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 Posted: Thu Nov 04, 2010 4:26 pm
vote 4 me in arenas!!
"The Great Maze
Life is like a maze. It's full of traps, obstacles, and choices.
There's entries and exits.
Sometimes people don't make it through the maze. People fall fore traps, made by the devil, or just give up halfway through.
But for the people that make it through the exits are sent into heaven! "
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Posted: Thu Nov 04, 2010 4:32 pm
Is this the first poem you've wrote?
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Posted: Sun Nov 07, 2010 12:28 am
Haha you're poem inspired me for a song I think. Topic wise at least. I like the idea of using a maze as a way to describe life. But I think I'm going to use more of a circles vs. walking straight. See inspired a train of thought! haha thanks
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Posted: Sun Nov 14, 2010 3:21 am
It's wonderful. :3
God Bless you!
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Posted: Sun Nov 14, 2010 3:58 pm
I am a sinner... "1 John 1:8"
cute poem!
... Saved by God's grace "Acts 15:11"
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Posted: Mon Nov 15, 2010 3:28 pm
Very true, it is.
Nice analogy! C:
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Posted: Mon Nov 15, 2010 10:45 pm
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Posted: Fri Dec 17, 2010 7:45 am
CrimsonsDecayingRose Is this the first poem you've wrote? no i write lots! i put a very sad poem about deppresion in the areana too
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Posted: Fri Dec 17, 2010 7:47 am
thx for all the compliements guys! i hope this poem has inspired anyone who read it to think about life diffrently.
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