Poem of the Day III SHATTERED

• Artist: kazmaru
• Description: i was feeling really down if you couldnt tell by the poem.
• Date: 12/08/2009
• Tags: poem shattered

crying in my dark corner
my heart is aching and sadness is its owner
weeping my mind in the blood
of heart with a "thud", "thud"
life has truly given up
stop it now or ill erupt
"sigh", "hum" woes way me
stop it now or i will bleed
all is done all is said
ill take my place
with the dead

kazmaru.

Comments

[bloodtearrose]

The entire concept is cliche and over-used. HOWEVER you conducted it well.
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