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[The Pantera King]

Sazie Chan

xXShadow the Wolf ChildXx

Sazie Chan

R0uge The Bat

I've been wanting to ask this for awhile, but.. wasn't sure how to put it.

The characters I have, I'm not sure about one of them being allowed here. His back story is tied with Shadow's slightly on the Space Colony ARK. Although Shadow has never met him, as he is his younger brother. Gerald had to keep them separated because of some trouble Light had, by controlling his chaos energy. He needed training and extra tests.

anyway, I tried making some sense into it last time when I was in the older guild. Though I was too busy last time. I'm going to try that again, now that I'm less busy. As long as Light is okay, that's what I'm mostly wondering about. Since hes like in Shadow's timeline. Not sure if that's allowed here or not.

Meph didn't like my idea os my character being raised and trained by the main characters, so I made a change in the background story that worked for the guild. Although his feeling toward them are still the same even though they never met, which is an important part of his story. But I did keep the original version intact for the mini rp section because they are anything goes. So you can keep D.L. and Light's profile, just keep them labeled for mini rps

And you should edit that post in How Long is Forever into a real post. I already pmed you a suggestion if that helps

But don't I need like approved status to even rp in the mini rp? I do want to use Nina, but her profile isn't finished.

Sorry we've just been backed up with work and RL situations. Nina should be accepted now though, but I sent a pm going over some other characters of yours.

 

[The Pantera King]

xXShadow the Wolf ChildXx

MephiIes the Dark

Sazie Chan

R0uge The Bat

xXShadow the Wolf ChildXx

The roleplay's in the guild have been delayed due to "RL" situations with most of the guild's members. High School, College, Work, or Life in general. Everyone's being kept really busy as of late and it's the same situation for another RP thread that I am a part of.

Shadow, I've questioned your oc with having relations to actual characters because like I said in the past, it is truly unfair to the people who decide to rp those characters to have to portray that they already know your OC so well. Because you yourself as your oc, could walk up to Sonic and treat him like a brother, yet that Sonic might not even have a clue how to react or know who your character is and if the person being Sonic decides to deny any relation to your character, you will have to change your bio. It can't be up to you for your own OC to know personally, any canon characters.

It's up to whoever is the person rp'ing that Canon character on whether or not if they will allow a relationship with their character and your Original character. I know some people themselves who made it clear they didn't want their characters related to OC's from the get go. So again, that would mean you can't just say that your OC knew or was trained by someone elses Canon character. Rather it be Sonic, Shadow, etc. You want your oc to be related to canon characters, you need to earn that relation through the rp. It's difficult to say someone like Shadow the Ultimate Lifeform would take up to just anyone. So let's say for example, he might not want anything to do with your OC even if you tried interacting with him, unless you had something he needed. lol

Although we know Sonic is pretty young and he has practically gone through and done it all, you tried to portray that your own character can basically do all that Sonic, Shadow the Hedgehog, and Tails can do, combined.

He has speed like Sonic, smarts like Tails to be able to create his own guns or vehicles, and he is able to utilize the Chaos Emeralds like the Ultimate Lifeform. In all honesty it feels like the only thing you left out is if he had the ability to fly like Silver.

Only a select few are truly capable of harnessing a chaos emerald or all seven of them. Even then, Shadow himself has been the only true one mastering chaos control.

In mechanic smarts, I'd like to think Tails is a special case being as young as he is and yet as tech-smart as he is. You've made your character almost that smart, but also a sword master, gun master, and gunsmith, and he has his own version of a dark form and something similar to a super form that amplifies his skills.

I've read the bio and it seems greatly put together. The only two issues I have in putting his bio into an rp, is the idea he is related to almost all the heroes and was seemingly trained by them, and the idea that he is capable of doing almost anything there is that can be done.

I'm truly sorry it seems like I'm going after your character like this. I don't mean to attack your oc... You've put a ton of hard work into it, and it looks amazing. But from how much you did give him, is just overwhelming...

But know that this doesn't just go for your OC. This goes for anyone who wants to make their OC related to a Canon. You're not the only one I've had to go through with this, Shadow. I've had to tell this same situation with a few others and then only a few things needed to be changed with their bio's and it was fine after that.

I made two different copies on my profile.
a guild version and the original version for mini rps

The backstory in the guild version has been changed. And as for his abilities, they are capped down and have risk factors side effects. And I made statments that he rarely uses those abilities. I know it seems overwhelming, but I assure you its only highly detailed. Hes fast, but only fast as the wind. Not like Sonic who can break the sound barriar. He's not as powerful as Shadow, though he can only use chaos control only with an emerald because of the demon stone inside him. And he's only a gearhead when it comes to smarts. He's not a genius like tails who can build hightech machinery. His head might explode.

And he probably only looks powerful because I haven't revealed everything yet since he's only a developing character.

The only thing he relies on are his combat skills, evasive techniques and his wits.

Ill probably might need to read this post again so I can type down into the guild version to make it more clear.

Im happy to be set as an example to help.
Hopefully this quote might help a little more on what people with OCs like mine can do as an alternative if their creativity seems to get out of hand.

