Pleasure and pain coinside

• Artist: Phobos Dominus
• Description: when you feel pleasure, The pin will ensue
• Date: 07/25/2010
• Tags: pleasure pain coinside

My father used to say,
That love is very sweet,
And when you find it,
You will crave it,
He was right on one thing,
I do crave it,
But its not very sweet,
It is sour,
Like opening your mouth and pouring in salt,
Biting into your tounge to taste the blood,
Or chewing an orange still green from the tree of deadly poisons,
It is a sin so irrestible that i would rid my body of flesh to atain it,
I would remove my own eyes to feel it,
And tear out my heart to rid myself of it,
It is my pain,
And my pleasure.

Comments

[iVulgarThrust]

5/5, I really like what you did with the length when you got to the grittier stuff.

[Phobos Dominus]

No for 3 reasons... 1: you use yew instead of you ... yew is a tree not something to address someone by 2: I don't like to take my work public... 3: you probably already stold thisone so whats it matter?

[ieatRAiNBoWzzzz]

Hi, I have a website where I post poems and photography from people and myself. And I was wondering if yew wldnt mind me posting this on there. I wont steal it I promise. If yew dont mind then send this poem to me in a pm along with any other 1s yew have[yew dont have to]
--Kiana <3

[XxDriven by InsanityxX]

nice 5/5 ^_^

[Dorky displeasure]

nice poem ^^ 5/5