I will probably post most of my poetry in here. Criticism is welcomed and encouraged here as long as it is constructive, not attacking. Hope you like what I have to say. Here goes:
I'm happy for her
So why do I feel so sad
It's not like I want to feel this
Because it only makes me mad
I'm glad to see her move on
So why don't I feel like I belong
In a world
Where happiness can coexist
With the evils and stresses
Of life thrown to abyss
Amidst the twist of life's blissful ignorance
I find relief when I know less
It is when I learn when I find pain
And gain nothing of the same value
And strain myself finding the truth
That I never wanted to know
The first 5 lines I'm probably going to change to make it more adaptable for a song and more people can connect with. But this is it for now. Also I have used end rhyming quite a bit so I was experimenting with rhyming within my lines. Tear it apart for me.
Starlight Canopy
Roleplayers, writers, artists... All are welcome in Starlight Canopy! Here is a place to let all of your creative energy flow.
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