Detail wise Kiro is very well put together. I'm sorry that we had to come out with having so many situations with him because of his relationships with canon characters. As for his abilities wise, I don't mind him being a gearhead or fluent in fighting techniques. But more or less it's just he can make guns, swords, is fluent in mechanics, has some martial arts training, can work on making air-boards or figuring out cars, and he knows how to drive said vehicles while being fifteen years old, a highschool student, and a vigilante.

it's not having it in detail, it's how many things you DO have in detail. lol He can do so much, but he's so young. He can make swords, and know how to use them, make guns, know how to use them, and work on making vehicles and gadgets and know how to operate them while also having his own personal "Nicole". Each category is something different entirely. He may as well be much smarter than Tails to be able to comprehend all of this at such a young age. He also has his own abilities and techniques with martial arts. Adding unto the power that the Demon Stone and Wind abilities give him even if they drain his strength faster.

What I'm curious about is for a young Mobian who now enrolled as a highschool student and is now also a vigilante that had gone to the future, killed any enemy in his path and then go back in time, where and how does he have the time to master/accomplish all of this from the ages of 7 to 15? That's what is overwhelming. He'd have to learn how to control the demon stone, how to utilize his own wind powers, how to create swords and master swordsmanship(learned a bit from his master), how to build guns and learn marksmanship, and be fluent in technology to build his own air-boards, and further hone his own skills in being able to ride one.

If anything, he's just too young to have been able to go through all of this with a stable mind or physical body to put up with it. Even if he were a fast learner, being able to do all that he does is still pushing the boundaries a bit in learning. Especially through all that he's gone through with losing family and having gone to the future of a wasteland. From what I've seen in the bio, he's more or less leaning towards mastery in sword fighting above all else because of his master.

 

[Sazie Chan]

MephiIes the Dark

Sazie Chan

R0uge The Bat

Sazie Chan

R0uge The Bat

I've been wanting to ask this for awhile, but.. wasn't sure how to put it.

The characters I have, I'm not sure about one of them being allowed here. His back story is tied with Shadow's slightly on the Space Colony ARK. Although Shadow has never met him, as he is his younger brother. Gerald had to keep them separated because of some trouble Light had, by controlling his chaos energy. He needed training and extra tests.

anyway, I tried making some sense into it last time when I was in the older guild. Though I was too busy last time. I'm going to try that again, now that I'm less busy. As long as Light is okay, that's what I'm mostly wondering about. Since hes like in Shadow's timeline. Not sure if that's allowed here or not.

I will have to have a chat about this to Mephiles.
Because we don't really accept brothers or anyone related to the main characters or anything due to problems in the past.

With your OC's... there is a limit to how many you can have (Unless you feel happy to roleplay them all?) Then again, I have to have a talk to Mephiles as it's not only my choice but his as well.


I haven't really been active much due to issues and such. Mephiles is busy as far as I know, but will try my best to talk to him as it's something we do with ALL OC's and review them together but since there is a few OC's there...it may take a little while to come to an understanding.

But - There is more OC's then mains which we are thinking everyone needs to pick a main as well as it is getting a bit OC crowded (My wording is terrible xD; -Is tired from work lol-

Sorry about the delay, we will do our best to make it fast as possible >.<
(Timezones and such as I live in New Zealand sweatdrop )

That's why I asked first, but also posted it so you guys can review it. It's not too much trouble for me to rp more then one character, as I have done it in the past before. I just find it fun with a few, but I won't add too many. I have a limit. Nina is just the last character I'm adding. Sazie is my main OC though, although she might need a lot of fixing cause her past is too much creative. I'd have to tone it down if I added more to her story. Although if it's fine with my main and my other OC's, then I don't mind if Light/ D.L isn't added. Even though he is my favorite. xD

Also it's fine, don't rush yourself too much. I'm pretty patient, sorry I panicked though. I thought something bad happened for a sec.

Even though Sazie is your main, I'd hate to see that you'd have to drop Light/Dark Light from how much work you put into him. But it is true that his somewhat relationship of being the ultimate lifeform's twin brother, is unfair in giving him a relationship to Shadow like that from the very start since he is an OC.

If you're alright with working around a few details (and I'd help out if you want) we can work around some things and still have Light accepted.

Yes, please! I'd really appreciate the help. It took so long for Light's profile to be written, so some ideas on what to work on would really help a lot.

Also I am still thinking of updating his looks, cause it hasn't been updated in a long time. They look too much like twins and I didn't really want them to be twins. I'll be redesigning him, although he'll still be a white hedgehog with gold streaks in away. He'll just be different, if I can draw something much nicer. gotta get my brain working on ideas, but I'll have to wait until my cold is gone first. Just so I can draw it later.  

[xXShadow the Wolf ChildXx]

MephiIes the Dark

xXShadow the Wolf ChildXx

MephiIes the Dark

Sazie Chan

R0uge The Bat

xXShadow the Wolf ChildXx

The roleplay's in the guild have been delayed due to "RL" situations with most of the guild's members. High School, College, Work, or Life in general. Everyone's being kept really busy as of late and it's the same situation for another RP thread that I am a part of.

Shadow, I've questioned your oc with having relations to actual characters because like I said in the past, it is truly unfair to the people who decide to rp those characters to have to portray that they already know your OC so well. Because you yourself as your oc, could walk up to Sonic and treat him like a brother, yet that Sonic might not even have a clue how to react or know who your character is and if the person being Sonic decides to deny any relation to your character, you will have to change your bio. It can't be up to you for your own OC to know personally, any canon characters.

