Soldiers end

• Artist: Krieg McFail
• Description: dont mind the spelling errors xP
• Date: 01/02/2010
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I waited for you.
All my life just for you.
Take my soul with you...

Death..
The coldest, kindest thing I can imagine...
When her arms finally tie around me..
I am in peace..

No more war..
No more fight.
No more blood..

The silence...
No more howling artillery fire..
Bullet storms, no more...
Just silence.....

Before, the heaven's gates were open to me too..
Now, the deepest pitts of hell await.
How many have perished before me, I do not know...
Or care...

But if one is for sure..
I stand firm before my judgement.
I shall not yield!

Punishment.
What ever it is I'll take it.
For the countless numbers I've slaughtered, no punishment is too great....
For sin of this scale...
Nothing is......

Comments

[Krieg McFail]

thanks :3 gotta keep that in mind next time ^^

[ekitten614]

Nice! Love the topic! I would suggest getting rid of all the extra periods (definitely unnecessary) and possibly bringing the 'she' of the second stanza back in the end (if you can fit her in) to bring things full circle.