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See the leaves fall outside the window?
What if I fall with them?
What if I just let go?
Would you care?
Would you even notice my absence?
See the petals floating away?
What if I just float away with them?
Just let the breeze take me away?
Would you care?
Would you even notice I'm gone?
See that person dieing?
What if I died to?
Just closed my sees and left?
Would you care?
Would you even notice my departure?
- by XXXPoisonLoverXXX |
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- | Submitted on 08/07/2011 |
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- Title: Would You?
- Artist: XXXPoisonLoverXXX
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- Date: 08/07/2011
- Tags: would dontcare heartbroken
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Comments (1 Comments)
- Decoverly Pox - 09/02/2011
- Better to focus on the leaf, the petal, the dying person, concrete images will get your point across with oomph. You've got the emotion, now work it. Cheers!
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