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Wow, I've noticed not many people post any written art here...it kind of makes me feel a little awkward to do this, lol. But anyway. I recently finished writing a chapter of a novel I'm writing (completely out of order, btw), but it somewhat stands as it's own piece. I posted it here: CLICK!

I haven't been able to write for a while, mainly due to college (just gotta say this....I hate math), so my writing is a little rusty. It would be fantastic if anyone could critique it. c: I know it's a little difficult critiquing something that you don't even know the characters of, especially if it's from over half-way into the story, but think of it as it's own thing....

And it you don't want to critique, then at least you got to enjoy a short story! Warning though: it's sad.

How strange, it works on my computer. /: Maybe your internet is acting slow...? I use an ethernet cord where I'm at because the wireless sucks, so I don't know. Thank you for trying though!

well I use chrome, which for the most part generally works fine for me... perhaps because I was checking DA at work, on my lunch break, that something was blocked by our company that didn't let me see it.... I'll try again