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 Posted: Fri Jan 04, 2008 4:02 am
Sorry for the sudden move..
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Enjoy writing, everyone!
The moderators for this will be: PsycoArsonistArtist, MuffinsODoom, Shizuma Hikari, Maiiz_, XsShepardXofXallXYaoixX, Alex Jenkins and Lady_kuurin.
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Posted: Fri Jan 04, 2008 12:12 pm
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Posted: Tue Jan 15, 2008 6:54 pm
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Posted: Fri Jan 18, 2008 4:08 pm
Lady Kuurin I suppose I'll be the first to put one up...
Well, it is somewhat SasuSaku in the beginning (not really)
But in the end it turns NaruSasu.
--> http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4013883/1/Bad_Day I dont know if its jst my computer.. but your link wouldn't work for me.. could you try a diff. link -- thanks =D
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Posted: Fri Jan 18, 2008 4:54 pm
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Posted: Sat Jan 19, 2008 9:16 pm
Lady Kuurin Sorry, that is my fault. Something went wrong with the story. Here is the new link:
----> http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4019116/1/Bad_Day Yay the link works, but sadly I can't read it cuz i cnt keep my eyes open. SOOO guess what I will read it tomorrow and I will give you feed back K? lol good heart Love ya for fixing the link problem
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Posted: Sat Jan 19, 2008 9:56 pm
I shall sincerely appreciate your feedback.
So far, no one has reviewed my new story.
I have others, on my account.
But they aren't as long.
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Posted: Mon Jan 21, 2008 10:27 am
Hazza!! I am done reading it!
~ I absolutely thought it was adorable. ^^
- now, were the words in ()'s his thougts cuz that shoudl be italisized. Also you went into detail on some of the things that didn't really need too much detail, but liek when Sasuke got out of the shower you could have made it that Naruto maybe said something through the dicipating steam as Sasuke's eyes met the dobes and his look goes from shock to anger to the death glare. And the slow movement to the wall right before naruto lays one on him. I think it could be written differently so its not "... Back, closer. Back, closer. Back, closer ..."
but other than that
~ I loved it. I squeeled when they kissed, how adorable. Wonderfully written looks like time was well speant, and I loved how you started it with the bantering. Is that a trade mark of yours? If not it deff. should.
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Posted: Mon Jan 21, 2008 12:14 pm
Here's something I wrote but it's not quite finished Summary: The competition was near. Everyone expected him to win. But Naruto needed the right inspiration to do so. Even if it meant to sneak upon a sleeping raven and touching him all over. SasuNaru http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3954632/1/Drawing_you_near_me
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Posted: Mon Jan 21, 2008 12:24 pm
Yay!!
Adorable is about all I'm good at, in my opinion.
Hmmm... Actually the stuff in the brackets was more of me speaking on the side. But I'll make sure to make a legend in them in the future.
Oh... Kay. That would make sense. Never thought about the steam... -sweatdrop-
Ah. I was kind of tired of writing at the end, and my brain was slowly dying. I really just wanted them to kiss. I suppose that scene could have had more thought.
Thank you for the advice!! I really appreciate it.
It took me like a month to write.
The bantering is a first for me. Glad you liked it ^_^
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Posted: Mon Jan 21, 2008 1:43 pm
Lady Kuurin Yay!!
Adorable is about all I'm good at, in my opinion.
Hmmm... Actually the stuff in the brackets was more of me speaking on the side. But I'll make sure to make a legend in them in the future.
Oh... Kay. That would make sense. Never thought about the steam... -sweatdrop-
Ah. I was kind of tired of writing at the end, and my brain was slowly dying. I really just wanted them to kiss. I suppose that scene could have had more thought.
Thank you for the advice!! I really appreciate it.
It took me like a month to write.
The bantering is a first for me. Glad you liked it ^_^ It deff. made me giggle the bantering! >< i loved it though. Yeah cuz I took it as he was taking a hot shower, and then it went cold... so steam from hot shower he woudl walk out and have the steam enveloping him as naruto sees him. ^^ hehe.. I think you should write a Naruto side of the story like Wanting to tell him and then have them coincide with one another. --How did Naruto get inside Sasuke's house anyway??
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Posted: Mon Jan 21, 2008 1:44 pm
Nanari Uchiha Here's something I wrote but it's not quite finished Summary: The competition was near. Everyone expected him to win. But Naruto needed the right inspiration to do so. Even if it meant to sneak upon a sleeping raven and touching him all over. SasuNaru http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3954632/1/Drawing_you_near_me Okay, Woo! another one- You are next! muahahahahaha I love this forum it rocks!
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Posted: Mon Jan 21, 2008 5:19 pm
Heehee.
Yes, I suppose I should have thought of that. I guess Sasuke doesn't lock his door, or he was too preoccupied at the moment.
Heh, that would be funny. I might have to try that.
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Posted: Tue Jan 22, 2008 8:21 pm
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Posted: Thu Jan 24, 2008 6:10 pm
Extremely off the topic but- Would anyone be interested in writing a fanfiction that others could work off of once you are finished to continue the story line from different perspectives and ideas and levels of yaoi-ness and dobe sasu ness. ^^ I think it would be fun. PM me if you like this idea and I will put specifics.
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