Help Me

• Artist: xxWillie16xx
• Description: Itz as if ur in an army mans perspective n injured everyone around u n u feel as if u r 2 blame... Like or hate, comment....
• Date: 05/24/2010
• Tags: helpme

Can you help me?
I think i'm trapped
My partner is missing
I'm being attacked

I can feel the heat
The fire in my face
I can't move my body
Stuck in this place

Help Me! Help Me!
I can see you! Please?
If I surrender
Will they be displeased?

Farewell to my life
My kids and my spouse
My partner and friends
I let you all down

I wanted to be remembered
As someone better than the rest
But how could it ever happen
When I couldn't get past this test

I am ashamed of myself
Putting my partner at risk
I feel I deserve to die
It is my last desired wish

Comments

[XxMentalFilledNinjaxX]

Nice poem, really lets you into the narrator and lets you see how he feels and how much guilt he holds within him. It's sad, too sad for my liking, but over all, besides the sad parts, it was a good poem. 5/5 hands down.

[lilcnt1]

my boyfriends marine that served two tours one in iraq and one in afganastan this is ecatly what he went threw this is still how he feels thispoem is amazing my dear :] five stars without a doubt