You

• Artist: mmelty
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• Date: 12/31/2010
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YOU

You've laughed at us,
abandoned us,
mistreated, used, and spat
on us,

I'm sick...
of your ways,
tired....
of you mind games,

It's not a trick it's really
how I want it....
I've had enough of
this....

You just gloat,
you never lose....
you never feel the pain
of my wounds....
the scars make you scoff,
when I bleed I wipe it off,
on my own...

I'm so sick of you meeting me
halfway,
done with sharing the blame,
when you...you, you, you have
lost your way....
and I...I, I have lost my mind...
it's not a lie it's really
how I want it...
I've had enough and I'm
gonna stop this...
you are,
not one of mine....

you've insulted us,
abused us,
broken and messed
with us....
but you've done it for the last time....

I'm so sick of you....

Comments

[mmelty]

That's because it's not a poem, it's song lyrics, I was just putting them where the notes are held longer.

[viper_353]

Good Poem. All the ellipses though are a bit distracting from the poem. If it's an effect you're going for then it's probably working great! But otherwise maybe use commas to indicate a long pause? Cause that's not exactly what they're meant for.~ But good poem anyway!!!