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Sometimes
i get angry
sometimes
i say stuff i dont mean
sometimes
i make those i love cry
sometimes
i look up in the sky
sometimes
i think only of you
sometimes
i remember the things that you do
sometimes
i remember how you broke my heart
sometimes
i remember how you acted the part
sometimes
I remember the good times we had
sometimes
i remember that they didnt last
sometimes
all i can remember is the hurt
sometimes
all i can remember is how you burnt
you bunt my heart
and you did from the start
sometimes
i hate what you do
and sometimes
I remember that i dont love you
- by Luna De Fuego Caelum |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/14/2010 |
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- Title: Sometimes
- Artist: Luna De Fuego Caelum
- Description: I got bored so i wrote this. Its about a breakup. please comment. PS its a little repetitive.
- Date: 01/14/2010
- Tags: sometimes breakup heartbreak love
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Luna De Fuego Caelum - 01/16/2010
- yea i did think that i shouldnt have. But it had to be done, i didnt know anything but heart and part that rhymed with start. so yea.
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- Idiosyncratic Quirk - 01/15/2010
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The repetitivity was kinda necessary to create the both sides of each following line.
I disliked how you broke the rhythm at the end. =/
All in all, it was okay. =3 - Report As Spam
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