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 Posted: Sat Jun 02, 2012 12:57 am
No more No less.
I am a person
I have feelings
I am an adult
I have responsibilities
Yet
I am still a child
And I am naive of things unknown to me
But I have broad wisdom
Do not underestimate
Nor overestimate me
I am who I am. No more. No less.
There are those I deeply care for
There are those I am sympathetic for
There are those in my life
because I choose to let them be
They play specific role in my life
There are those I hate
And there is no hope for them
I have emotions
They may be scarred, bruised, or even broken
They, at times, may be hurt
They, at times, feel happiness
But, I will continue to live my life
Regardless
If I hold onto them
Or let them go
My life can change
Easily
And so your own
But you can influence how it does
Me..
I've opted to ,this day forward, to..
Make my life better one day at a time
I am who I am
No more
No less
Don't assume you know me based upon what I like
Get to know me
And if I believe I can trust you
I'll reveal my true self to you
Be yourself also
Otherwise I would never know if I COULD trust you
You are who you are
No more, no less
Treat me well
And i will do the same
Treat me wrongly
And i will give you
Only one chance
Redeem yourself
If i place trust in you
I plead you do the same
We are who we are
No more no less
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Posted: Sat Jun 02, 2012 1:03 am
Oh and any edit suggestions will be appreciated~
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Posted: Sat Jun 02, 2012 3:57 pm
I love it and do not worry about spelling. Many great songs and poems are full of grammatical error that is part of what makes them what makes them more unique.
Are you going to sing it? I would love to hear it to music.
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Posted: Sat Jun 02, 2012 8:24 pm
MistyMary24 I love it and do not worry about spelling. Many great songs and poems are full of grammatical error that is part of what makes them what makes them more unique.
Are you going to sing it? I would love to hear it to music. I would love to! It's just going to take a long while. Since I dont own anything other than a guitar. I don't know how to play yet either Dx I'm going to pay for lessons soon though @.@
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Posted: Sat Jun 02, 2012 8:58 pm
The Unlucky Fellow MistyMary24 I love it and do not worry about spelling. Many great songs and poems are full of grammatical error that is part of what makes them what makes them more unique.
Are you going to sing it? I would love to hear it to music. I would love to! It's just going to take a long while. Since I dont own anything other than a guitar. I don't know how to play yet either Dx I'm going to pay for lessons soon though @.@ You could just sing it with no music first. Or you could get a friend, who knows how to play an instrumen to play while you sing. Personally, I think this would sound good w/ either a piano or guitar.
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Posted: Sat Jun 02, 2012 10:07 pm
Ignis Lupus The Unlucky Fellow MistyMary24 I love it and do not worry about spelling. Many great songs and poems are full of grammatical error that is part of what makes them what makes them more unique.
Are you going to sing it? I would love to hear it to music. I would love to! It's just going to take a long while. Since I dont own anything other than a guitar. I don't know how to play yet either Dx I'm going to pay for lessons soon though @.@ You could just sing it with no music first. Or you could get a friend, who knows how to play an instrumen to play while you sing. Personally, I think this would sound good w/ either a piano or guitar. I was thinking of using both for any music I make. Kinda like infant sorrow.
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