Poisoned love

• Artist: its kait
• Description: This is a poem I wrote because of my boyfriend leaving me. It was an emotional time for me and I wrote this poem. It's been taped to my wall next to my bed every night, and today I decided to put it out for people and see how they react or think. People, the man i talk about in this is my boyfriend again, but this was during a harsh breakup of ours. I love him, but yet he hurt me bad. I hope you enjoy this and comment! Thanks.
• Date: 05/23/2010
• Tags: poem from girl

Everyday your away,
I like here wide awake.
No emotion, a soulless face,
can't let go, need your embrace.

How can I live?
you feel like a myth.
Stop teasing me!
I won't let you in.
I try to run, but I can't break through,
Its like you want me to be with you.

I tear out my hair,
I cut my wrists,
I scream out loud until my lungs resist.
I cry for you,
I need us as two,
Oh baby, if only you knew.

You've come back?
only to find my heart in a crack.
I told you not to touch me,
just let me be,
Im too scared to flee.

Your external love,
our immortal bond
I love you fiercely,
my dearest lover.

Comments

[Peachy_Nova]

Oh wow that was sinfully beautiful. Its amazing that you put this feeling into words so wonderfully.

[its kait]

thank you so very much.. I just read over it and started bawling for some reason. :/ It was a pretty hard time for me.

[maydaymouse]

This was beautiful! An amazing first poem, keep writing!^^ 5/5 Rate back please?

[its kait]

thank you so so much. Its means a lot to me.

[Bloody_Prince_666]

yeah, it is pretty long like u said, but it is very good...im surprised this was ur 1st poem xD its REALLY good for a 1st poem

[Aki Hanabira]

You're welcome! :3

[its kait]

Oh im glad things worked out. Thanks for the great comment heart