It's up to whoever is the person rp'ing that Canon character on whether or not if they will allow a relationship with their character and your Original character. I know some people themselves who made it clear they didn't want their characters related to OC's from the get go. So again, that would mean you can't just say that your OC knew or was trained by someone elses Canon character. Rather it be Sonic, Shadow, etc. You want your oc to be related to canon characters, you need to earn that relation through the rp. It's difficult to say someone like Shadow the Ultimate Lifeform would take up to just anyone. So let's say for example, he might not want anything to do with your OC even if you tried interacting with him, unless you had something he needed. lol

Although we know Sonic is pretty young and he has practically gone through and done it all, you tried to portray that your own character can basically do all that Sonic, Shadow the Hedgehog, and Tails can do, combined.

He has speed like Sonic, smarts like Tails to be able to create his own guns or vehicles, and he is able to utilize the Chaos Emeralds like the Ultimate Lifeform. In all honesty it feels like the only thing you left out is if he had the ability to fly like Silver.

Only a select few are truly capable of harnessing a chaos emerald or all seven of them. Even then, Shadow himself has been the only true one mastering chaos control.

In mechanic smarts, I'd like to think Tails is a special case being as young as he is and yet as tech-smart as he is. You've made your character almost that smart, but also a sword master, gun master, and gunsmith, and he has his own version of a dark form and something similar to a super form that amplifies his skills.

I've read the bio and it seems greatly put together. The only two issues I have in putting his bio into an rp, is the idea he is related to almost all the heroes and was seemingly trained by them, and the idea that he is capable of doing almost anything there is that can be done.

I'm truly sorry it seems like I'm going after your character like this. I don't mean to attack your oc... You've put a ton of hard work into it, and it looks amazing. But from how much you did give him, is just overwhelming...

But know that this doesn't just go for your OC. This goes for anyone who wants to make their OC related to a Canon. You're not the only one I've had to go through with this, Shadow. I've had to tell this same situation with a few others and then only a few things needed to be changed with their bio's and it was fine after that.

I made two different copies on my profile.
a guild version and the original version for mini rps

The backstory in the guild version has been changed. And as for his abilities, they are capped down and have risk factors side effects. And I made statments that he rarely uses those abilities. I know it seems overwhelming, but I assure you its only highly detailed. Hes fast, but only fast as the wind. Not like Sonic who can break the sound barriar. He's not as powerful as Shadow, though he can only use chaos control only with an emerald because of the demon stone inside him. And he's only a gearhead when it comes to smarts. He's not a genius like tails who can build hightech machinery. His head might explode.

And he probably only looks powerful because I haven't revealed everything yet since he's only a developing character.

The only thing he relies on are his combat skills, evasive techniques and his wits.

Ill probably might need to read this post again so I can type down into the guild version to make it more clear.

Im happy to be set as an example to help.
Hopefully this quote might help a little more on what people with OCs like mine can do as an alternative if their creativity seems to get out of hand.

Detail wise Kiro is very well put together. I'm sorry that we had to come out with having so many situations with him because of his relationships with canon characters. As for his abilities wise, I don't mind him being a gearhead or fluent in fighting techniques. But more or less it's just he can make guns, swords, is fluent in mechanics, has some martial arts training, can work on making air-boards or figuring out cars, and he knows how to drive said vehicles while being fifteen years old, a highschool student, and a vigilante.

it's not having it in detail, it's how many things you DO have in detail. lol He can do so much, but he's so young. He can make swords, and know how to use them, make guns, know how to use them, and work on making vehicles and gadgets and know how to operate them while also having his own personal "Nicole". Each category is something different entirely. He may as well be much smarter than Tails to be able to comprehend all of this at such a young age. He also has his own abilities and techniques with martial arts. Adding unto the power that the Demon Stone and Wind abilities give him even if they drain his strength faster.

What I'm curious about is for a young Mobian who now enrolled as a highschool student and is now also a vigilante that had gone to the future, killed any enemy in his path and then go back in time, where and how does he have the time to master/accomplish all of this from the ages of 7 to 15? That's what is overwhelming. He'd have to learn how to control the demon stone, how to utilize his own wind powers, how to create swords and master swordsmanship(learned a bit from his master), how to build guns and learn marksmanship, and be fluent in technology to build his own air-boards, and further hone his own skills in being able to ride one.

If anything, he's just too young to have been able to go through all of this with a stable mind or physical body to put up with it. Even if he were a fast learner, being able to do all that he does is still pushing the boundaries a bit in learning. Especially through all that he's gone through with losing family and having gone to the future of a wasteland. From what I've seen in the bio, he's more or less leaning towards mastery in sword fighting above all else because of his master.

(Re editted to explain more. Little spoiler to make things easy)
As shown in his guild version bio, he was trained and raised by the leader of a team of freedom fighter mercenaries who had also connections with GUN. While he spent his days as a kid and living with his foster family, his master would always come by and teach him everything he knew because Kiro was prodigy and had unquie natural assets that aided his development. But he was a complete natural at riding air board ever since he was little. Like little kids starting out with skateboard and becoming daredevils and thrill seekers later on in life. And with such a high interest in wanting to become a hero one day like the freedom fighters and high rowdy personaility while he was growing up, learning new things was always the first thing on his mind. Around the time he heard about Sonic ans Shadow, he read news papers and stories from Kouta and his team around maybe 10 or 11, which is when he saw them as rolemodels because they were hedgehogs like him. Because they were speical in their own way and he thought he was the only hedgehog with natural skills like them such as running and reflexes the way they do in combat. The super speed and power are an entirely different story, which he eventually picked up later on in his story. So is the way his body is built and his height for a hedgehog his age. It made it a little difficult for him to make friends at school during his time living with his foster family at brightwood city because of how strange he is. Possibly he wanted to be a hero because he wanted to be acknowledged and not be an outcast anymore. Now he just doesn't care that much anymore because he has more important things to worry about.

