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Zaleha

Lonely Seeker

PostPosted: Thu Jan 20, 2011 6:30 am


THis thread has a copy in the Picture post forums.. i just thought posting this here might help me more.
Hello and welcome to my thread.. some of you might recognize me.. razz

he's a really good friend of mine. but i think i have a crush on him.. and i wanted to give him this drawing... He asked me to draw him but from what i think, he was joking when he said it. ^_^ . but i took it seriously. he still doesn't know am this serious about drawing him..LOL. i wanted to thank him for always being there for me..

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NOTES:
1. I know the drawing is small, Did it on purpose. hihi
2. i used one of his pictures as reference. but the original picture was edited(you know, making the picture glow and all that, i can barely see his lips) so i actually imagined and created my own shading. Do you think the shading is alright?
3.The hair is also just my imagination.. as far as i can remember.. i think it looked like that before (i said "before" coz he lives far away from where i am now.. we can only communicate by texting or via internet.)
4. about his position, he just likes taking pictures with his finger like that, like pointing to something/someone.
5. background is also my imagination. i did not intend to make this picture romantic or anything.

WHAT AM ASKING FOR:
Please please tell me small details about my drawing that i might change and make it look better.. i know there are some..
PostPosted: Thu Jan 20, 2011 10:36 am


cool drawing : D !!! I like what you've done with it so far, the hair looks crazy good from a thumbnail point of view : )

Ok so things you can do to help improve your pic : ). I suggest adding different tones in your skin. The human body has many suttle colours in the skin that makes it look the way it does. For instance you have a little blue and purple in your skin because of the veins that are close to the skin. You won't see litteraly blue and purple vains but you will get a hint of thoughs colours in the skin that creats a veriety of colours in your skin palette 3nodding Right now your off to a really good start, you've developped your forms and hinted to the type of lighting in your scene, : D which is marvelous ^-^. But the skin looks a little to uniform. The colours look a little like you used the same colour but just a little darker each time to do the shading. Which is normal, I used to do all my drawings in the past like that haha. But it generaly turns out better if you add cold colours like blues, greens and purples in your shading, and warmer colours to contrast in the lighter areas, like pinks, oranges, browns yellows and colours like that for the more eluminated areas : )

Ok I'm not the best example for realism XD as I'm still trying to learn it myself but heres a pic that I did a while ago.

http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y164/Kai_Chi/rali_04.png

notice how I tried using purples and greens and a little blue in the shadow parts of the skin, along with pinks and light browns yellows and oranges in the areas where the skin is lighten. Its suttle, its not something thats "in your face XD haha" but its still helps create skin that looks more realistic because our skin naturaly have some of these colours in them.

: 3 so if you can, try that out. Try it on a seperate layer and just go crazy and have fun with it, see what it gives, if you want you can post what it gives after and we can see what it gives : ) Good luck ! ^o^ can't wait to see the end result!!!

Kai_Chi
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Zaleha

Lonely Seeker

PostPosted: Thu Jan 20, 2011 2:36 pm


Kai_Chi

ok.. you're sample is crazy good!!! actually its crazy great. and i like it that you actually give samples using your own art.. some people just says look at this and that and it's not even their own..

hmm.. am i might really try that.. i'll be updating this later... have an exam later so need to concentrate on that first..
am already excited on what my drawing might come up to..
Thank you so much for the detailed help.. and i really didn't notice the ears.. lol.. ^_^
Thanks again..
PostPosted: Thu Jan 20, 2011 4:30 pm


yea thats a good idea, school first : ) art for fun after! hehe. But yea try that out see what it gives you, I'm really curious what it will turn out as. If you need help just let me know, I'd be more than happy to help you out : )

Kai_Chi
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Zaleha

Lonely Seeker

PostPosted: Thu Jan 20, 2011 7:38 pm


Kai_Chi
yea thats a good idea, school first : ) art for fun after! hehe. But yea try that out see what it gives you, I'm really curious what it will turn out as. If you need help just let me know, I'd be more than happy to help you out : )

well.. thank you so much!!! ^_^
PostPosted: Thu Jan 20, 2011 7:42 pm


: )

Kai_Chi
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Zaleha

Lonely Seeker

PostPosted: Thu Jan 20, 2011 11:25 pm


Kai_Chi
: )

i think i failed.. bad.. sweatdrop
here:
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 21, 2011 5:39 pm


that's really nice :3 the hair looks amazing :O

is that a peace sign in the background? because if it is, it's missing a spoke.

Inferno Breeze


Kai_Chi
Captain

PostPosted: Fri Jan 21, 2011 5:49 pm


umm ok here let me do a quick mock up version to show you what I mean. I added colours all threw out his face on a seperat layer, then I toned down the colours with the opacity filter. It could be better and needs to be worked on more, but I just did a quick one to give you an idea of what I was talking about. it helps give it a hint of colour in his skin that isen't so monochrome.

User Image - Blocked by "Display Image" Settings. Click to show.

I saved a version of the layer I did ontop to show you how ugly it looked like before I brought down the opacity haha XD but it really helps to add a veriaty of colours into your skin tones. 3nodding
http://i54.tinypic.com/2jdhvyd.png
PostPosted: Sat Jan 22, 2011 10:25 am


Inferno Breeze
that's really nice :3 the hair looks amazing :O

is that a peace sign in the background? because if it is, it's missing a spoke.

lol.. yeah.. someone pointed that out already but thank you also.. the post before yours is the edited version... the peace sign was corrected.. ^_^

Zaleha

Lonely Seeker


Zaleha

Lonely Seeker

PostPosted: Sun Jan 23, 2011 12:26 am


Kai_Chi
umm ok here let me do a quick mock up version to show you what I mean. I added colours all threw out his face on a seperat layer, then I toned down the colours with the opacity filter. It could be better and needs to be worked on more, but I just did a quick one to give you an idea of what I was talking about. it helps give it a hint of colour in his skin that isen't so monochrome.

User Image - Blocked by "Display Image" Settings. Click to show.

I saved a version of the layer I did ontop to show you how ugly it looked like before I brought down the opacity haha XD but it really helps to add a veriaty of colours into your skin tones. 3nodding
http://i54.tinypic.com/2jdhvyd.png

hmm.. the image failed to load.. but i see what you're trying to explain..woow.. it's too colorful and i have no idea how to blend then in.. lol.. am still an amateur when it comes to that.. i really should learn how to do that.. ^_^
PostPosted: Sun Jan 23, 2011 4:29 pm


just bring down the opacity of your layer until the colours merge into something more reasonable. 3nodding

Kai_Chi
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Zaleha

Lonely Seeker

PostPosted: Sun Jan 23, 2011 4:36 pm


Kai_Chi
just bring down the opacity of your layer until the colours merge into something more reasonable. 3nodding

oohh.. well.. i'm really excited to try that.. ^_^.. for now.. i have to prepare, got classes for today.. ^_^ thank you very much for teaching me something new..
PostPosted: Sun Jan 23, 2011 4:42 pm


nu prob biggrin have fun at class!

Kai_Chi
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Zaleha

Lonely Seeker

PostPosted: Sun Jan 23, 2011 4:47 pm


Kai_Chi
nu prob biggrin have fun at class!
thank you very much..
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