love

• Artist: rosedragon96
• Description: his goes out to my boy friend
  i really do hope that our love is true
• Date: 07/04/2010
• Tags: love

one day i was just walking the street
and i did not no that i would meet
the boy who would hold close in his arms

so i just keep going
while not knowing
and there he was with all his charms

he had jet black hair so fine
and when he looked at me it must have been a sign
i knew that he really wanted to say hi

he told me he would always be there for me
and that hed never break my heart

i really hope that is true
for i really love u

Comments

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Very cute with a good rhyming technique. However, it does not seem that it has bloomed quite yet, so maybe you could keep up the good work and make this into a more matured piece? I believe that this is good for far though. Keep on writing.