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• Artist: EmoKisses-x
• Description: The title is
  She'll Write You A Love Letter Darling
  I couldnt fit it in the space provided for the Title.
  I was just randomly thinking of the phrase
  "She'll write you a love letter darling"
  and I made up the rest.
  I actually like this one..not to boast or anything. :]
  I like my repitition & rhyming pattern.
  
  But I wanna know your thoughts,
  so comment & rate PLEASE(:
  <3
• Date: 04/17/2010
• Tags: love hate blood suicide loveletter

She'll write you a love letter darling,
like one you've never read before.
She'll write you a love letter,
with her blood that's drained out on the floor.

She'll write you a love letter darling,
one of love mixed with hate.
She'll write you a love letter,
because she hoped she'd be more than just a date.

She'll write you a love letter darling,
because she was sure she was your only.
She'll write you a love letter,
because you left her so lonely.

She'll write you a love letter darling,
like one you've never read before.
She'll write you a love letter,
with her blood that's drained out on the floor.


4/18/10

Comments

[EmoKisses-x]

Thanks again ! (:
<3

[Echo Ligeia]

I like the repetition and rhyming pattern too. ^.^ It really is good because it keeps bringing up this visceral image of a letter made in blood; it highlights the irony. This poem could possibly be improved by making the syllables match up too, in some kind of pattern, but I recognize the difficulty in doing that without losing your ideas. All in all I will give it a 3/3, which is what I give to a good, solid poem. smile

[EmoKisses-x]

Please comment..
I haven't gotten a comment in a while,
and I want opinions on this one.
<3