Lost is right

• Artist: ShySnowWhiteAnon
• Description: This is something I just wrote. It's not about anyone I know. It just came to me.
• Date: 08/13/2010
• Tags: lost alone with

I'm lost in a moment,
I'm lost in your smile,
So hold me close darling,
If just for awhile.
I'll dance through you memories,
I'll sing through your word,
Cos' you know I'm emotion,
And I want to be heard.
Now I walk through the evening,
And talk through the day,
With me by your side,
You'll know just what to say.
I'll wander through the morning,
And whisper through the night,
I'm the sercret of first love,
Look at her and you know I'm right.

Comments

[Saffrony Paprika]

It had it's strong points and its weak points, but very well put together. The ending, I think, could use a little work, but other than that I like it very much. ^^ (And that's saying A LOT since I usually find most of Gaia's literature community to be incomprehensible numbskulls who write like 2nd graders.)

[Robotic Purple]

aww its so cute smile

[Chelly17]

Omgosh this is really really good... i love it!