I Love You

• Artist: Xx_BloodyDeath_Wish_xX
• Description: Everyone kept gettin confused on how to read it. So I re-wrote it both forwards and the flipped way.
  
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• Date: 05/07/2010
• Tags: love

What I ment the entire time was
And...I really want you to know
I can't talk when you're around
As your presence leaves me gasping for air
My body begins to fell numb
And whenever I'm around you
My heart races like a ragging bull
I'm unable to stop my impulse's
I kiss you softly upon your cheek
As I walked closer for the final time
Heavily gazing upon your beautiful eyes
While we both stand in silence
I take a couple steps back
There lays something heavily upon our minds
No one wants to talk first, but we both know
You wont be coming back next year
Just that one special thing I wanted to say
I would've said it in the beggining.



Now let's flip it:



I would've said it in the beggining.
Just that one special thing I wanted to say
You wont be coming back next year
No one wants to talk first, but we both know
There lays something heavily upon our minds
I take a couple steps back
While we both stand in silence
Heavily gazing upon your beautiful eyes
As I walked closer for the final time
I kiss you softly upon your cheek
I'm unable to stop my impulse's
My heart races like a ragging bull
And whenever I'm around you
My body begins to fell numb
As your presence leaves me gasping for air
I can't talk when you're around
And...I really want you to know
What I ment the entire time was


I Love You!

Comments

[Coolyei]

Well done. Very creative, almost perfectly fluid, and cyoot, too. 4/5, but only for grammar errors and the occasional hiccup.

[Xx_BloodyDeath_Wish_xX]

thankz! ^-^

[Tragoedia]

Creative!

[ii-Samiiraii]

thats super good...u should keep on writing poems just like i do..u got talent!