Extrinsic Enlightenment

• Artist: Tagga
• Description: A small bit I wrote in a good mood. It is not at all about love, as one would expect, but about becoming one with your mind and putting logic before belief.
• Date: 02/17/2010
• Tags: extrinsic

Come with me on a trip through gravity.
We can cruise the light of the stars that make us glow.
I will write music to show my fidelity
So I can see your love from a violin bow.

Rainbows and colors surrounding the air.
As a friendly beast carries us home.
This opportunity is lovely yet rare,
Still we must find the purest of hills to roam.

Grab my hand and tread through lore.
We can escape to abyss and never be free.
Walk through the clouds and the azure.
Or just stay here and live in tranquility.

Please dip your crown.
Grab the zeal.
Relinquish your frown.
Spirits heal.

Comments

[seven_Sin_incarnate]

the flow is very smooth and the rhymes dont feel forced at all. i love it! you should check out my work and tell me whta you think.