Tears

• Artist: book_lover01
• Description: I wrote tish poem when i was feelin really sad about breakin up with someone i relly liked.
  Hope u like it!
• Date: 12/10/2009
• Tags: tears

My tears come down like leaves in the Fall.
You took my heart, my love, my all.
When you left i felt so cold.
It was me you were supposed to hold.

Comments

[Reaper2601]

its pathedic and needs to be thrown in the tras so someone else doesnt have to read this pathedic excuse for the human language let alone peotry. if i could give it a zero i would.

[sparkling_white_stone]

really like it