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 Posted: Fri Feb 17, 2006 5:54 pm
I wanted to start this for fans who like creating their own redwall poems and songs. I will post my stuff as soon as possible!
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Posted: Fri Feb 17, 2006 6:00 pm
Ooh, that's a great idea! I'd love to see some of the writing talent in this guild.
Can't wait to see your stuff. 3nodding
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Posted: Fri Feb 17, 2006 7:06 pm
Thank You! Are you going to submit some 2?
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Posted: Fri Feb 17, 2006 7:27 pm
Oh, well, we'll have to see about that.
I am a tragically terrible poet.
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Posted: Fri Feb 17, 2006 7:56 pm
Taht doesnt matter. Its what comes from the heart. A simple paragraph can be considered poetry if its from the heart and is beautiful. I have faith in u that u can write something wonderful!
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Posted: Fri Feb 17, 2006 8:54 pm
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Posted: Fri Feb 17, 2006 9:04 pm
Redwall poems! Whee! blaugh I'm more of a short-story person myself, but I'm working on a song for the clan. I do have a rather mushy ballad that centers around two of my other Redwall RP chars. redface Had to write one of those for an English project. razz
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Posted: Fri Feb 17, 2006 9:29 pm
I used to write short stories, but somehow they ended up more poem than story... sweatdrop Mushy Ballads rule!!! Im not that good at them right now, but im improving. I would really like to read some of your work. And more than 1/2 of my stuff was written for english or my creative writing class.
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Posted: Fri Feb 17, 2006 11:06 pm
Rannsong I used to write short stories, but somehow they ended up more poem than story... sweatdrop Mushy Ballads rule!!! Im not that good at them right now, but im improving. I would really like to read some of your work. And more than 1/2 of my stuff was written for english or my creative writing class.
Well, if you'd like. smile This one requires a bit of explaining, though. This was based on an actual happening in a Redwall chat room between one of my characters, a fox named Jukes, and a character named Teslar *cough* God-moder! *cough* razz (Never did find out what species that dingaling was). Vitani is his mate, an orange fox, also one of my characters. Commence with the mushy-ness! blaugh :
Vitani, Vitani
Vitani, Vitani
Every day I wait
And when you come to talk to me
I get into a cheery state
The sunshine in your smile
Birdsong in your talk
The breezes' soft rustle
As beside me you walk
Vitani, Vitani
Refreshing as rain
I'll be sure no evil
Befalls you again
I will never forget
That one fateful night
How normal it started
So merry and bright
Vitani, Vitani
My only and one
May you live to bear many
A daughter and son
You were there talking
As innocent as ever
When the foe entered in
Thinking himself clever
Vitani, Vitani
With your fur like fire
The only girl
I will ever desire
He bribed me to fight
At once I said no
Then evilly twinkle
Did the eyes of the foe
Vitani, Vitani
Your face ever fair
The colors of sunset
Entwined in your hair
He produced a dagger
Which he promptly threw
Not aiming for me
But directly at you!
Vitani, Vitani
When your name I speak
My insides melt
And my knees grow weak
I leaped up at once
Anger hot in my eyes
Boring into the one
Whom I still now despise
Vitani, Vitani
So gentle and sweet
I'd be better off dead
Then to you never meet
We fought long and hard
Four hours at least
But he was an experienced
Merciless beast
Vitani, Vitani
Your tender young years
Showed every time you
Wet my chest with your tears
When at least we receded
We stood eye to eye
He was wounded sorely
But not half bad as I
Vitani, Vitani
So faithful and true
I made sure no harm
Came to sweet tender you
My blood loss was great
I staggered outside
And be it not for you
There I would have died
Vitani, Vitani
Your eyes were so filled
With the diamond-like tears
That upon me you spilled
You drug me away
From the cold battlefield
And finally here
So's I could get healed
Vitani, Vitani
My angel of grace
All that ails me is gone
When I see your face
The healer just said
I may not live
And should I not
This last note I give
Vitani, Vitani
So precious your life
I'll love you always
I'm so glad you're my wife.
Mushiness ended. xp
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Posted: Sat Feb 18, 2006 11:21 pm
Wow! Thats really good! I like that! Bravo!
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Posted: Mon Feb 20, 2006 8:49 pm
-This is one I wrote for Rannsong, not too long ago.-
"The Ballad of Bryon"
-A poem of Redwall by Brian Baker
Off the road a little ways,
Within Mossflower Glade,
I gaze upon my secret love,
A lovely otter-maid.
There she stands against a tree,
Snoozing standing up.
And all the while I take in scents
Of lilac and buttercup.
I approach her like a silent ghost,
And hope not to disturb her.
For if she knew my love lived on
My presence might perturb her.
Hesitantly, I brush my paw
Against her rosey face.
I need to make this last move quick
To not feel out of place.
I brings my lips to meet her own
In one last forbidden kiss,
And then I go to wander on,
Though her smile I shall miss.
I worry not about my tears,
Though I taste them, bitter-sweet.
If fate allows, then once again,
In Mossflower Glade we'll meet.
~Dedicated to Rann Songbreeze, whom I once loved very dearly. You broke my heart before, but I still care for you very much as a friend and I'll always be here to support you!~
(I hope you enjoyed reading this poem. I know I enjoyed writing it.)
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Posted: Wed Feb 22, 2006 7:41 pm
Awww! It was so sweet too! We were fighting earlier, and we didnt think we were gonna be friends again. Eventually, we did. And he wrote this for me!!!! I dont have any new 1s yet... but hopefully I will soon... sweatdrop
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Posted: Mon Feb 27, 2006 4:11 pm
Is any1 gonna post anything any time soon?
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Posted: Tue Feb 28, 2006 12:12 pm
Not to be a nit-picker, but can we try to keep the netspeak to a minimum, please? We'd prefer people not to use it at all in the guild, but it wouldn't bother us too much in OOC or discussion threads.
However, this is a literary-based thread you started, and as such should be written in with a tad more formality.
Sorry if I sound like I have a stick up my butt, I hope you understand.
Thanks.
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Posted: Wed Mar 01, 2006 4:31 pm
Ok. Sorry. I'll try my best.
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