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Hiro Ariga

PostPosted: Tue Jun 19, 2012 2:22 pm


I wanna be better at this paragraph making and being more descriptive. I really need help with it.
PostPosted: Sat Jun 23, 2012 7:02 am


Hiro Ariga
I wanna be better at this paragraph making and being more descriptive. I really need help with it.


Are you saying that your english isnt that great and you wish to speak/type it better? Or your actual punctuation and word selection?

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Hiro Ariga

PostPosted: Sat Jun 23, 2012 10:42 am


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Hiro Ariga
I wanna be better at this paragraph making and being more descriptive. I really need help with it.


Are you saying that your english isnt that great and you wish to speak/type it better? Or your actual punctuation and word selection?


That's what I kind of am basically saying I know my typing isn't the best but I wanna push it to the next level in the sort to sound more professional
PostPosted: Sat Jun 23, 2012 10:48 am


Well, a good place to look for now would be in the rp forum, a good example would be in the rp's themselves, like with Mine and Izzy's, as currently it has the most posts. Just make sure to look and not post.

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PostPosted: Sat Jun 23, 2012 11:37 am


Hiro Ariga
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Hiro Ariga
I wanna be better at this paragraph making and being more descriptive. I really need help with it.


Are you saying that your english isnt that great and you wish to speak/type it better? Or your actual punctuation and word selection?


That's what I kind of am basically saying I know my typing isn't the best but I wanna push it to the next level in the sort to sound more professional


To be honest if you want to sound more distinguished it's not just a matter of asking for help it takes some serious schooling and practice. I just finished up your first year of college and my English teacher made us write a essay every class period. It sucked but it really helps. The guy above has a good idea. You can study some RP's they usually have lots of vivid details.
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