Uncertain

• Artist: Night Angelic
• Description: Well the title kinda gives it away but when I wrote this poem I was really uncertain what I wanted to do with my life. Please read on and leave comments if you like but please no negative comments.
• Date: 03/31/2010
• Tags: uncertain

What am I going to do
Where am I going to go
My life is so uncertain
I a not sure which road to go

I look down the paths to see what might happen
Both have two outcomes
Both are difficult
Both are treacherous to do

The path to my right the road to sucess
The path to my left the road to happiness
Which to take I am uncertain
Oh how I wish I could choose

The path to sucess is a rewarding one
Career is a sucess and awsome
The path to happiness is a greatful one
Filled with a faimly who loves me and cares for me

I don't know which to choose
For I am uncertain
Please help me choose
Oh I need a answer

Comments

[Night Angelic]

Thank you Panda master.

[L_MTmule]

Happiness is always more important than success. You can be happy, and that in itself is success. You can be successful, and not so much be happy. Remember this advice from the Panda... As far as your poem goes, it's a good question often asked. It's a universal idea for the poem, and it's one a lot of people can understand. Only one thing, though, is that I would try to change some of the words, because it gets a little jumbly at certain points. Overall, though, good job!