Kouta's team members were specialists in different fields like mechanics and marksmanship. Kiro picked up a thing or two along with them as Kouta was training him combat and swordsmanship. Although he was just a trainee, what really pushed him into further heights was the brightwood massacre, which happened on his 13th birthday and living in the future wasteland called the deadlands for two and a half years. He doesnt know how or why he ended up over a thousand years in the future, but part of his story his figuring out how it happened and finding the people responsible behind everything. So he just picked off from what he learned and sharpened his skills through his time of survival as he fought his way to get back home. It did drive him to near suicide, but he never forgot what he was taught in finding hope at the lowest point and never giving up from his master and the examples he learnedly from the stories of the freedom fighters. In the future, he learned something bad is going to happen to mobius and hes trying to stop the events leading up to the world becoming the deadlands from unfolding. Even though he knew he could no longer become a hero anymore, he accepted his fate and chose to live as the outcast he always was to find the truth behind everything as soon as he made it back to his original time period.


Starting by tracking down two people who are working behind the scenes that are plotting these events to occur. One in the GUN and one he knows well In the Freedom Fighters. Thats why he broke into GUN as the metal angel and stole that project. It was part of thier scheme.
And that's only the first part of his story. And yes, he's still undergoing vigorous training to hone on his wind abilities that are charged by the ring power the power sword wields and physical training for his body to get used to the demonic chaos energy so the side effects don't hit him hard during his fights, which has been extremely difficult for him. He still doesn't know anything about the stone's power or origin, but the hooded woman perfers to spectate him a little longer to see if he can figure a few things out on how things go the way he is now , although he prefers not to use it no matter what. But there will come times when he'll have no choice, even though he has no control over it.
This is something I have not mentioned in the profile since maybe id let you all find out more about him as you rped with him, but I guess ill let just this little spoiler slip.  

[The Pantera King]

xXShadow the Wolf ChildXx

MephiIes the Dark

xXShadow the Wolf ChildXx

MephiIes the Dark

Sazie Chan

R0uge The Bat

xXShadow the Wolf ChildXx

The roleplay's in the guild have been delayed due to "RL" situations with most of the guild's members. High School, College, Work, or Life in general. Everyone's being kept really busy as of late and it's the same situation for another RP thread that I am a part of.

Shadow, I've questioned your oc with having relations to actual characters because like I said in the past, it is truly unfair to the people who decide to rp those characters to have to portray that they already know your OC so well. Because you yourself as your oc, could walk up to Sonic and treat him like a brother, yet that Sonic might not even have a clue how to react or know who your character is and if the person being Sonic decides to deny any relation to your character, you will have to change your bio. It can't be up to you for your own OC to know personally, any canon characters.

It's up to whoever is the person rp'ing that Canon character on whether or not if they will allow a relationship with their character and your Original character. I know some people themselves who made it clear they didn't want their characters related to OC's from the get go. So again, that would mean you can't just say that your OC knew or was trained by someone elses Canon character. Rather it be Sonic, Shadow, etc. You want your oc to be related to canon characters, you need to earn that relation through the rp. It's difficult to say someone like Shadow the Ultimate Lifeform would take up to just anyone. So let's say for example, he might not want anything to do with your OC even if you tried interacting with him, unless you had something he needed. lol

Although we know Sonic is pretty young and he has practically gone through and done it all, you tried to portray that your own character can basically do all that Sonic, Shadow the Hedgehog, and Tails can do, combined.

He has speed like Sonic, smarts like Tails to be able to create his own guns or vehicles, and he is able to utilize the Chaos Emeralds like the Ultimate Lifeform. In all honesty it feels like the only thing you left out is if he had the ability to fly like Silver.

Only a select few are truly capable of harnessing a chaos emerald or all seven of them. Even then, Shadow himself has been the only true one mastering chaos control.

In mechanic smarts, I'd like to think Tails is a special case being as young as he is and yet as tech-smart as he is. You've made your character almost that smart, but also a sword master, gun master, and gunsmith, and he has his own version of a dark form and something similar to a super form that amplifies his skills.

I've read the bio and it seems greatly put together. The only two issues I have in putting his bio into an rp, is the idea he is related to almost all the heroes and was seemingly trained by them, and the idea that he is capable of doing almost anything there is that can be done.

I'm truly sorry it seems like I'm going after your character like this. I don't mean to attack your oc... You've put a ton of hard work into it, and it looks amazing. But from how much you did give him, is just overwhelming...

But know that this doesn't just go for your OC. This goes for anyone who wants to make their OC related to a Canon. You're not the only one I've had to go through with this, Shadow. I've had to tell this same situation with a few others and then only a few things needed to be changed with their bio's and it was fine after that.

