Fire

• Artist: DreamHalo
• Description:
• Date: 05/08/2010
• Tags: fire

Twas the strangest dream
There were bright orange flowers, it would seem
They dance with dark, billowing smoke
My eyes and throat begin to burn as I choke
I know I should go, but I wish to see the end
I wished to see the final dance,
but I never got the chance,
Darkness came and I never saw again
And that my friend, was my end.

Comments

[Starsaparilla]

wonderful really 5/5

[lovemeri]

This poem was very interesting to read

[DreamHalo]

Wat would u suggest for a title? (seriously, I'm bad with titles, so I'm open to suggestions) The poems s'posed to be about a fire, hence the title.

[King of Trash]

interesting little poem you've written here. i think a different title would be better, but that's just my opinion... i liked the dream aspect as well... 4/5... not bad.