I usually don't like poems that are written like this, but I try not to judge things based on their style. That would be very rude of me.
But you like it a lot, and that's what matters most. ^-^
So, anyway, I like the idea behind the poem. Very motivational and empowering.
When I read it, I could almost put music to the words. It would make a very interesting song.
There's not much else that I can think of to say, other than I'm sorry that I prefer poems to rhyme at least a little bit. o.o;
Overall, though, it's good. Nice work. <3
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