I made two different copies on my profile.
a guild version and the original version for mini rps

The backstory in the guild version has been changed. And as for his abilities, they are capped down and have risk factors side effects. And I made statments that he rarely uses those abilities. I know it seems overwhelming, but I assure you its only highly detailed. Hes fast, but only fast as the wind. Not like Sonic who can break the sound barriar. He's not as powerful as Shadow, though he can only use chaos control only with an emerald because of the demon stone inside him. And he's only a gearhead when it comes to smarts. He's not a genius like tails who can build hightech machinery. His head might explode.

And he probably only looks powerful because I haven't revealed everything yet since he's only a developing character.

The only thing he relies on are his combat skills, evasive techniques and his wits.

Ill probably might need to read this post again so I can type down into the guild version to make it more clear.

Im happy to be set as an example to help.
Hopefully this quote might help a little more on what people with OCs like mine can do as an alternative if their creativity seems to get out of hand.

Detail wise Kiro is very well put together. I'm sorry that we had to come out with having so many situations with him because of his relationships with canon characters. As for his abilities wise, I don't mind him being a gearhead or fluent in fighting techniques. But more or less it's just he can make guns, swords, is fluent in mechanics, has some martial arts training, can work on making air-boards or figuring out cars, and he knows how to drive said vehicles while being fifteen years old, a highschool student, and a vigilante.

it's not having it in detail, it's how many things you DO have in detail. lol He can do so much, but he's so young. He can make swords, and know how to use them, make guns, know how to use them, and work on making vehicles and gadgets and know how to operate them while also having his own personal "Nicole". Each category is something different entirely. He may as well be much smarter than Tails to be able to comprehend all of this at such a young age. He also has his own abilities and techniques with martial arts. Adding unto the power that the Demon Stone and Wind abilities give him even if they drain his strength faster.

What I'm curious about is for a young Mobian who now enrolled as a highschool student and is now also a vigilante that had gone to the future, killed any enemy in his path and then go back in time, where and how does he have the time to master/accomplish all of this from the ages of 7 to 15? That's what is overwhelming. He'd have to learn how to control the demon stone, how to utilize his own wind powers, how to create swords and master swordsmanship(learned a bit from his master), how to build guns and learn marksmanship, and be fluent in technology to build his own air-boards, and further hone his own skills in being able to ride one.

If anything, he's just too young to have been able to go through all of this with a stable mind or physical body to put up with it. Even if he were a fast learner, being able to do all that he does is still pushing the boundaries a bit in learning. Especially through all that he's gone through with losing family and having gone to the future of a wasteland. From what I've seen in the bio, he's more or less leaning towards mastery in sword fighting above all else because of his master.

(Re editted to explain more. Little spoiler to make things easy)
As shown in his guild version bio, he was trained and raised by the leader of a team of freedom fighter mercenaries who had also connections with GUN. While he spent his days as a kid and living with his foster family, his master would always come by and teach him everything he knew because Kiro was prodigy and had unquie natural assets that aided his development. But he was a complete natural at riding air board ever since he was little. Like little kids starting out with skateboard and becoming daredevils and thrill seekers later on in life. And with such a high interest in wanting to become a hero one day like the freedom fighters and high rowdy personaility while he was growing up, learning new things was always the first thing on his mind. Around the time he heard about Sonic ans Shadow, he read news papers and stories from Kouta and his team around maybe 10 or 11, which is when he saw them as rolemodels because they were hedgehogs like him. Because they were speical in their own way and he thought he was the only hedgehog with natural skills like them such as running and reflexes the way they do in combat. The super speed and power are an entirely different story, which he eventually picked up later on in his story. So is the way his body is built and his height for a hedgehog his age. It made it a little difficult for him to make friends at school during his time living with his foster family at brightwood city because of how strange he is. Possibly he wanted to be a hero because he wanted to be acknowledged and not be an outcast anymore. Now he just doesn't care that much anymore because he has more important things to worry about.

Kouta's team members were specialists in different fields like mechanics and marksmanship. Kiro picked up a thing or two along with them as Kouta was training him combat and swordsmanship. Although he was just a trainee, what really pushed him into further heights was the brightwood massacre, which happened on his 13th birthday and living in the future wasteland called the deadlands for two and a half years. He doesnt know how or why he ended up over a thousand years in the future, but part of his story his figuring out how it happened and finding the people responsible behind everything. So he just picked off from what he learned and sharpened his skills through his time of survival as he fought his way to get back home. It did drive him to near suicide, but he never forgot what he was taught in finding hope at the lowest point and never giving up from his master and the examples he learnedly from the stories of the freedom fighters. In the future, he learned something bad is going to happen to mobius and hes trying to stop the events leading up to the world becoming the deadlands from unfolding. Even though he knew he could no longer become a hero anymore, he accepted his fate and chose to live as the outcast he always was to find the truth behind everything as soon as he made it back to his original time period.


Starting by tracking down two people who are working behind the scenes that are plotting these events to occur. One in the GUN and one he knows well In the Freedom Fighters. Thats why he broke into GUN as the metal angel and stole that project. It was part of thier scheme.
And that's only the first part of his story. And yes, he's still undergoing vigorous training to hone on his wind abilities that are charged by the ring power the power sword wields and physical training for his body to get used to the demonic chaos energy so the side effects don't hit him hard during his fights, which has been extremely difficult for him. He still doesn't know anything about the stone's power or origin, but the hooded woman perfers to spectate him a little longer to see if he can figure a few things out on how things go the way he is now , although he prefers not to use it no matter what. But there will come times when he'll have no choice, even though he has no control over it.
This is something I have not mentioned in the profile since maybe id let you all find out more about him as you rped with him, but I guess ill let just this little spoiler slip.

