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Lunaire Stella

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Posted: Sun Oct 26, 2008 11:58 am


	heck yeah i wanna be her heck yeah i wanna be awsome mann

Posted: Sun Oct 26, 2008 1:08 pm

lol okay xD u can be her

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Lunaire Stella

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Posted: Sun Oct 26, 2008 2:09 pm


	wooho whas my name? ill put u in my story too xd

Posted: Sun Oct 26, 2008 3:50 pm


	well considering alice is already part of twilight and imma tryinng to st stay away from those names ill make ur name nikki xD o.o

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Lunaire Stella

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Posted: Sun Oct 26, 2008 4:14 pm


	lol ok then ill waitr till ur done hurry i waqnna read it xD

Posted: Sun Oct 26, 2008 4:24 pm


	u wanna hear the part were u come in??

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Lunaire Stella

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Posted: Sun Oct 26, 2008 4:26 pm


	heck yeah xD

Posted: Sun Oct 26, 2008 4:41 pm

lol well here u go:
i ran into kevins arms. he faced the leader, faceing the tazer at him. "state ur bessnis" "were only here to get alex" "Well u cant have her" i hide my face in his shoulder not wanting to see what happend next "well boy there u r misstakein" he said while him and the 5 dudes pulled out a gun. kevin put his face down by mine "atlest we die together" he whisperd. just then i heard the guns shoots. his powers cant work against 5 bullets can they?? i dough more then 3.i felt nutting. could all the bullets hit him?? i looked up. there waza bubble around us. i touched it. little lighting bolts ran toward my finger. "k-k-k-kevin uh...." "r we dead??" "why dont u look urself." he lifted his head he went wide eyed. he touched it. it turned white and disolved. the lerox were wide eyed now.
................a girl waz walking toward us. she wore a black and white shirt with skulls on it and a black and white checkerd skirt with a skull belt she had brown hair and black and white matching sneakers. she folded her arms acrost her chest. me and kevin turned toward her "who r u??" the lerox leader said "im ur worstest nightmare." she said while walking 3 feet infront of him. we faced her. she raised her hand in V and the bubble reapperd. she mummbled something and everything disapperd a few minutes later we were in my room. i looked around then back at her she waz gone

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Posted: Sun Oct 26, 2008 5:10 pm

You got talent, but because of all the errors
it makes it almost annoying to read in my opinion.

Posted: Sun Oct 26, 2008 7:11 pm

lol thx

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Lunaire Stella

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Posted: Sun Oct 26, 2008 8:02 pm


	yeash write simpelierrr i cant understand some but yay im in the story write more write more xD and chris lol finallu xD

Posted: Sun Oct 26, 2008 8:24 pm

this is the next part and all i hav left:
just then my door bursted open. me and kevin quickly turned toward the door. it waz my sister. " i knew i smelled something" she smiled wickedly walkin into my room. "get the hell out sis" i said walking over to her. she looked down at me. "move it pip squek" i pushed her outta my room making her smash into the hallyway's wall. i slamed my door shut and locked it. i looked down at myself and scowled. "man imma mess" kevin laughd. i walked ova to my walk-in closet and opend it. the only thing left waz a couple pairs of pants, a yellow sun dress and 2 pairs of shoes
.........................i grond. "wehers all ur clothes??" "in the suitcase downstairs by the door." i walked in, grabed the dress and a pair of pants and went to take a shower. wehn i finished and had put the clothes on i kicked my dirty clothes into the launder shoot and went back to my room. kevin waz messing with my music box on my night stand. he looked up at me and struggled to put the box down accidentaly droping it. i laughed and walked ova to him. "here" i said, bending down and picking up the box. i put it back into his hands and looked up at him. we stared at each other for a minute then kevin kissed me. i grabed his hand and pulled him ova to my bed and sat down. he sat down beside me and pulled me onto his lap
........................."you look...........whoa" he said then laughed lightly.he kissed my neck, i laughed .there waz a light knock on the door. me and kevin looked at it. "come in" kevin said. the door opend and Arin waz there. "hey" he said in a low voice. "hi..."

thats about all that i hav written

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Lunaire Stella

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Posted: Sun Oct 26, 2008 8:46 pm


	i onl get 1 part?

Posted: Sun Oct 26, 2008 8:47 pm


	xD ull come in again o.o i think ull be arins gf xD after all u WERE sent to protect alex o.o so ull come in again xD alex is always in trouble

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Lunaire Stella

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Posted: Mon Oct 27, 2008 5:47 pm


	yay oh and who is arin?? and im ur protector ahahx D

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