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 Posted: Sat Jan 13, 2007 10:00 pm
Paranoia
Clumsy lies breed insanity
Chromatic definitions
Deflect worries
Illusions of deception
For daily deprivation
Crooked fantasies
Conjuring memories
Straighten mind tricks
Expel all reason
Enriching Heaven
For tomorrows Hell
Promising power
To rise destruction
Paranoia.
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Posted: Sun Jan 14, 2007 2:59 pm
Yeah...it's just something that I came up with out of nowhere. It's supposed to relfect the symptoms and feelings of paranoia.
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Posted: Mon Jan 15, 2007 9:52 am
thats definitely paranoia.... really good i like it smile
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Posted: Mon Jan 15, 2007 6:47 pm
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Posted: Fri Aug 10, 2007 10:23 am
I really like it! The first line is...amazing! Thats always the part I have the hardest time with, finding a good first line that will draw the readers attention! ANYWAYS! I think you are brilliant, and i would love to see more of your work.
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Posted: Wed Aug 15, 2007 5:09 pm
It brings the soul to the tip of the emotions that involve such state of being.........
Its lovely.
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WildWildWindWhisperer Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Aug 21, 2007 6:08 pm
I really like your word choice, this sounds good biggrin
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Posted: Sun Aug 26, 2007 6:44 am
(...c00kiem0nster...) I really like your word choice, this sounds good biggrin
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WildWildWindWhisperer Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Sep 03, 2007 2:57 am
Wow. I love all poetry and I've read alot.
I write some too but I find it hard to gather new words or dig up old ones that make the poem breathe.
I think you've done it.
I really like it!
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