What you're making then, is actually going beyond a character profile. You're attempting to create a story/arc/plot revolved around your character and the future he's attempting to save. This is a predicament in a way because it counteracts the future that Silver comes from, unless we're going by a multiverse sort of situation where Kiro went to a different future from Silver's own. Otherwise the world wouldn't be a wasteland, it would still be a world engulfed in Iblis's flame and destruction even if it were much more than 200 years that Silver came from because Iblis's flame is endless.

You're putting a little bit of every character into one. Him having similar/but not exact/ techniques like Sonic, him going to the future and than coming back to the past to "save the future from disaster" like Silver, and in the future he befriends an elder scientist and his daughter exactly like Shadow had done with Gerald and Maria. I won't question your creativity in it all, but you're taking bits and parts of other unique characters and putting them into your own, though they are being tweaked a bit.

There can't really be "spoilers" to a character because what you may attempt to add/reveal later on, may not even be allowed and may be against the entirety of the guild. That's why arcs and plots are thought up and shared with the entire guild. To make sure everyone is for the idea, rather than throwing everyone into the unknown. Otherwise there might turn out to be several more characters supposedly from a "destroyed future" and hoping to save that future. Things would get out of hand. Metal Angel trying to search out and exact revenge on the ones that killed his family and friends is something personal and well put and he can still be searching for them throughout the rp and gain friends that may help him out, but having him trying to save the future from disaster by interfering with events that lead up to that future, is much more vast and is already being done with Silver from the future.

To make it more compatible if you'd like, he could be from nearly 300 years in the future instead. Things are still in chaos and Iblis's fire is everywhere, but perhaps there would still be some barren wastelands where those half metallic overlords are trying to survive. if you've watched Fist of the North Star, it could be something similar to that to make his future more compatible. However, the part that Kiro could be trying to save, is that perhaps some evil entities aim to destroy the planet itself and right before they accomplished it in that future that Kiro was in, Kiro managed to teleport back to his own time. Later figuring out that the plan to annihilate the earth had something to do with G.U.N, Eggman's Empire, or the Freedom Fighters. Or a select few working together from all three factions? He could also learn a bit of Silver's own mission from preventing the world from becoming engulfed in flame by Iblis's awakening. Perhaps he got word of it from the future itself, or finds out more details about it from those who know Silver.

 

[xXShadow the Wolf ChildXx]

MephiIes the Dark

xXShadow the Wolf ChildXx

MephiIes the Dark

xXShadow the Wolf ChildXx

MephiIes the Dark

The roleplay's in the guild have been delayed due to "RL" situations with most of the guild's members. High School, College, Work, or Life in general. Everyone's being kept really busy as of late and it's the same situation for another RP thread that I am a part of.

Shadow, I've questioned your oc with having relations to actual characters because like I said in the past, it is truly unfair to the people who decide to rp those characters to have to portray that they already know your OC so well. Because you yourself as your oc, could walk up to Sonic and treat him like a brother, yet that Sonic might not even have a clue how to react or know who your character is and if the person being Sonic decides to deny any relation to your character, you will have to change your bio. It can't be up to you for your own OC to know personally, any canon characters.

It's up to whoever is the person rp'ing that Canon character on whether or not if they will allow a relationship with their character and your Original character. I know some people themselves who made it clear they didn't want their characters related to OC's from the get go. So again, that would mean you can't just say that your OC knew or was trained by someone elses Canon character. Rather it be Sonic, Shadow, etc. You want your oc to be related to canon characters, you need to earn that relation through the rp. It's difficult to say someone like Shadow the Ultimate Lifeform would take up to just anyone. So let's say for example, he might not want anything to do with your OC even if you tried interacting with him, unless you had something he needed. lol

Although we know Sonic is pretty young and he has practically gone through and done it all, you tried to portray that your own character can basically do all that Sonic, Shadow the Hedgehog, and Tails can do, combined.

He has speed like Sonic, smarts like Tails to be able to create his own guns or vehicles, and he is able to utilize the Chaos Emeralds like the Ultimate Lifeform. In all honesty it feels like the only thing you left out is if he had the ability to fly like Silver.

Only a select few are truly capable of harnessing a chaos emerald or all seven of them. Even then, Shadow himself has been the only true one mastering chaos control.

In mechanic smarts, I'd like to think Tails is a special case being as young as he is and yet as tech-smart as he is. You've made your character almost that smart, but also a sword master, gun master, and gunsmith, and he has his own version of a dark form and something similar to a super form that amplifies his skills.

I've read the bio and it seems greatly put together. The only two issues I have in putting his bio into an rp, is the idea he is related to almost all the heroes and was seemingly trained by them, and the idea that he is capable of doing almost anything there is that can be done.

I'm truly sorry it seems like I'm going after your character like this. I don't mean to attack your oc... You've put a ton of hard work into it, and it looks amazing. But from how much you did give him, is just overwhelming...

