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 Posted: Tue Feb 27, 2007 12:26 pm
The Prologue
A young girl by the name of Koroso entered into the ancient forest Herith.She came to the middle of the woods.It was a clearing.In the very center stood a big bolder with a sword stuck in it.She already knew that people tried to take it out but the power of the sword made them fly backwards.If they were lucky they wouldn't die but suffer major injuries.
For some reason the light that shone on the stone pulled Koroso forward.She now approched the sword and her body seemed to be taken over.She reached out her hand slowly to the blade.A finger touched the sword but nothing happened.Feeling a bit more at ease she gripped on to the sword.A light flashed as she easily pulled it out.She lifted it out infront of her examining it.It was a clear blade.
A few seconds later the blade was begining to turn black.In shock vines gruw from it.It crawled up her arm and came tothe elbow.They were thornes on it and they were black just like the sword.They plunged into her arm and she gave a yell.She tried to let go of the sword but it was stuck there.The sword had grown on her.Her arm became a blade.Her eye's turned red.She felt power surge through her body.
((I don't know I'll be continuing but feel free and comment on it ^o^))
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Posted: Tue Feb 27, 2007 2:48 pm
Hiii! It was great.. But.. short xD
Anyways, I'm allowed to flame at you! I'm your cousin anyways <333
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Posted: Tue Feb 27, 2007 3:47 pm
*hisses*Well you couldn't write anything better.*Sticks out togue*
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Posted: Tue Feb 27, 2007 5:14 pm
I thought it was good. If it was a proloug to a book, I would definately want to read more. If you contiued it, you should probably give background on the sword, and the main charicture.
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Posted: Tue Feb 27, 2007 5:25 pm
Thanks.I was planning to explain the sword piece by peice though.and it's not the main character.She's the enemy. sweatdrop
How the heck do ya spell Piece.*Smacks self.*
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Posted: Tue Feb 27, 2007 8:40 pm
good, but... is the sword evil?
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Posted: Wed Feb 28, 2007 11:52 am
It depends who has it.BAck then the sword was taken from the king and the enemy took it.(The sword is the sword of the four great elements.So it's really strong.Water wind fire and earth.)A young mage cursed it so that the enemy couldn't have it and it was placed in a stone.Only the purest hearted person could get it and it would be good or the desendent of the enemy could get it.The mage would have destroyed it right there but her magic wasn't strong enough so that's why it's cursed.
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Posted: Thu Mar 01, 2007 12:53 pm
Chp 1 Anthis, a beautiful calm town was being attacked by the evil ruler ,Gorinor. He ruled the land of Bestreth.The town what part of Bestreth so it was under the order of Gorinor.He was in search for the towns healer.Though she cured she also could use attack magic.This was a threat to Gorinor so he needed her to be found.The reward price was 100,000 gold.
Many people betrayed her for the money but also many tried to keep her hidden.Many lied so they could protect her.Those who refused to tell would die but they knew that the healer get stronger in magic and be able to revive them.
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The young mage, Frey, ran to an alley hiding from the guards.She had shoulder lengh thin grey hair and wore a bage thin vest of her green t-shirt.She also wore a black skirt.As she got far into the shadows of the alleys she took a deep breathe and muttered "Angus"the key word for the spell to disguse ones self.Now she was a tall man with thick brown hair.She wore the normal peasent clothes.Her cover name would be Zain if anyone asked and she tested her voice to see if it sounded manly.Seeing that it was correct she exited the alley only to get stopped by two guards on horses.
"You there!Hault!"One demanded pointing a finger at her."Have you seen the mage."She began to fakly think then She looked over to the far right of her.Pointing she responded"I think she stays at the abandoned house over there."True there was a building with no one living in it.WIth no appretiation the two guards rode off towards the house.
As they left ,Frey headed to the bar.She sat at the counter and ordered a tall glass of cold beer.Taking a gulp her strengh in magic rose.Frey loved how alchohal was the thing that helped her when she had low magic.She quickly finished and pushed her glass away from her.
Soon a loud bang was heard from the direction of the door.it was Gorinor.Everyone froze in fear as they seen him.What casued her to panic was that the big armored man sat right next to her.Remembering that she was in her disguise she felt a bit better.
Soon her magic felt as if it were going down.Must of been her stess of sitting right next to her killer.She was about to ask for another beer but her voice was becoming femine again.Knowing she was going to change back to her normal self she just got up and was about to leave.As she was going out the door she turned back a girl.Gorinor noticed it"Stop!"He yelled.He got up and ran after her.
For some reason the rest of the people in the bar thought it was quite amusing that he was right beside her and didn't notice.Their laughing was stopped by guards who entered."Orders from the boss to kill you"All of the people stood and walked backwards in fear.Just as they were about to get attacked ,Frey bursted in once again."Jade"Another magic word.This was an attack one.A big beam was shot and it destroyed the wall."Hurry out."She rushed them.The crowd obeyed as her enemy swung his big sword at her.
She jumped and ran out also.There was another bunch of people there as the people from the bar met up.All the rest of the living villagers were rounded together.Frey whistled and a big bird was spotted in the sky.It landed."Hello old friend"She said patting it's head.The birds name was Anfried."Mind if you pick up a few people?"She asked pointing to the crowd."Don't mind at all.Hop on"The group got on quickly.The bird flew upwards leaving Frey behind.She walked up to her enemy"Still have that cursed sword I see."She taunted.He roared and slashed at her missing once again."Well I have to get going"She began to run fast into the feild and had Gorinor after her.He wasn't as fast as her though.
Soon her bird friend came swooping down as she jumped onto his back.Laughter of sucsess was heard as they sored in the sky.
"Hurray for the whitch!"A young boy cheered.Immediently cold stares were pointed at him."Never call her a witch!"A man scowled."Oh don't worry I don't mind."Frey butted in.Being called a witch was an insult but them not knowing that she already cursed something made her a witch.The curse was for good reason anyways.
Another voice was heard."I wish I just told them where you were then I could be rich."A gasp was heard.I was the grumpy bartender Jole.Frey ,remembering her destroying the wall laughed"Sorry for destroying your bar.I'll make sure I'll rebuild it."Frey conforted.That satisfied him."You better"Another laugh was heard.
"So where are we headed anyways?"A little girl asked.Anfried Awnsered this."To a small forest at the other land Scorth.Don't worry they know of are arrival and that we're friend's."Scorth was a calm and peacful land.It never wished for war.
The sky was getting dark."Let's all get to sleep"A young mother suggested.Agreement was fair."Just grab a feather and wrap yourself in it.You'll be secure."Everyone did it now and half the people were asleep.Frey thinking of her sucess soon drifted off into a light sleep.
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