The Forest as Dark as Night

• Artist: Amongst The Enemy
• Description: A Poem a wrote for a project.
  Feel free to give me tip's, since I've always sucked at writing poems.
• Date: 12/30/2009
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The beasts hunt through the forest
As swift as assassins
You’ll soon be dead,

Whispering to one another they’ll give you a fright
For other than talking, they are masters of the night,

So you better start running
To find no escape
Cornered by the creatures with no last chance
Get ready to make a quick, last stand
At the Forest as Dark as Night.

Comments

[Non-Edible]

I really like how it is already! Good job even though you've always "sucked at writing." smile

[tinmcampy]

add something like ..
ash like snow .. falling down like rain ..
go on through the storm and you'll feel the pain ..
dark assassins are coming .. knights are growling ..
better give-up or you'll end up dying ..
.. something's not right for you to repent ..
.. instead beat the odd ones and go on trembling.. ..


.. kyahahha . ..