FMA OC Amala

[Misuki24]

This is my OC, Amala. I'm still working on her backstory, but her basic story is she is 21, can use alchemy on her staff to turn it into different combat weapons made from materials in the ground and she witnessed the Amestrian soldier shoot the Ishvalan child.

She lost both her parents, her grandmother, her two younger sisters, a younger brother and 2nd older brother in the war.

The eldest brother, 3rd eldest brother and grandfather are safe in a small Ishvalan village.

Amala is searching Amestris for Scar because she believes that he is disgracing all Ishvalans, making people think they are nothing but savages. She hates the Amestrian Gov., but does not think that attacking them is not the way to handle the situation. All she wants to do is bring him back to Ishvala and punish him for his crimes.

Also, I decided to pair her with GreedLing because they both have similar personalitites, but are still complete opposites.

Would love feedback ^__^  

[Chaos Fanatic]

Hey cool character design! ^^

It's nice to see OCs that look like they would fit into the actual universe of FMA, and not some Mary-Sue writer's idea of their perfect universe. Her clothes and overall character just seem to match perfectly! (I wish that I could draw like that...maybe I could ask for a semi-affordable commission with Gaia gold? ^^ wink

I think that the only think that you really need to work on is her personality, and establish some of the relationships that she has with family and friends! It makes her very interesting, and also kinds of give me insight on how my character would get along with her!

But overall, great job! I can't wait to start RP-ing!  

[Misuki24]

Thanks for the replay. I am still working on her relationships with her family and other FMA characters. I have a character description typed up and only put down the basics of her personality.

I'm glad you like it and I would love to do a commission for you. I don't have a price range. The only other commission I did the person paid 50,000 gold. But that's what he offered.

Send me a PM if you want a commission and we can work out a fair price ^___^  

[Chaos Fanatic]

Alright! PM sent, thanks! ^^