Italian Sonnet Walk Away

• Artist: Genesis v6
• Description: its my first one feed back please!
• Date: 03/15/2011
• Tags: italian sonnet walk away

Is it worth it to harm someone else?
Is it worth it to act like your cool?
Is it worth it to get yourself in trouble?
Is it worth it to have harm happen to you?
Is it worth it to disappoint your mother?
Is it worth it to have regret in yourself?
Is it worth it to think that you need a last chance?
Is it worth it to have people think of you as a jerk?

No you don’t want to harm someone else.
It’s not a good reason to act cool in front of friends.
It’s not a good reason to get suspended over it.
You would never want to disappoint your mother.
You would not want strong regret in yourself.
You would not want people to think of you as a jerk.

Comments

[thereimade1]

Rather bland. It's a good first effort, but maybe you should spruce it up with some metaphors for the "effects" of the persons' actions. For instance a bear clawing at a bee-hive. Yeah, the honey's there, but so are the bees!