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[lilangelz428]

Here is where you can write a story and have people read it.
it can be romance, action, comedy, or any other genre you can think of.

PG-13 and above please. ^^  

[Lunaire Stella]

i woke up sitin up yawining, a damp warsh rag droped on my leg "shes up!!" i heard someone yell and kevin came runing down the stairs towards meh

"finnaly" he looked tired like he hasnt went to sleep in days

"how long waz i asleep??"

"for about 3 days"he said tiredly sitin beside meh pullin meh onto his lap "you look like u need a nap i pointed out"

"ya and i could really use one" he said laughin tiredly "u can say tat again" he closed his eyes and began to goh to sleep. i got up quietly , he grabed my wrist were doh u think ur going??" imma cold and i want grapes" "hurry" he let goh.

i ran into the kitchen and grabed some grapes.
i sat back down on him. he went back to sleep, i turned around in his lap ,smilin, reviling my vampire teeth stickin 2 grapes on them "now stop pulsing" i said to them (teeth)

i put my finger to his forhead. his dream waz peaceful, my face faded in and out, coming and going.he waz asleep for about a hour until i accidentaly fell backwards hittin my head on the coffee table. i pushed the coffee table alittle to hard slaming it into the wall cauzeing it to break "evil table" i said rubbin the back of my head

"what did u doh?? my moms going to freak wehn she sees this!!" i went wide eyed relizing kevin woke up

"imma sorry" i tryed to look innocent

"dont give meh tat look" he waz yellin now " you broke it and imma going to gt blamed!!!" i could feel tears crowdin up in my eye

"d-d-do y-y-you want meh to l-l-leave??? stammering a ovise clue for cryin. i got out without him repliing not caring wat he said and ran out the door and acrost the street to the park.

i sat under a tree cryin my heart out. the only relationship tats lasted this long and its gone he'll never want meh back never. i struggled tryin not to let the vampire side gain control of meh.

"hey you" i heard a voice. it sounded sturn and worried.

"BACK OFF" i showed my vampire teeth to the voice. i lost control and i waz now a full fleged vampire but without the vinum "im not scared of you"

"back off now or ull regret it boy" a shap growl tore threw my throat "NO im not backin off"

"wrong mistake boy" i jumped at the voice still couldnt see, couldnt renimber who it waz just knew two things: i waz thirsty and he wouldnt goh away

oh noooess!! lol this is written by darkangelforeva and she wanted me to post it i hope u lyk it pleex comment on it xD  

[Umeboshii]

wow i think its amazing that u can write lyk that congrats on being an awsome writer!  

[Umeboshii]

omg thats so maazing i rly loove this story i lyk vampire and a girl one is even better u should lyk msk a book out of this xD that would be awosme lol id def read it  

[Lunaire Stella]

hey i already read that part and try using it in 3rd person lyk i and say kevin not u. but i still looove this part hes soo scared ahah  

[Lunaire Stella]

omg wrtiw write write so u can post it here i wanna read morwe xD  

[Lunaire Stella]

kay i got extremely bored so then here we go xD

Nikoru rushed into the main hall. and screamed "mother! i refuse to marry Sir Eric!" she folded her arms across her beautiful pink dress and poted.

"u must it hs already been arranged. if u do not want another war to break out between north and south Japan then u better do as ur told and get married to sir Eric" queen Rosalie said.

"but i do not love him, and im only 15. im way too young to get married dont u see?" she asked with a hopeful look in her eyes.

"i dont want another war in my country." her mother said is a cold tone.

"but mother, please." she begged she had fallen to the floor now and held her face in her hands. and started to sob.

"your tears wont work here young lady ur getting married and thats the end of it. ur going to keep peace between this country and ur gonna have power now go to ur room!" she screamed pointing at the door.

nikoru slowly got up and ixed her dress then swiflty stomped out of the room. she threw the doors open and stomped away. she didnt turn left to go the stepwelll to her room but instead turned right and walked out of her palace. she walked west towards the forest west of her palace. she trudged into the forest and kept walking till she found a giant apple tree. she looked up there was one apple just in her reach she reached on her tippy toes but couldnt reach it.

she sretched her arm out as far as it would go and she still couldnt reach it. she stood flat of her feet and looked up at her arm streched out above her. the tears started coming down but she didnt wipe them away. in one week she would be married at 15 to someone she hasnt even met. her hands started to shake along with her body as she sobbed. she fiannyl looked down at the ground and closed her eyes when she felt someone behind her. she shot her eyes open and looked up. she saw another arm alongside hers ociking the apple she had reached for.

he picked it easily from the tree and nikoru slowly turned around to face someone dressed in peasent clothes. nice peasent clothes but peasent clothes all the least. she turned around and looked at the apple he was holding out to her adn then up to his eyes. he was several inches taller than her. she looked up shocked. she still had tears streaming down her cheeks. she looked at his face finally and he had long blonde hair and metalic blue eyes. he was very hdsome to say none the least and she looked at herself. her hair was strewn across her face and her dress torn at the bottom as she ran threw the fallen branches.

she looked back up to his face and then to the apple she slowly reached out her hand and took the apple from him. she tried to smile but nothing came. she loooked down again and started crying again. then she looked up and flinched as she held out his hand and brushed her hair off her face. she stood there shocked as he smiled at her. she couldnt speak so she just stared and hled the apple silently in her hands.

uh yeah i have the rest but i gotta go tell me wut u think xD

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[lilangelz428]

i suck at writing stories.
i will also do my best to read everybody's stories.
i have been a rather lazy reader lately, so sorry,
i will read the awesome stories soon enough.
and ill do my best to comment.  

[Lunaire Stella]

please comment quikcly cuz i cant remeber wut else the rest of it is fer must longer and i wont write til i get feedback lol  

[Lunaire Stella]

omg thats awsome lol >.<

i wanna write mroe of my story but i got a vollyball game tomorrow so im rly tired lol