I'm talking to you

• Artist: ShySnowWhiteAnon
• Description: Kinda from the point of view of a mother to her kids...
• Date: 05/20/2010
• Tags: talking

I am talking to you,
Don't pretend that you can't hear,
Don't plug your I Pod in,
Whenever I am near.

Don't think you can ignore me,
It's never worked before,
Oh for heavens sake did you have to,
Go and slam that door?

I'm tired of you not listening,
To anything I say,
You seem to treat me like a slave,
Who's always in the way.

Now I'm the busy one,
With better things to do,
If you need someone to listen,
Then I'm not the one for you.

Comments

[ShySnowWhiteAnon]

I just took loads of things my mum always says and put them together. I'm glad you like it though.

[Heulwen Lyall]

hmmm....I'm sure my mother has felt this way before 5/5

[Idiosyncratic Quirk]

I got the matronly vibe from this immediately. This is excellent. The rhythm and rhyme scheme are impeccable and the message is rather refreshing. :3 5/5