This Thread: a Place to put raw words, the ones you cannot really seem to make work. A good place to get pointers-- but make sure they are constructive pieces of criticism. Remember this thread is for the raw materials and by nature aren't perfect.
This is mine, I had a lot of conflicting emotions running through me so I just slapped some random phrases and ideas on a word processor. I think it was an indication of my pain level because I couldn't come up with anything that worked. The last line is in French, and is probably the only line that matters.
Tacos and Bananas:
The path to tomorrow winds through a vacant yesterday. I peel off dead skin, forgetting that it is a piece of me. Somehow I awoke from a placid dream and you were embedded in my very life. My soul is a house. I yearn to walk through long neglected rooms and throw open the shades. It is magnetism—I am drawn in as you push me away and our opposite poles collide. I weep and stumble upon the jagged words of my mind. Je suis en seul.
21+ Gaians Headed for the Home
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