But know that this doesn't just go for your OC. This goes for anyone who wants to make their OC related to a Canon. You're not the only one I've had to go through with this, Shadow. I've had to tell this same situation with a few others and then only a few things needed to be changed with their bio's and it was fine after that.

I made two different copies on my profile.
a guild version and the original version for mini rps

The backstory in the guild version has been changed. And as for his abilities, they are capped down and have risk factors side effects. And I made statments that he rarely uses those abilities. I know it seems overwhelming, but I assure you its only highly detailed. Hes fast, but only fast as the wind. Not like Sonic who can break the sound barriar. He's not as powerful as Shadow, though he can only use chaos control only with an emerald because of the demon stone inside him. And he's only a gearhead when it comes to smarts. He's not a genius like tails who can build hightech machinery. His head might explode.

And he probably only looks powerful because I haven't revealed everything yet since he's only a developing character.

The only thing he relies on are his combat skills, evasive techniques and his wits.

Ill probably might need to read this post again so I can type down into the guild version to make it more clear.

Im happy to be set as an example to help.
Hopefully this quote might help a little more on what people with OCs like mine can do as an alternative if their creativity seems to get out of hand.

Detail wise Kiro is very well put together. I'm sorry that we had to come out with having so many situations with him because of his relationships with canon characters. As for his abilities wise, I don't mind him being a gearhead or fluent in fighting techniques. But more or less it's just he can make guns, swords, is fluent in mechanics, has some martial arts training, can work on making air-boards or figuring out cars, and he knows how to drive said vehicles while being fifteen years old, a highschool student, and a vigilante.

it's not having it in detail, it's how many things you DO have in detail. lol He can do so much, but he's so young. He can make swords, and know how to use them, make guns, know how to use them, and work on making vehicles and gadgets and know how to operate them while also having his own personal "Nicole". Each category is something different entirely. He may as well be much smarter than Tails to be able to comprehend all of this at such a young age. He also has his own abilities and techniques with martial arts. Adding unto the power that the Demon Stone and Wind abilities give him even if they drain his strength faster.

What I'm curious about is for a young Mobian who now enrolled as a highschool student and is now also a vigilante that had gone to the future, killed any enemy in his path and then go back in time, where and how does he have the time to master/accomplish all of this from the ages of 7 to 15? That's what is overwhelming. He'd have to learn how to control the demon stone, how to utilize his own wind powers, how to create swords and master swordsmanship(learned a bit from his master), how to build guns and learn marksmanship, and be fluent in technology to build his own air-boards, and further hone his own skills in being able to ride one.

If anything, he's just too young to have been able to go through all of this with a stable mind or physical body to put up with it. Even if he were a fast learner, being able to do all that he does is still pushing the boundaries a bit in learning. Especially through all that he's gone through with losing family and having gone to the future of a wasteland. From what I've seen in the bio, he's more or less leaning towards mastery in sword fighting above all else because of his master.

(Re editted to explain more. Little spoiler to make things easy)
As shown in his guild version bio, he was trained and raised by the leader of a team of freedom fighter mercenaries who had also connections with GUN. While he spent his days as a kid and living with his foster family, his master would always come by and teach him everything he knew because Kiro was prodigy and had unquie natural assets that aided his development. But he was a complete natural at riding air board ever since he was little. Like little kids starting out with skateboard and becoming daredevils and thrill seekers later on in life. And with such a high interest in wanting to become a hero one day like the freedom fighters and high rowdy personaility while he was growing up, learning new things was always the first thing on his mind. Around the time he heard about Sonic ans Shadow, he read news papers and stories from Kouta and his team around maybe 10 or 11, which is when he saw them as rolemodels because they were hedgehogs like him. Because they were speical in their own way and he thought he was the only hedgehog with natural skills like them such as running and reflexes the way they do in combat. The super speed and power are an entirely different story, which he eventually picked up later on in his story. So is the way his body is built and his height for a hedgehog his age. It made it a little difficult for him to make friends at school during his time living with his foster family at brightwood city because of how strange he is. Possibly he wanted to be a hero because he wanted to be acknowledged and not be an outcast anymore. Now he just doesn't care that much anymore because he has more important things to worry about.

Kouta's team members were specialists in different fields like mechanics and marksmanship. Kiro picked up a thing or two along with them as Kouta was training him combat and swordsmanship. Although he was just a trainee, what really pushed him into further heights was the brightwood massacre, which happened on his 13th birthday and living in the future wasteland called the deadlands for two and a half years. He doesnt know how or why he ended up over a thousand years in the future, but part of his story his figuring out how it happened and finding the people responsible behind everything. So he just picked off from what he learned and sharpened his skills through his time of survival as he fought his way to get back home. It did drive him to near suicide, but he never forgot what he was taught in finding hope at the lowest point and never giving up from his master and the examples he learnedly from the stories of the freedom fighters. In the future, he learned something bad is going to happen to mobius and hes trying to stop the events leading up to the world becoming the deadlands from unfolding. Even though he knew he could no longer become a hero anymore, he accepted his fate and chose to live as the outcast he always was to find the truth behind everything as soon as he made it back to his original time period.


