [100] ryo to choose items from the Character Starter Shop. We require you list all items your character has on them, including weapons and clothes. If an item isn't listed, then you don't have it. If you don't have clothes, your character starts naked. Any ryo left over disappears.

 

[Royal Taorito]

________________Formal Judgment ||

After close review, the following profiles are [Approved]! It is suggested that you post your profile, if you have not already, within the approved Profile Vault for easier bookkeeping. See below for any notes.

Fiitra

 

[Royal Taorito]

________________Formal Judgment ||

After close review, the following profile is [Denied]. Please see your name below for any notes.

pumpkin mask

Just a couple of things, and you'll be good to go!

1. PAs Custom Artist and Monster There's nothing actually wrong with these, but I wanted to make sure you were aware that you cannot make custom techniques (unless they're for guild use, in which case they don't take up slots) in character until C-rank. Likewise, we do provide quite a few custom slots, [8] as a base, and then [2] per rank, per class, giving you, potentially, an additional [8] slots per rank, per class at S rank. However, you are welcome to keep your PAs, or change them to something else if you prefer.

2. PA Nightmare This one is also fine, but keep in mind that how it affects a person is very limited, and based on character reaction. Some characters may be creeped out or scared of it, and the cold touch doesn't have any lasting physical effects. However, you are certainly welcome to work some custom techniques later on off of the materialization.

3. Chakra and Stamina Pools I wanted to clarify where you were getting [150] in each of these from. I believe you chose the non-bloodline bonuses of an additional PA and +25 Chakra or Stamina. It's partially our fault because I keep meaning to clarify, but you get [8] points to choose bonuses from the list, and get to choose [1] item from a list you invest points into. Likewise, where it says +25 Chakra/Stamina, it's supposed to be Chakra or Stamina. So I apologize for the confusion there.

4. Slots and Inventory See 3 for more of an explanation. Which [2] Mid Tier bonuses did you choose from the non-bloodline list? Because it looks like you took [10] Jutsu Slots and [5] Stages of Learning, as well as [2] Free E-D rank items. So just remember, if you're going for [2] Mid Tier choices, you have to choose only [2] items from the list.