Abandoned by the Gods [4E] - Full

[joe-dude667]

MaoukaMasaki777

joe-dude667

MaoukaMasaki777

Jett of Storms, Genasi Swordmage

Okay! I put the +s for my Defenses in the right columns (I think), I changed my Bracers of Mighty Striking for Gloves of Piercing, get a little extra damage for my ablilities. Got a Necklace of Defense for extra defense, took a +2 to Arcana due to background and fixed my gold: 520 - 360 (Necklace) - 50 (Spellbook) = 110 GP. I think I'm ready!

Still in the wrong sections, but they add up so it's nothing to worry about. Although Spellbook is free with your class, so you can have another 50g.

Also I noticed you have sylvan armour, but are choosing it as cloth. It comes in leather, so as a swordmage is proficient, there's really no reason not to get it in leather. Other wise you're just throwing away +2 to ac. Other than that:

You are good to go. wink

Jett of Storms, Genasi Swordmage

Okay, for whatever reason, it won't let me change the AC value of my armor, so I put that +2 you mentioned into the Feat part. I'll probably make a second sheet for later on to keep it organized. XD

That's weird. I think it's like Virtue says, you need to type it in the armour section (bellow quick lookup on the left).

Either way, you're peeeeerfect! mrgreen  

[Maelthra Ssinss]

joe-dude667

ChidarRalan

Oh... Maybe I didn't post it here that I was done fixing... Thought I did... Crud. Sorry everyone! I did fix her up, though. And added more identities.

You should have 520g, all the non magical items you get for free. Also your quick lookup is still using your strength modifier, when it should be your dex.

I can see you've got a misc +1 for AC, though can't see what its from. =/

Fix those, and you're good to go. wink

Actually... I'm not 100% sure, either. Like I said, I used the Dnd 4e character creator. It had a +2 and a -1 Misc. I just combined those.

Fixed the others.  

[joe-dude667]

Maelthra Ssinss

joe-dude667

ChidarRalan

Oh... Maybe I didn't post it here that I was done fixing... Thought I did... Crud. Sorry everyone! I did fix her up, though. And added more identities.

You should have 520g, all the non magical items you get for free. Also your quick lookup is still using your strength modifier, when it should be your dex.

I can see you've got a misc +1 for AC, though can't see what its from. =/

Fix those, and you're good to go. wink

Actually... I'm not 100% sure, either. Like I said, I used the Dnd 4e character creator. It had a +2 and a -1 Misc. I just combined those.

Fixed the others.

I seeeee what happened. It's magic armour. It should be in the Enh column. Not hugely important as your stats are right. You sure you don't want to spend some of that gold? Perhaps on a neck slot item either lvl1 or lvl2?

Either way you're 100% done. mrgreen  

[Vampfighter1]

joe-dude667

Vampfighter1

joe-dude667

Vampfighter1

Pascal Veris

Will write background and find a pic later.

Looks like you used point buy instead of rolling for stats. That's cool if that's what you want, but I'd recommend giving rolling a go, you'll get much better than standard array. If you're using point array, you've forgotten to add the +2 to charisma.

Can you add Artful Dodger benefit to your conditional modifiers section? Also Teeny Warrior feat.

You haven't got Pixie Dust written down, I told you that you can have it. wink

You need to work out your attack and damage scores. Attack should be +9 for daggers (assuming you buy a magical damage), +7 short sword (assuming it's mundane), and +6 hand xbow (again, assuming it's mundane). Also I see your damage is 1d3 for daggers, that's actually a 3rd edition rule. It's still 1d4, and short sword and xbow are still 1d6.

You also have yet to buy magical items. You get 1lvl2, 1lvl3, 1lvl4, and 520g. All the items you've already "bought" also count for free at this high lvl, so there's no need to take the gold off for that.

Background benefit can be either +2 to Arcane for being from the Feywild Isles of Maivland, or +2 thievery for his life as a cut purse.

Alright that'll fix everything. Just making some minor adjustments to her background to account for the magic items, and the fact that Pascal is now Aatalia.

Magic armour bonus should be in the enh column, not the armour section. But that's just the OCD in me. =P

Gold should be 160.

Also you have short sword down as +6 attack. it should be +8 for rogue attacks and +7 for OA's/basics. Other than that:

You are good to go. wink:

Fixed!  

[Maelthra Ssinss]

joe-dude667

Maelthra Ssinss

joe-dude667

ChidarRalan

Oh... Maybe I didn't post it here that I was done fixing... Thought I did... Crud. Sorry everyone! I did fix her up, though. And added more identities.

You should have 520g, all the non magical items you get for free. Also your quick lookup is still using your strength modifier, when it should be your dex.

I can see you've got a misc +1 for AC, though can't see what its from. =/

Fix those, and you're good to go. wink

Actually... I'm not 100% sure, either. Like I said, I used the Dnd 4e character creator. It had a +2 and a -1 Misc. I just combined those.

Fixed the others.

I seeeee what happened. It's magic armour. It should be in the Enh column. Not hugely important as your stats are right. You sure you don't want to spend some of that gold? Perhaps on a neck slot item either lvl1 or lvl2?

Either way you're 100% done. mrgreen

Yay! I.. may spend it...

EDIT: Kekeke. think I'm going to get Reading Spectacles. It be handy being able to read all languages...  

[Maelthra Ssinss]

Nope. Headband of Perception.  

[joe-dude667]

Everyone but mercantes now has perfect sheets, so we can no begin! mrgreen

I present to you all:
Chapter One: Chasing Shadows!  

[BegrudginglyGood]

If you ever need another person, look me up. So far its looking to be an interesting RP.  

[joe-dude667]

Well I only wanted to have 6 PC's, so if I lose a couple of people I'll probably leave it. Though if I miraculously lose half my players, I assure you you'll be the first person I message. mrgreen