Starting by tracking down two people who are working behind the scenes that are plotting these events to occur. One in the GUN and one he knows well In the Freedom Fighters. Thats why he broke into GUN as the metal angel and stole that project. It was part of thier scheme.
And that's only the first part of his story. And yes, he's still undergoing vigorous training to hone on his wind abilities that are charged by the ring power the power sword wields and physical training for his body to get used to the demonic chaos energy so the side effects don't hit him hard during his fights, which has been extremely difficult for him. He still doesn't know anything about the stone's power or origin, but the hooded woman perfers to spectate him a little longer to see if he can figure a few things out on how things go the way he is now , although he prefers not to use it no matter what. But there will come times when he'll have no choice, even though he has no control over it.
This is something I have not mentioned in the profile since maybe id let you all find out more about him as you rped with him, but I guess ill let just this little spoiler slip.

What you're making then, is actually going beyond a character profile. You're attempting to create a story/arc/plot revolved around your character and the future he's attempting to save. This is a predicament in a way because it counteracts the future that Silver comes from, unless we're going by a multiverse sort of situation where Kiro went to a different future from Silver's own. Otherwise the world wouldn't be a wasteland, it would still be a world engulfed in Iblis's flame and destruction even if it were much more than 200 years that Silver came from because Iblis's flame is endless.

You're putting a little bit of every character into one. Him having similar/but not exact/ techniques like Sonic, him going to the future and than coming back to the past to "save the future from disaster" like Silver, and in the future he befriends an elder scientist and his daughter exactly like Shadow had done with Gerald and Maria. I won't question your creativity in it all, but you're taking bits and parts of other unique characters and putting them into your own, though they are being tweaked a bit.

There can't really be "spoilers" to a character because what you may attempt to add/reveal later on, may not even be allowed and may be against the entirety of the guild. That's why arcs and plots are thought up and shared with the entire guild. To make sure everyone is for the idea, rather than throwing everyone into the unknown. Otherwise there might turn out to be several more characters supposedly from a "destroyed future" and hoping to save that future. Things would get out of hand. Metal Angel trying to search out and exact revenge on the ones that killed his family and friends is something personal and well put and he can still be searching for them throughout the rp and gain friends that may help him out, but having him trying to save the future from disaster by interfering with events that lead up to that future, is much more vast and is already being done with Silver from the future.

To make it more compatible if you'd like, he could be from nearly 300 years in the future instead. Things are still in chaos and Iblis's fire is everywhere, but perhaps there would still be some barren wastelands where those half metallic overlords are trying to survive. if you've watched Fist of the North Star, it could be something similar to that to make his future more compatible. However, the part that Kiro could be trying to save, is that perhaps some evil entities aim to destroy the planet itself and right before they accomplished it in that future that Kiro was in, Kiro managed to teleport back to his own time. Later figuring out that the plan to annihilate the earth had something to do with G.U.N, Eggman's Empire, or the Freedom Fighters. Or a select few working together from all three factions? He could also learn a bit of Silver's own mission from preventing the world from becoming engulfed in flame by Iblis's awakening. Perhaps he got word of it from the future itself, or finds out more details about it from those who know Silver.

True Kiro is a complex character with a complex story but I'm leaving a lot out so it doesn't mess anything up with the cannon story of the guild I assure you. True I referanced him from a few canon characters, but it was to make him a resoucful asset and to give him more options for different adventures for him. My real referances are from different animes and videogames. In fact, I don't think his actual arc is going to take place in this guild or any rp unless your okay with it. I'm just telling what his situation is so we can work out how things will go. Right now, he's only in the middle of introduction and ill be updating his profile depending on what you agree with in his story.....if Kiro's story ever gets that far. Reguardless, I wont deny that Kiro has his own stand alone story and he wants no one involved unless the strings of fate have made other arragments. But I'm sure we can work something out which is why I left out so much so it wont cause any insecurities . There are many ways to connect the dots. So I'm taking baby steps at this

And I tried to make sure to take every precaution that it doesn't disrupt anyone else's story. Your idea sounds very good, but i think we need to talk to who ever is playing as silver about that first. There are different alternate time lines and they are always changing every step they take. The book A Sound of Thunder or the Movie the terminators series. Anything could change, even if its a small step. That's why I put Kiro so far into the future so it wont mess with Silver's future. Silver's future could have lived on or not between that large gap between time or time lines up until the deadlands. If it were that close with Silver's future, it would look like he failed in defeating iblis and his future's fate was sealed and i didnt want that to complicate the person who might play as him. So I made sure to make it look like he still has a chance for his story. And now that Kiro used the chaos emeralds to go back home, he defeated the future he faced and turned it into a possible outcome instead of a sealed fate. Right now its only a game of chance with him as long as he's still breathing. So no one will know what will happen. Everything comes down to the present and the endless possibilities that'll come its way. That's the best asset in creativity. Endless possibilities.

Anyway, I'm just saying that what ever happens, we can make it work in everybody's favors.

Right now let just go with where our characters are at now and well cross that bridge when we come to it. In fact, I wont be making any of my character's main story developments any further than where he's at now in the profile. Just his introductions and his development in his personal life situations like school and how to coop with his current condition as he continues his adventures as a mercenary and crossing paths with other canon characters. And I'll be sure to let you know so we can work out how their plots can interact  

[Sazie Chan]

Will this guild be rebuilt or updated someday? I miss everyone  

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Sazie Chan

Will this guild be rebuilt or updated someday? I miss everyone

I hope so, I'm always here xd
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