White Day event- Promise SasuNaru poem: by Mika_chann

[DeficientLoser]

I'm going to provide everyone a White Day poem dedicated to my long lasting favorite slash pairing. It's free verse.. so... Don't expect too much rhymes.

xd

Promise

A special promise that I made to you,

One that I can not break and shows just how I love you.

I could not say it directly to you,

Fearing that you will hate me for leaving you.

I can not describe how tortured I am on that day, leaving you half dead on the ground.

Although I saddened on that fact, I can not turn back no matter how much my mind yelled at me,

I know I'm a coward, an idiot..

But I have made my decision...

Still...

..I love you.

I promise that I will return...someday.

By: Mika_channn  

[DeficientLoser]

Wow..no comments. Is it that bad?  

[klavierxapollo]

“In the spring, at the end of the day, you should smell like dirt.”-Margaret Atwood

It's really sweet, but it's kind of everywhere.

 

[DeficientLoser]

klavierxapollo

“In the spring, at the end of the day, you should smell like dirt.”-Margaret Atwood

It's really sweet, but it's kind of everywhere.

Everywhere as in random?  

[klavierxapollo]

Mika_chann

klavierxapollo

“In the spring, at the end of the day, you should smell like dirt.”-Margaret Atwood

It's really sweet, but it's kind of everywhere.

Everywhere as in random?

“In the spring, at the end of the day, you should smell like dirt.”-Margaret Atwood

Yeah, just a little, but it's a very beautiful touching poem. smile

 

[Gamexrocks]

It's touching, really. But I don't see the connection to the title.. The title is called Promise...but.. Hm..  

[DeficientLoser]

Gamexrocks

It's touching, really. But I don't see the connection to the title.. The title is called Promise...but.. Hm..

I tried to connect it at the end. But I guess it didn't make any affect at all huh?  

[sweet_caandyy]

omg!!! its rlly good!! 3nodding  

[DeficientLoser]

sweet_caandyy

omg!!! its rlly good!! 3nodding

lol thanks.  

[sasunaru233]

It's interesting.  

[sasunarugurlll]

i luv it!!!!! heart blaugh heart heart  

[Invisible NibbLes]

uhh, it was something.
Though I to tell you the truth I dont think you goes with you and you. I dont know I just personally think that it was bit off.  

[xXSakura-chanxX67]

sasunaru233

It's interesting.

 

[Akira Stitched Heart]

*thumbs up* an amazing poem! 3nodding  

[DeficientLoser]

Invisible NibbLes

uhh, it was something.
Though I to tell you the truth I dont think you goes with you and you. I dont know I just personally think that it was bit off.

It's not suppose to go with me.