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No one could have guessed what was going on
She always acted like nothing was wrong
No one could have guessed that beneath she was dying
Every smile she faked inside she was crying
She was a brilliant actress so no one could guess
She could fake happiness with no signs of stress
Alone she sheds her blood soaked tears
It releases her anger her sadness and fears
No one could have guessed she was thinking of death
No one could have saved her before she took her last breath.
- by smile_andwave_girls |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 10/31/2009 |
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- Title: No one.
- Artist: smile_andwave_girls
- Description: Just a poem I wrote
- Date: 10/31/2009
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Comments (2 Comments)
- livingpyro - 11/19/2009
- That was lovely dear. I give 5/5 for artistic valure, 5/5 for grammar, and 6/5 for using your nogin XD
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- Miss-Grace-Murder - 11/18/2009
- Very good. I like the rthym and flow. Kept me reading all the way through. =] 5/5.
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