Darkness and Light

• Artist: Kuro Yukimura
• Description: I got bored in Lit class one day so I decided to scribble down a few poems. I was having many mixed emotions that day so that kind of effected what I wrote... I know it isn't perfect but I thought I did an okay job. Don't be rude or flame, but you can use constructive critisism.
  
  Oh, and just to say... I've never really written poetry before.
• Date: 07/13/2010
• Tags: darkness light poem conflict

Darkness, Light
both dancing in unison
arguing, fighting
craving for your attention

Which side you choose,
which path you take,
it's up to you;
what dream will you chase?

Darkness is destruction,
Light is creation,
choose the right path
do not crumble from the opposing's wrath

Stand firm,
battle for your life;
which path will you choose,
Darkness or Light?

Comments

[flyys]

Good idea. Poem is great i'll put a 5/5 :3

but i disagree. Both darkness and light are destruction and creation. for creation to happen in this world, there must be destruction

but this is not true for the Human world. We can create without destruction. These Win Win situations make us better than Physics and nature. But we choose to go to nature and bind ourselves to the law of logic. However, some day, people will open their eyes and find that darkness and light are not the only ways to go.

[MyKitKat18]

Amazing. I wrote a poem like this but yours is much better. Its real good. Great job smile

[Blackheartsd]

i like this poem alot and btw id pick darkness

[I screwed Princess Peach]

This is really good. I would say this is like my poem two sides, but you talk about chasing dreams. idk yet what mine truly means. XP anyways, nice job.