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 Posted: Mon Jan 18, 2010 7:02 am
Silent screams and faces
Streaked with tears
Darkest nights and too
Many broken fears
Blank stares and
Creepy laughs
Dark figures missing
Their better halves
Broken bones and
Ticking clocks
Shadows waiting
For the Equinox
New founded sorrows with
Dark pools and floods
Lost souls
Bound by blood
Tormented screams
Echoing through the night
Demented demons
Waiting to take flight
Mouths sewn shut with
Blood in a steady flow
Welcome to my
Horror Show Feedback??
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Posted: Mon Jan 18, 2010 11:19 am
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Posted: Mon Jan 18, 2010 11:26 am
This is terrible, and I hate it.
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Posted: Mon Jan 18, 2010 11:26 am
Zahmen II This is terrible, and I hate it. I mean, I really really hate it.
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Posted: Mon Jan 18, 2010 11:30 am
Zahmen II Zahmen II This is terrible, and I hate it. I mean, I really really hate it. No seriously. Your meter is poor, your flow is wonky and juvenile, and your imagery is so overbearing that it's laughable. Also, "The Equinox"? What, do your generic shapeless "goffic" beings really have a hard on for Easter?
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Posted: Mon Jan 18, 2010 11:36 am
Zahmen II Zahmen II Zahmen II This is terrible, and I hate it. I mean, I really really hate it. No seriously. Your meter is poor, your flow is wonky and juvenile, and your imagery is so overbearing that it's laughable. Also, "The Equinox"? What, do your generic shapeless "goffic" beings really have a hard on for Easter? This. Your screen name scares the hell out of me. This message is brought to you in part by the Give Razors to Emos Foundation
Eradicating at least 24 idiots a day.
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Posted: Mon Jan 18, 2010 12:07 pm
Zahmen II Zahmen II Zahmen II This is terrible, and I hate it. I mean, I really really hate it. No seriously. Your meter is poor, your flow is wonky and juvenile, and your imagery is so overbearing that it's laughable. Also, "The Equinox"? What, do your generic shapeless "goffic" beings really have a hard on for Easter? Just kidding. Not really.
Cry some more.
Canada sucks.
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Posted: Mon Feb 22, 2010 4:42 pm
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