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PostPosted: Thu Nov 25, 2010 4:19 am


Hey Guys,

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I like to sing, but obviously I need some help in improving. Leave me any comments heart But please, no harsh comment ^^;;

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PostPosted: Thu Nov 25, 2010 11:14 am


Nice piano playing, on the singing there are a few rough spots you could sand off (mostly your lows) but overall you did a really nice job! Keep it up!

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PostPosted: Thu Nov 25, 2010 5:04 pm


I think Ive seen this thread in Xtreme Skilled Nights too

I will try and rember to check it out later.
PostPosted: Fri Nov 26, 2010 1:05 am


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PostPosted: Fri Nov 26, 2010 2:26 am


Overall, it was very good. Like Shadowshades said, your low notes could be improved, but it was good. You were a bit breathy, try to work on clarity a bit. That might be because of breathing, but I can't exactly tell online. If you find yourself a bit out of breath, try to breathe from your stomach, if that makes any sense. Like low breathing. I woud give you more critique, except I haven't heard your middle voice. This doesn't really have to do with the song itself, but try to enunciate a bit more by exaggerating your vowels. That's basically all I can say, so very well done.
PostPosted: Fri Nov 26, 2010 2:35 am


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Overall, it was very good. Like Shadowshades said, your low notes could be improved, but it was good. You were a bit breathy, try to work on clarity a bit. That might be because of breathing, but I can't exactly tell online. If you find yourself a bit out of breath, try to breathe from your stomach, if that makes any sense. Like low breathing. I woud give you more critique, except I haven't heard your middle voice. This doesn't really have to do with the song itself, but try to enunciate a bit more by exaggerating your vowels. That's basically all I can say, so very well done.


very detailed smile it really helped me a lot
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PostPosted: Sat Nov 27, 2010 10:13 pm


I posted a new song for thanks giving heart
PostPosted: Sun Nov 28, 2010 9:39 am


not bad girl. u sound more like a soprano - maybe a little of an alta - but nice. the piano playing is nice too. now i don't wanna sound like Simon, but this song sounds like a moderate, up beat song, so try to like not slack, u know. and some peculiar reason, this song kinda sounds familiar, well the way you sang it and the way the notes were played, it just sounds familiar. im not sure what sound im trying to think of, but its there. but overall, i liked it. smile

and what kind of songs do you do...like what genre of music, your tempo, etc.?

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PostPosted: Sun Nov 28, 2010 2:30 pm


your piano is really good. heart
your singing is pretty good too, could use a little work though.
PostPosted: Sun Nov 28, 2010 4:55 pm


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not bad girl. u sound more like a soprano - maybe a little of an alta - but nice. the piano playing is nice too. now i don't wanna sound like Simon, but this song sounds like a moderate, up beat song, so try to like not slack, u know. and some peculiar reason, this song kinda sounds familiar, well the way you sang it and the way the notes were played, it just sounds familiar. im not sure what sound im trying to think of, but its there. but overall, i liked it. smile

and what kind of songs do you do...like what genre of music, your tempo, etc.?


Thank you~ I like most songs, and when playing piano, i tend to sing slow songs. Not really much upbeat songs... smile and I didn't get what you meant by that the song kind sounds familiar. The songs I posted are all covers, so they are not original songs by me. thanks for watching! heart

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PostPosted: Sun Nov 28, 2010 4:56 pm


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your piano is really good. heart
your singing is pretty good too, could use a little work though.


Thank you heart ya, some people said that my voice sounds really forced out, but I don't really know how I can improve on that. sweatdrop
PostPosted: Sun Nov 28, 2010 6:27 pm


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your piano is really good. heart
your singing is pretty good too, could use a little work though.


Thank you heart ya, some people said that my voice sounds really forced out, but I don't really know how I can improve on that. sweatdrop


maybe its just your recording device? sweatdrop
I liked the taylor swift cover the best. c:

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PostPosted: Sun Nov 28, 2010 8:15 pm


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Overall, it was very good. Like Shadowshades said, your low notes could be improved, but it was good. You were a bit breathy, try to work on clarity a bit. That might be because of breathing, but I can't exactly tell online. If you find yourself a bit out of breath, try to breathe from your stomach, if that makes any sense. Like low breathing. I woud give you more critique, except I haven't heard your middle voice. This doesn't really have to do with the song itself, but try to enunciate a bit more by exaggerating your vowels. That's basically all I can say, so very well done.


very detailed smile it really helped me a lot
thank you heart

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PostPosted: Sun Nov 28, 2010 9:18 pm


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kodomo_555
whispering your name
your piano is really good. heart
your singing is pretty good too, could use a little work though.


Thank you heart ya, some people said that my voice sounds really forced out, but I don't really know how I can improve on that. sweatdrop


maybe its just your recording device? sweatdrop
I liked the taylor swift cover the best. c:


thank you <3 i love that song !

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